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Author SHA1 Message Date
Tom Rhodes
1c9c0716d6 Wording and content enhancements.
Some content stolen from:	rwatson
2004-07-27 13:53:34 +00:00
Denis Peplin
e6c052b9c3 Fix crontab example for checkout every twelve hours 2004-07-13 06:21:04 +00:00
Denis Peplin
b25e777ec2 Slightly improve fixed rules description for Biba 2004-07-12 09:45:11 +00:00
Murray Stokely
d554acbbc3 Rewrite the synopsis. Merge two paragraphs into one. Start off this
chapter by talking about security features of FreeBSD, rather than the
history of the TrustedBSD project.
2004-07-12 05:29:37 +00:00
Murray Stokely
6ee331fa0a Technical corrections.
Confirmed with:	rwatson
2004-07-12 03:24:13 +00:00
Murray Stokely
c3cfdf0dca * Notes in <warning> should not begin with 'Please note that'. The
<warning> tag already expresses this information and so the text will
  be rendered appropriately.
* Improve wording in synopsis.
* Remove redundant sentences and simplify section about what will not
  be covered in this chapter.
* Omit unnecessary words and improve grammar as appropriate
* Remove redundant paragraph.
* Use serial comma in list of elements, as mandated by doc project primer.
2004-07-12 02:55:07 +00:00
Murray Stokely
1643cf6500 * This chapter makes no mention of downloading -CURRENT or -STABLE
sources with CVSup, so remove that pre-requisite from the synopsis.

* Remove trhodes user id in a few examples with 'user1' and add a
  replaceable tag around this user id so that it is rendered in italics.

* Comment out a stub section that says something like "This should be
  written".  The text is quite good without it, and when this planned
  section is added it will be even better.  The Handbook is past
  the point where we should have 'This should be written' stub
  chapters or sections.
2004-07-12 01:45:27 +00:00
Murray Stokely
4cd0c55b13 * Fix grammar mistakes and redundant clauses in the first paragraph.
* Remove 'as more features are added, they will be added here'.  That
  goes without saying for the entire Handbook.
* Break up a list of disagreeing clauses into two separate sentences.
* Replace a colon with a semicolon.
* Remove colorful language describing some users as irrational in
  favor of more succinct exposition.
2004-07-09 09:27:11 +00:00
Denis Peplin
59859e64cb Close / fix pair tags 2004-07-06 14:25:55 +00:00
Denis Peplin
48b4c25684 s/system/partition/
s/\./:/
add xref to "mac-troubleshoot" section

Reviewed by:	trhodes
2004-07-06 10:54:30 +00:00
Denis Peplin
90a01e1c77 Close two sect2
Add missing space
2004-07-05 06:00:11 +00:00
Christian Brueffer
edd7e5a8a3 s/A/a/ in a section title
Style advice by:	ceri
2004-07-04 12:07:44 +00:00
Daniel Harris
488a35390a Fix things like "The <command>setfmac</command> does suchnsuch" by adding
"command" or such when appropriate.

Reviewed by: trhodes
2004-06-30 13:14:19 +00:00
Daniel Harris
9ec904bb43 Fix a few typos and tweak a little grammar, between the point where I
started paying attention and the point where I realized I have
to be awake early this morning and might not get a chance to
return to this.
2004-06-30 04:54:41 +00:00
Tom Rhodes
dbf2be9b94 Add my recently written MAC chapter. At least 5-10% of this came from content
or ideas submitted to the trustedbsd-discuss mailing list by 'User Bugghy'
and from his mini-walkthrough.

Reviewed by:	-doc, TrustedBSD-discuss, rwatson
2004-06-21 19:34:56 +00:00