Fix various minor wording nits, use <quote> for quoting,
use &os.numports; instead of a hardcoded Ports number, and note that `Alpha' is a supported architecture up to version 6.X of FreeBSD.
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<title>Abstract</title>
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<para>The FreeBSD project is a worldwide, voluntary, and
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collaborative project developing a portable and high-quality
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collaborative project, which develops a portable and high-quality
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operating system. The FreeBSD project distributes the source
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code for its product under a liberal license, with the
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intention of encouraging the use of its code. Collaborating
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<listitem>
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<simpara>FreeBSD source code is distributed under a liberal
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BSD license facilitating its adoption in commercial products
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<citation>Mon2005</citation> with the minimum of hassle.</simpara>
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<citation>Mon2005</citation> with minimum hassle.</simpara>
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</listitem>
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<listitem>
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<simpara>The FreeBSD project has excellent engineering
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<listitem>
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<simpara>As a Unix compatible environment for the management
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functions of high-end storage and networking devices,
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running on a separate processor 'blade'.</simpara>
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running on a separate processor <quote>blade</quote>.</simpara>
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<simpara>FreeBSD provides the tools for creating dedicated
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OS and application program images. Its implementation of
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a BSD unix API is mature and tested. FreeBSD can also
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url="http://www.rtems.com/">RTEMS</ulink> and <ulink
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url="http://ecos.sourceware.org/">eCOS</ulink>.</simpara>
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<simpara>There are many full-fledged development environments
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in the 13,000-strong collection of applications ported and
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in the &os.numports;-strong collection of applications ported and
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packaged with FreeBSD.</simpara>
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</listitem>
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<itemizedlist>
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<listitem>
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<simpara>A complete system that can cross-host itself for
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the following architectures: alpha, amd64, ia64, i386,
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the following architectures: alpha (up to &os; version 6.X), amd64, ia64, i386,
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sparc64, powerpc (see &man.build.7;).</simpara>
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</listitem>
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<listitem>
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composed in flexible ways.</simpara>
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</listitem>
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<listitem>
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<simpara>Over 13,000 ported applications, both commercial
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<simpara>Over &os.numports; ported applications, both commercial
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and open-source, managed via the FreeBSD ports
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collection.</simpara>
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</listitem>
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