In SAP section:

- Add some missing application tags.
- Some rewordings (fixes, contraction, s/I/We/ etc.)
- Add a link to install-diff-media section where needed.
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<secondary><application>SAP R/3</application></secondary>
</indexterm>
<para>Installations of &sap; Systems using FreeBSD will not be
<para>Installations of <application>&sap;</application> Systems using FreeBSD will not be
supported by the &sap; support team &mdash; they only offer support
for certified platforms.</para>
@ -1169,7 +1169,7 @@ export PATH</programlisting>
<sect2 id="software">
<title>Software</title>
<para>The following CD-ROMs have been used for &sap; installations:</para>
<para>The following CD-ROMs have been used for <application>&sap;</application> installations:</para>
<sect3 id="software-46b">
<title>&sap.r3; 4.6B, &oracle; 8.0.5</title>
@ -1225,10 +1225,10 @@ export PATH</programlisting>
</tgroup>
</informaltable>
<para>Additionally, I used the <application>&oracle; 8
<para>Additionally, we used the <application>&oracle; 8
Server</application> (Pre-production version 8.0.5 for Linux,
Kernel Version 2.0.33) CD which is not really necessary, and
of course FreeBSD 4.3-STABLE (it was only a few days past 4.3
FreeBSD 4.3-STABLE (it was only a few days past 4.3
RELEASE).</para>
</sect3>
@ -1283,7 +1283,7 @@ export PATH</programlisting>
</informaltable>
<para>Depending on the languages you would like to install, additional
language CDs might be necessary. Here we're just using DE and EN, so
language CDs might be necessary. Here we are just using DE and EN, so
the first Language-CD is the only one needed. As a little note, the
numbers for all four export CDs are identical. All three language CDs
also have the same number (this is different from the 4.6B IDES
@ -1296,7 +1296,7 @@ export PATH</programlisting>
<title>&sap; Notes</title>
<para>The following notes should be read before installing
<application>&sap.r3;</application> or proved to be useful
<application>&sap.r3;</application> and proved to be useful
during installation:</para>
<sect3 id="sap-notes-46b">
@ -1488,7 +1488,8 @@ export PATH</programlisting>
<para>First you have to install FreeBSD. There are several ways to do
this (FreeBSD&nbsp;4.3 was installed via FTP, FreeBSD&nbsp;4.5 directly from
release-CD).</para>
the RELEASE CD) for more informations read the <xref
linkend="install-diff-media">.</para>
<sect3 id="disk-layout">
<title>Disk Layout</title>