- mention ZFS
- xorg instead of XFree86
- use most recent mergemaster messages in <screen> sections
stage_1.sh:
- use /dev/daXYZs1a to no longer require anti-footshooting warning
- Introduce TARGET and MAKEOBJDIRPREFIX variables
- remove FreeBSD version 4/5 relevant shell code
stage_2.conf.default:
- update somewhat ancient port list; openoffice 1 just doesn't cut it any more
stage_3.mk:
- update to closer reflect my current version
- Disable TOC generation in Makefile because in the original version it
does not make too much sense to have a one-item TOC
- Change structure of sections, move all the sect2 to level sect1; this
results shorter high-level sections, but it gives a more normal layout
- Mark up CUPS ports with <filename role="package"> to add Ports
Collection links for them
- Mark up group "cups" with <groupname>
- Fix a <programlisting> within a <para> situation
- Replace <filename> tags with <ulink> for local CUPS web interface
links
- Replace <literal> tags with <hostid> for "localhost"
- Mark up menu items with <quote> rather than <literal>
- Use <replaceable> elements where applicable
- Fix spelling
- Remove all verbatim quote symbols, replace them with <quote> elements
- Mark up make variables with <makevar> elements
- Mark up make targets with <maketarget> elements
Reviewed by: Chess Griffin <chess (at) chessgriffin (dot) com>
during its translation recently:
- Fix capitalization issues in titles according to the Chicago Manual of Style
- Update Manolis' e-mail address to his FreeBSD.org one
- Correct some misspelled words, like "filesystem" or "soft updates" according
to the word list in FDP Primer [1]
- Add <replaceable> elements to minor versions in "FreeBSD 7.X"
- Replace bogus <filename role="device"> markups with <filename
class="devicefile"> elements
- Rewrite "NGb" constructs to "N GB"
- Rename sysinstall's disk label editor to <application>Disklabel</application>
partition editor, in reflect of the corresponding sections of the FreeBSD
Handbook [2]
- Replace <keycap>up</keycap> and <keycap>down</keycap> markups with a more
general form, similar to the Handbook [2]
- Mark up user commands with <userinput> inside <screen> elements
- Use <filename> and <devicename> where applicable
- Fix typos (like "ads1s1d")
- Mark up Enter key with <keycap>Enter</keycap>
- Mark up Ivan Voras (ivoras@) with his now-official Handbook entity
- Mark up usernames with <username>
[1] http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en/books/fdp-primer/writing-style-word-list.html
[2] http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en/books/handbook/install-steps.html
Reviewed by: manolis, keramida
Approved by: gabor (mentor)
He is maintainer of x11-toolkits/gtkdatabox, x11-toolkits/slgtk (ports/125055),
devel/slglade (ports/126652) and x11-toolkits/slgtkdatabox (ports/126654).
Approved by: miwi (mentor)
- Remove deprecated listings of teams (since they were moved to [1] and
they are maintained at administration [2]):
- Core Team (section 2)
- Other FreeBSD Teams, like The FreeBSD Documentation Engineering Team,
The FreeBSD Port Management Team, and so on (section 3)
- Miscellaneous Hats, like The FreeBSD Bugmeisters and GNATS admins,
The FreeBSD Security Officers, and so on (section 4)
- FreeBSD Release Engineering Teams, like Primary FreeBSD Release
Engineering Team, AMD64 Release Engineering Team, and so on
(section 5)
- The FreeBSD Documentation Project, like Handbook Editor,
FAQ Editor, and so on (section 7)
- Who is Responsible for What, like CVSup Mirror Site Coordinator,
Postmaster, and so on (section 8)
- Move Adam Weinberger (adamw@) back to active developers
- Fix ordering of rnolan@ and sbruno@
- Add wes@ and imp@ to the Core Team Alumni
[1] http://lists.freebsd.org/pipermail/cvs-doc/2007-March/015350.html
[2] http://www.freebsd.org/administration.html
Discussed with: joel, remko (section 7), ache (section 8)
Reviewed by: joel
Approved by: gabor (mentor)
