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Reword a paragraph to make it more clear,

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Use &os; in place of FreeBSD,
Avoid "sexist" language.
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<para>These are some questions which this chapter tries to answer.
Of course, programming has different levels of proficiency like
any other trade. For some it is a hobby, for others it is their
profession. The information in this chapter might be more aimed
towards the beginning programmer, but may also serve to be
useful for the programmer taking her first steps on the FreeBSD
platform.</para>
profession. The information in this chapter might be aimed
toward the beginning programmer; indeed, it could serve useful
for the programmer unfamiliar with the &os; platform.</para>
</sect1>