1. s/Internet Software Consortium/Internet Systems Consortium/
2. Tighten up a few sections, improve wording, modernize terminology
3. Remove references to the make-localhost program which is long gone [1]
4. Update the included named.conf file to match current reality
5. Change all references to default TTL in the example zone files to refer
to the TTL for a negative response
6. Simplify the CNAME example
7. Update URLs
PR: docs/122604 [1]
Submitted by: keramida [1]
and give an example. In practice, including GENERIC and then simply
providing a few additional options or devices is the preferred way to
configure kernels now, rather than writing them from scratch (except
in embedded environments). This text could probably use some
refinement.
Suggested by: Richard Clayton <richard.clayton at cl.cam.ac.uk>
users; only advanced users now compile kernels. Expand rationale for
building a custom kernel: unused features still take up memory that
could be used by applications.
This is a rather lengthy patch, that attempts to fix several problems:
- Reduce repetition. There are several paragraphs in the original text that are repeated throughout the sections
- Markup fixes. Replace single quotes with <literal> tags, add <acronym>s and several other changes to improve markup consistency
- Convert to passive voice where possible, eliminate few first person references
- Several grammar and language fixes
- The original text implied that the same TCP packet would go back and forth between source and destination. Rephrase relevant paragraphs to clarify these are different packets
- Includes many fixes submitted in a PR [1] and a link fix submitted on -doc [2]
- Numerous other smaller changes, too many to mention here
PR: docs/131568 [1]
Submitted by: Chris Pepper <pepper@cbio.mskcc.org> [1]
Submitted by: Phillip Nordwall <Phillip.Nordwall@wwu.edu> [2]
Reviewed by: trhodes, keramida
* FreeBSD -> &os; in affected areas
* /dev does not populated by the scripts, it is not an on-disk file system anymore, so no need to mention it
* /tmp and /var/tmp are not necessarily linked, remove paragraph about creating /var/tmp
* /proc is not in fstab anymore
* remove another instance of /var/db/port.mkversion I missed in a previous commit
* /var gets populated by /etc/mtree/BSD.var.dist instead of a list 'var_dirs', which now include /var/at , /var/cron and /var/log
* Clarify the section about Apache a bit, mention that the default setup is fine
Reviewed by: remko, trhodes, keramida
Approved by: above
