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Author SHA1 Message Date
Dru Lavigne
6e320a5d3c Fix grammo.
Sponsored by:	iXsystems
2014-04-01 23:26:30 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
2fd8e9b78e White space fix only. Translators can ignore.
Sponsored by:	iXsystems
2014-04-01 23:24:54 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
7368863960 Editorial review of CARP chapter.
Add a few clarifications.

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2014-04-01 23:03:08 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
e69f29a66d As per discussion on freebsd-doc@, clarify wording of lagg definition.
Sponsored by:	iXsystems
2014-03-31 13:57:12 +00:00
Warren Block
2fd3002415 Restore lost <replaceable> tags. 2014-03-18 00:33:43 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
af0af976c1 Be slightly more technically correct in the link-local description.
Contributed by Wout Decre.

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2014-03-07 20:43:45 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
a699ce7ba5 White space fix only. Translators can ignore.
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2014-03-07 20:23:34 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
b5b3e6fbd3 Initial pass through IPv6 Introduction.
It needs a second pass and a mention of how FreeBSD is leading
the way with IPv6-only.
The rest of this chapter needs a tech review by someone
who knows more about IPv6 as the last two sections are
still unclear on why/when someone would do this.

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2014-03-07 19:59:50 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
87e6a67bc9 Editorial review of Connecting to a Provider.
Slight change to Table 30.3 as per Wout Decre.

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2014-03-07 19:36:09 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
9887e3ddf6 Clean up IPv6 Addresses section.
Update Table 30.3 with corrections from Wout Decre.

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2014-03-07 18:34:22 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
9d9a77cd69 Edits needed to close PR.
PR: 172743
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2014-03-07 17:10:44 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
b03d6e1dd8 Edits needed to close PR.
PR: 162404
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2014-03-07 16:53:34 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
86c25d5a9c Edits needed to close PR.
PR: 121585
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2014-03-07 16:42:37 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
bd22d18450 Prep work before reviewing IPv6 chapter.
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2014-03-07 16:36:29 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
b453ddaee6 White space fix only. Translators can ignore.
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2014-03-06 23:27:25 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
8776f26f4f Editorial pass through the bridging chapter.
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2014-03-06 23:00:13 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
7597325d99 Initial prep work for bridging chapter.
More commits to come.

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2014-03-06 19:40:14 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
56d58ccd7a White space fix only. Translators can ignore.
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2014-03-06 19:16:24 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
6fd0057359 Editorial pass through second 1/2 of Bluetooth chapter.
Protocols section is still a bit dense.

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2014-03-06 18:39:20 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
0b29820ec2 Editorial pass through first 1/2 of Bluetooth chapter.
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2014-03-06 18:09:37 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
e65a11e899 Initial shuffle through Bluetooth chapter to improve flow.
Some sections renamed.
Flow is now using USB first followed by the various protocols
and utilities.
More commits to come.

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2014-03-06 17:08:22 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
b41196460e White space fix only. Translators can ignore.
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2014-03-06 02:34:17 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
178e814996 Finish editorial pass through Routing chapter.
The section on Multicast needs more content and a working
example.

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2014-03-06 02:08:27 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
61eb3b5669 Editorial pass through Routing Basics.
Add name to table.

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2014-03-05 22:34:26 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
7ada9725e0 Initial shuffle in prep for technical review of this chapter.
More commits to come.

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2014-03-05 21:39:21 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
4bb6cc0796 White space fix only. Translators can ignore.
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2014-03-05 20:11:16 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
e4bbb2ce58 Finish editorial review of this chapter.
Next commit will close PR62412.

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2014-03-05 19:27:42 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
ba74cf0ffc Editorial pass through Configuring DHCP section.
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2014-03-05 18:57:15 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
a56e5fb7f8 Clarify the procedure for setting up the PXE Environment.
Comment out some sections which probably no longer apply.

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2014-03-05 18:27:36 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
e697cff368 Clarify introduction.
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2014-03-05 17:26:02 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
d7edc5dbb1 Last merge shuffle in prep for technical review.
Next few commits will clarify the info and check the order
in which it is presented.

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2014-03-05 16:29:37 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
527ac27669 Start to merge content.
Many more commits needed to get this into a logical flow.

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2014-03-04 22:40:57 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
1d4ca578f6 Initial prep work to merge Diskless Booting and PXE chapters as
much of their content overlaps.
The next few commits will merge the content into a readable flow.

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2014-03-04 20:54:36 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
64070fd286 Prep work for merging Advanced Networking NAT section
into IPFW Configuring NAT section.
Move Configuring NAT to after Example Ruleset.
Next commit will start to merge the deleted content
into the NAT section.

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2014-02-26 22:19:04 +00:00
Warren Block
1c75224e03 In the CARP section, switch command tags in screen elements to userinput.
Submitted by:	Allan Jude <freebsd@allanjude.com>
2014-02-20 19:08:08 +00:00
Warren Block
53452fecd6 Update a couple of author entries. Patch from Allan Jude
<freebsd@allanjude.com>.
2014-02-18 02:30:23 +00:00
Warren Block
7578164831 Whitespace-only changes, translators please ignore. Patch from Allan
Jude <freebsd@allanjude.com>.
2014-02-18 02:26:27 +00:00
Warren Block
cc0a9ecafc Whitespace-only fixes. Modified version of patch from Allan Jude
<freebsd@allanjude.com>.
2014-02-18 00:11:34 +00:00
Warren Block
03a323f667 Fix repeated "A a".
Submitted by:	Allan Jude <freebsd@allanjude.com>
2014-02-14 03:51:54 +00:00
Warren Block
c3b20669c6 Whitespace-only fixes, translators please ignore. Slightly modified
patch supplied by Allan Jude.
2014-02-14 03:48:49 +00:00
Warren Block
db36e2322f Update the carp(4) section for 10.x and later. Allan Jude
<freebsd@allanjude.com> supplied a great patch to fix this, and then
spent a lot of time changing it to meet my numerous too-strict
standards.

PR:		docs/186464
Submitted by:	Rainer Duffner <rainer@ultra-secure.de>
Reviewed by:	glebius (earlier version)
2014-02-14 02:26:26 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
e875e1c36b White space fix only. Translators can ignore.
Sponsored by: iXsystems
2014-02-13 21:03:02 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
56ba08f862 Finish editorial review of this chapter.
Sponsored by: iXsystems
2014-02-13 20:49:58 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
c255a8b214 First pass at link aggregation chapter. Another nit-pickier commit to follow.
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2014-02-13 19:04:33 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
170668d584 White space fix only. Translators can ignore.
Sponsored by: iXsystems
2014-02-12 23:20:57 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
cf800fe45a As discussed at Feb 2 IRC doc session, remove the section on ATM.
The last non-spam email on the ATM mailing list was in 2011.

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2014-02-12 22:32:41 +00:00
Eitan Adler
9dd5fde930 Mention USB tethering and include the name of the drivers which are required.
Reviewed by:	nox
2014-02-06 20:46:41 +00:00
Warren Block
dba859014d Restore <replaceable> tags in the wireless network section that were
lost in the DocBook 5 conversion.
2014-02-03 03:39:03 +00:00
Dru Lavigne
c09698e58c First 1/2 of edits to this section.
Shuffle content into a more logical order and clarify text.
Rename a few sub-sections and remove reference to a section that was merged into another section.

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2014-01-31 15:30:54 +00:00
Gabor Kovesdan
24d129e8d1 - Definitively upgrade to DocBook 5.0 2013-11-07 15:39:28 +00:00