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Some grammatical fixes from the PR below, and some more of my own.

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PR:		docs/74624
Submitted by:	Gavin Atkinson <gavin dot atkinson at ury dot york dot ac dot uk>
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Ceri Davies 2004-12-18 15:23:18 +00:00
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en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/common/freebsd-users.xml
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<!-- $FreeBSD$ -->
<foilgroup>
<foil><title>Who uses FreeBSD?</title>
<foil><title>Who Uses FreeBSD?</title>
<para>FreeBSD is used by many of the worlds largest corporations,
<para>FreeBSD is used by many of the world's largest corporations,
and busiest Internet sites.</para>
<itemizedlist>
@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
<listitem>In the last year alone, about one million new FreeBSD
hosts were counted by Netcraft, an incredible growth rate
despite more media attention for Linux.</listitem>
despite more media attention towards Linux.</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</foil>
@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
<listitem>Source availability for helping understand and fix
problems that occur (having the source to the
system helps you understand why your application does not
system helps you to understand why your application does not
do what you expect)</listitem>
<listitem>Good performance</listitem>
@ -67,11 +67,11 @@
</foil>
<foil><title>FreeBSD used for Internet Infrastructure</title>
<foil><title>FreeBSD Used for Internet Infrastructure</title>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>BSD has existed since the last 1970's and was the testbed
<listitem>BSD has existed since the late 1970's and was the testbed
and reference implementation for TCP/IP.</listitem>
<listitem>The Internet Software Consortium (ISC) uses FreeBSD
@ -81,13 +81,13 @@
<listitem>Modern FreeBSD is extremely refined and
mature.</listitem>
<listitem>FreeBSD consistently placed at the top of the "uptime"
<listitem>FreeBSD consistently places at the top of the "uptime"
lists produced by Netcraft to measure the stability of the
world's busiest websites.</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</foil>
<foil><title>Embedded uses of FreeBSD</title>
<foil><title>Embedded Uses of FreeBSD</title>
<itemizedlist>
@ -108,4 +108,4 @@
</itemizedlist>
</foil>
</foilgroup>
</foilgroup>