changes several <programlisting> and <command> sections to <screen>,
<literal> and <userinput> where required
PR: docs/77370 (slightly modified)
Submitted by: David Adam <zanchey@ucc.gu.uwa.edu.au>
entire range of FreeBSD versions that may be in use out there. The
tabular layout doesn't look exactly perfect, but this is a stylesheet
issue, which we can fix separately.
Some info by: mlaier
Discussed with: Brad Davis <so14k@so14k.com>
- put <application></application> around Syslogd
- move dot out from quotes
- explain "can be considered short" in comment (can be useful later)
- restart -> reload for re-reading syslog.conf
- Whitespace before punctuation was removed.
- Numbers below 10 are spelled out as words.
- Reworded some sentences and added missing words.
+ Added a note about periodically flushing firewall rules to make sure
one is not locked out while tinkering with rulesets.
PR: docs/76533
Submitted by: Brad Davis <so14k@so14k.com>
- Don't state that firewalls and stateful filtering will always
improve security, since that might not be the case.
- Change the Firewall Rulesets section to a more general Firewall
Concepts section.
- Remove some basic network text which the user should already know when
reading about more advanced topics, like firewalls.
- Miscellaneous rewording.
Reviewed by: -doc
Improvments by: remko, David Adam <zanchey@ucc.gu.uwa.edu.au>
new chapter all its own, currently in the 'network communications'
part as chapter 24.
Add a small paragraph at the bottom of the security chapter synopsis
noting that additional security topics are covered in the MAC chapter
and the Firewall chapter.
While here add some missing punctuation, cleanup the whitespace, add
missing </para> tags, add a synopsis, and of course
s/<sectN/<sectN-1/.