Minor grammatical cleanup.

Requested by:	phantom
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Ceri Davies 2004-04-06 18:10:39 +00:00
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<para>FreeBSD-questions is a mailing list, so you need mail access. Point
your WWW browser to <ulink url="">FreeBSD-question Info Page</ulink>.
In section titled <quote>Subscribing to freebsd-questions</quote> fill
<quote>Your email address</quote> field, and optionally other fields.
In the section titled <quote>Subscribing to freebsd-questions</quote> fill
in the <quote>Your email address</quote> field; the other fields are optional.
</para>
<note>
<para>The password fields in subscription form provides only mild
<para>The password fields in the subscription form provide only mild
security, but should prevent others from messing with your
subscription. <emphasis>Do not use a valuable password</emphasis> as
it will occasionally be emailed back to you in cleartext.</para>
</note>
<para>When you get confirmation message from
<application>mailman</application> follow included instructions
to complete subscription.</para>
<para>You will receive a confirmation message from
<application>mailman</application>; follow the included instructions
to complete your subscription.</para>
<para>And finally when you get the <quote>Welcome</quote> message from
<para>Finally, when you get the <quote>Welcome</quote> message from
<application>mailman</application> telling you the details of the list
and subscription area password, <emphasis>please save it</emphasis>.
If you ever should want to leave the list, you will need the information
@ -152,18 +152,18 @@ prefer. This reminder will also include instructions on how to
unsubscribe or change your account options. There is also a button on
your options page that will email your current password to you.</literallayout>
<para>Using URL specified in your <quote>Welcome</quote> message you
may visit <quote>Account management page</quote> and request
<para>From the URL specified in your <quote>Welcome</quote> message you
may visit the <quote>Account management page</quote> and enter a request
to <quote>Unsubscribe</quote> you from FreeBSD-questions mailing
list.</para>
<para>When you get confirmation message from
<application>mailman</application> follow included instructions
to finish unscubscribing.</para>
<para>A confirmation message will be sent to you from
<application>mailman</application>; follow the included instructions
to finish unsubscribing.</para>
<para>If you have done this, and you still can not figure out what
is going on, send a message to
<email>freebsd-questions-request@FreeBSD.org</email>, and he will
<email>freebsd-questions-request@FreeBSD.org</email>, and they will
sort things out for you. <emphasis>Do not</emphasis> send a message to
FreeBSD-questions: they can not help you.</para>
</sect1>