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Giorgos Keramidas
24df652a45 Move around the text of the Vinum introduction a bit, in an effort to
make more meaningful the text of the paragraph:

  <para><emphasis>Vinum</emphasis> is a so-called <emphasis>Volume
    Manager</emphasis>, a virtual disk driver that addresses these
    three problems.  Let us look at them in more detail.  Various
    solutions to these problems have been proposed and
    implemented.</para>

which seemed very out of place in the previous version of the text.

Noticed by:	ganbold@micom.mng.net
Patch by:	yours truly
2007-03-06 22:47:35 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
5ceef2839a Whitespace fixes for the vinum Handbook chapter, in preparation for
content changes which move some of the stuff around and include content
changes.
2007-03-06 22:45:14 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
6f2c143f5b Add missing 'of'.
Submitted by:	ganbold at micom dot mng dot net
2007-01-10 13:33:28 +00:00
Tom Rhodes
3f0d1b56f0 Do what I swore would be done:
o Remove 4.X information, this includes notes and sections.

o Update documentation to reflect 5.X and 6.X.

o In some areas, try to make the new content version agnostic.

o Skip areas stating "5.[0-5] and later" as it's relevant - we
need a better way to handle these.

For several items, I checked the NOTES files, manual pages,
CVS history, etc.

Discussed on:		-doc
A few ideas from:	remko
2006-05-30 23:08:25 +00:00
Remko Lodder
698a6ee299 Update the newfs example for the newer FreeBSD versions [1] and
list the old backward compatible instruction for FreeBSD
versions prior to 5.0.

Also the -v option does not work with versions starting
from 5.0.

PR:			docs/84409 [1]
Discussed with:		Daniel Gerzo <danger at rulez dot sk> [1]
2006-03-19 15:47:54 +00:00
Xin LI
bd204e39cd Correct a typo. 2006-03-19 15:34:34 +00:00
Joerg Wunsch
0572b0a819 Update the Vinum chapter to reflect the change to Gvinum while keeping
references to Vinum classic for the sake of people running older
systems.
2006-03-17 23:42:17 +00:00
Remko Lodder
85b4853fdb Fix Hiten's email address and split devicename into device name.
PR:			docs/77817
Approved by:		simon (mentor)
Submitted by:		Jesus R. Camou <jcamou at COX dot net>
2005-02-21 20:47:54 +00:00
Remko Lodder
8c9024e2ed 5.x -> 5.X & 4.x -> 4.X
PR:		docs/77782
Approved by:	simon (mentor)
2005-02-20 17:28:59 +00:00
Martin Heinen
36c11b8489 Improve the index:
- lowercase/upercase entries
- remove the entry "basics"
- cross reference readers with <see> to variants
- remove an entry from a footnote
- unify entries of kernel options
2005-01-11 12:34:29 +00:00
Simon L. B. Nielsen
84968d5644 Add emacs footers like the other chapters has. 2004-11-07 16:44:09 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
8af463c4d2 - Various markup fixes: for example, <programlisting></programlisting>
should be used instead of <para><literal></literal></para>, and
  <screen></screen> instead of <para><command></command></para>
- <screen> tags are not inline elements, so they should not be used
  inside of <para></para>
- s/4.x/4.X and some punctuation fixes
- Some device names fixes I missed in my previous commit
2004-08-11 17:07:40 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
9565589609 Devices name/node tagging is not consistent in the Handbook, it should
respect the following scheme:
- if the device name is /dev/foo --> <filename>/dev/foo</filename>
- if the device name is just foo --> <devicename>foo</devicename>
(See "4.2.5.7 Devices" from fdp-primer)
2004-08-11 16:24:26 +00:00
Martin Heinen
3454a56cdd Add missing userinput tags. 2004-08-08 13:03:55 +00:00
Ceri Davies
a669280d27 Update the synopsis.
PR:		docs/69644
Submitted by:	Kevin Kinsey
Reviewed by:	grog,le
2004-07-29 18:42:18 +00:00
Hiten Pandya
46e916b484 Greg Lehey wrote the entire vinum chapter, and not only the first section,
so correct attribution.
2004-07-22 06:06:34 +00:00
Murray Stokely
e3caf28e18 Add missing frame='none' to two tables. 2004-07-12 07:40:51 +00:00
Murray Stokely
5e500e8f15 Add width attributes to programlisting elements so that the font size
can be scaled appropriately without running off the page when the
programlisting contents contains over 100 characters per line.

