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Avoid the use of contractions and fix some grammar problems

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that were revealed.  Note:  I didn't go through all of
the tutorials, so there is still some work to be
done here.

Made mailing addresses consistent with the handbook.

E.g:

freebsd-questions@FreeBSD.ORG

instead of:

questions@freebsd.org
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Mike Pritchard 1996-12-31 22:31:13 +00:00
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<!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 3.2//EN" [ <!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 3.2//EN" [
<!ENTITY base CDATA ".."> <!ENTITY base CDATA "..">
<!ENTITY date "$Date: 1996-11-17 15:21:55 $"> <!ENTITY date "$Date: 1996-12-31 22:31:11 $">
<!ENTITY title "FreeBSD Tutorials"> <!ENTITY title "FreeBSD Tutorials">
<!ENTITY % includes SYSTEM "../includes.sgml"> %includes; <!ENTITY % includes SYSTEM "../includes.sgml"> %includes;
]> ]>
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<p>Here lie assorted documents on various aspects of FreeBSD, <p>Here lie assorted documents on various aspects of FreeBSD,
FreeBSD software, and hardare. If you have comments or FreeBSD software, and hardare. If you have comments or
would like to contribute a document, please contact us at would like to contribute a document, please contact us at
<a href="mailto:doc@freebsd.org">doc@FreeBSD.org</a>.</p> <a href="mailto:freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG">freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org</a>.</p>
<ul> <ul>
<li><a href="newuser/newuser.html">For People New to Both FreeBSD <em>and</em> Unix</a> <li><a href="newuser/newuser.html">For People New to Both FreeBSD <em>and</em> Unix</a>

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<!DOCTYPE linuxdoc PUBLIC "-//FreeBSD//DTD linuxdoc//EN"> <!DOCTYPE linuxdoc PUBLIC "-//FreeBSD//DTD linuxdoc//EN">
<!-- $Id: newuser.sgml,v 1.4 1996-12-28 23:36:54 mpp Exp $ --> <!-- $Id: newuser.sgml,v 1.5 1996-12-31 22:31:13 mpp Exp $ -->
<article> <article>
<title>For People New to Both FreeBSD and Unix</title> <title>For People New to Both FreeBSD and Unix</title>
@ -324,7 +324,7 @@ You might especially want to make a file from <tt>/sbin/dmesg</tt> by typing
and copying <tt>dmesg.txt</tt> to the floppy. <tt>/sbin/dmesg</tt> is the boot and copying <tt>dmesg.txt</tt> to the floppy. <tt>/sbin/dmesg</tt> is the boot
log record, log record,
and it's useful to understand it because it shows what FreeBSD found and it's useful to understand it because it shows what FreeBSD found
when it booted up. If you ask questions on questions@freebsd.org or on when it booted up. If you ask questions on freebsd-questions@FreeBSD.ORG or on
a USENET group&mdash;like ``FreeBSD isn't finding my tape drive, what do I a USENET group&mdash;like ``FreeBSD isn't finding my tape drive, what do I
do?''&mdash;people will want to know what <tt>dmesg</tt> has to say. do?''&mdash;people will want to know what <tt>dmesg</tt> has to say.

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<!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 3.2//EN" [ <!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 3.2//EN" [
<!ENTITY base CDATA ".."> <!ENTITY base CDATA "..">
<!ENTITY date "$Date: 1996-11-17 15:21:55 $"> <!ENTITY date "$Date: 1996-12-31 22:31:11 $">
<!ENTITY title "FreeBSD Tutorials"> <!ENTITY title "FreeBSD Tutorials">
<!ENTITY % includes SYSTEM "../includes.sgml"> %includes; <!ENTITY % includes SYSTEM "../includes.sgml"> %includes;
]> ]>
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<p>Here lie assorted documents on various aspects of FreeBSD, <p>Here lie assorted documents on various aspects of FreeBSD,
FreeBSD software, and hardare. If you have comments or FreeBSD software, and hardare. If you have comments or
would like to contribute a document, please contact us at would like to contribute a document, please contact us at
<a href="mailto:doc@freebsd.org">doc@FreeBSD.org</a>.</p> <a href="mailto:freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG">freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org</a>.</p>
<ul> <ul>
<li><a href="newuser/newuser.html">For People New to Both FreeBSD <em>and</em> Unix</a> <li><a href="newuser/newuser.html">For People New to Both FreeBSD <em>and</em> Unix</a>