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Avoid the use of contractions and fix some grammar problems

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that were revealed.  Note:  I didn't go through all of
the tutorials, so there is still some work to be
done here.

Made mailing addresses consistent with the handbook.

E.g:

freebsd-questions@FreeBSD.ORG

instead of:

questions@freebsd.org
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Mike Pritchard 1996-12-31 22:31:13 +00:00
parent a195318eaf
commit 1f9a9b2730
Notes: svn2git 2020-12-08 03:00:23 +00:00 
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<!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 3.2//EN" [
<!ENTITY base CDATA "..">
<!ENTITY date "$Date: 1996-11-17 15:21:55 $">
<!ENTITY date "$Date: 1996-12-31 22:31:11 $">
<!ENTITY title "FreeBSD Tutorials">
<!ENTITY % includes SYSTEM "../includes.sgml"> %includes;
]>
@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
<p>Here lie assorted documents on various aspects of FreeBSD,
FreeBSD software, and hardare. If you have comments or
would like to contribute a document, please contact us at
<a href="mailto:doc@freebsd.org">doc@FreeBSD.org</a>.</p>
<a href="mailto:freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG">freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org</a>.</p>
<ul>
<li><a href="newuser/newuser.html">For People New to Both FreeBSD <em>and</em> Unix</a>

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<!DOCTYPE linuxdoc PUBLIC "-//FreeBSD//DTD linuxdoc//EN">
<!-- $Id: newuser.sgml,v 1.4 1996-12-28 23:36:54 mpp Exp $ -->
<!-- $Id: newuser.sgml,v 1.5 1996-12-31 22:31:13 mpp Exp $ -->
<article>
<title>For People New to Both FreeBSD and Unix</title>
@ -324,7 +324,7 @@ You might especially want to make a file from <tt>/sbin/dmesg</tt> by typing
and copying <tt>dmesg.txt</tt> to the floppy. <tt>/sbin/dmesg</tt> is the boot
log record,
and it's useful to understand it because it shows what FreeBSD found
when it booted up. If you ask questions on questions@freebsd.org or on
when it booted up. If you ask questions on freebsd-questions@FreeBSD.ORG or on
a USENET group&mdash;like ``FreeBSD isn't finding my tape drive, what do I
do?''&mdash;people will want to know what <tt>dmesg</tt> has to say.

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<!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 3.2//EN" [
<!ENTITY base CDATA "..">
<!ENTITY date "$Date: 1996-11-17 15:21:55 $">
<!ENTITY date "$Date: 1996-12-31 22:31:11 $">
<!ENTITY title "FreeBSD Tutorials">
<!ENTITY % includes SYSTEM "../includes.sgml"> %includes;
]>
@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
<p>Here lie assorted documents on various aspects of FreeBSD,
FreeBSD software, and hardare. If you have comments or
would like to contribute a document, please contact us at
<a href="mailto:doc@freebsd.org">doc@FreeBSD.org</a>.</p>
<a href="mailto:freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG">freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org</a>.</p>
<ul>
<li><a href="newuser/newuser.html">For People New to Both FreeBSD <em>and</em> Unix</a>