Sponsored by:	FreeBSD Mall, Inc.
2004-07-09 08:17:34 +00:00
Ceri Davies
f589c4e5a5 Grammar police: "setup" is not a verb. 2003-11-05 10:36:56 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
fe4878a69d Add missing closing tags not found by nsgmls, and fix the case of some
tags.

PR:		docs/56231
Submitted by:	Denis Peplin <den@freebsd-doc.org.ru>
2003-08-31 16:41:36 +00:00
Ceri Davies
583831606d Capitalise titles as per the Chicago Manual of Style. 2003-07-13 20:36:54 +00:00
Hiten Pandya
eba5eae438 Replace UNIX&trade;' combination with the &unix;' entity.
Approved by:	des (mentor)
2003-06-12 21:35:02 +00:00
Chern Lee
d7e984062c British English -> American English:
recognise -> recognize

Typos/Spelling Mistakes:
occured -> occurred
utilites -> utilities
enscrambled -> scrambled

Misc:
timezone -> time zone
linux -> Linux
interconvert -> convert
swapspace -> swap space
2003-06-03 22:09:46 +00:00
Ceri Davies
8a78d205d6 Spelling and grammar fixups. 2003-05-22 00:00:19 +00:00
Joerg Wunsch
6efff8762a Finally, write down a section or two, and document how a Vinum volume
can be used for the root filesystem.
2003-05-13 11:18:47 +00:00
Murray Stokely
48e7898744 Capitalize section titles per Chicago Manual of Style. 2003-05-04 12:01:40 +00:00
Murray Stokely
27ba1359ad Whitespace changes for clarity.
Translators please ignore.
2003-05-04 11:45:58 +00:00
Murray Stokely
f8f3aa5727 Modify indexterms to be more consistent with other disk-related index
entries in other chapters.  Remove some rendundant indexterms.  Thanks
to Hiten for indexing this in the first place.
2003-05-04 11:37:58 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
87244b4a45 Remove files moved to share/images/books. 2003-04-11 09:34:49 +00:00
Peter Pentchev
1f359cbbab /tmp/msg 2003-01-12 18:20:55 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
2a55ba74a9 Use option tags for a command option and not command tags. 2002-10-24 14:36:16 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
18ba733e2a s/wd/ad for IDE device name. 2002-10-24 14:06:18 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
d4bcdd97c9 Use manual page entity for newfs(8). 2002-10-24 14:00:46 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
84aeaa34b4 Fix a punctuation issue. 2002-10-23 19:03:20 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
2173c0d0fe Add non-breaking spaces where needed. 2002-10-19 13:41:54 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
510bc475c4 Move a dot behind the footnote, so that it belongs to the
corresponding sentence.

PR:		docs/42045
Submitted by:	Christian Brueffer <chris@unixpages.org>
2002-08-26 21:22:48 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
2912a86246 Typo & grammar fixes.
Add <acronym>s.
Update disk speeds section.

PR:		docs/41934
Submitted by:	Christian Brueffer <chris@unixpages.org>
2002-08-26 00:09:07 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
e5fb6992b6 1. Be verbose the frst timethe term "kld" is mentioned.
2. Expand contractions.

PR:		docs/41661
Submitted by:	Martin Heinen <vincent@Kain.sumuk.de>
2002-08-22 00:26:16 +00:00
Ceri Davies
6afe4bfa08 Use screen elements where appropriate. 2002-08-18 12:26:28 +00:00
Ceri Davies
f1592fbbfc Whitespace changes for clarity.
Translators may ignore this commit.
2002-08-18 12:16:14 +00:00
Ceri Davies
c29f78cd6d Fix some spelling errors.
Move some text into a footnote where it belongs.
2002-08-18 11:56:03 +00:00
Tom Rhodes
7f53d1e93d grog did not contribute, he wrote. Lets reflect this fact.
Submitted by:	Hiten Pandya <hiten@uk.FreeBSD.org>
2002-08-14 05:45:48 +00:00
Tom Rhodes
b403d9de44 Add a vinum chapter.
Submitted by:	grog (docbook work done by Hiten Pandya <hiten@uk.FreeBSD.org>
2002-08-14 01:46:23 +00:00