Fix a variety of English style nits and other issues found with igor.

Reviewed by:	gabor
Approved by:	wblock
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Eitan Adler 2012-02-19 02:59:24 +00:00
parent 80097b88e3
commit 708f74e49a
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svn path=/head/; revision=38490
2 changed files with 4 additions and 4 deletions
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook
kernelconfig
l10n

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@ -579,7 +579,7 @@ cpu I686_CPU</programlisting>
<para>This is the identification of the kernel. You should change
this to whatever you named your kernel,
i.e. <literal><replaceable>MYKERNEL</replaceable></literal> if you have
i.e., <literal><replaceable>MYKERNEL</replaceable></literal> if you have
followed the instructions of the previous examples. The value you put
in the <literal>ident</literal> string will print when you boot up the
kernel, so it is useful to give the new kernel a different name if you
@ -605,7 +605,7 @@ cpu I686_CPU</programlisting>
<para>The normal build process of &os; includes
debugging information when building the kernel with the
the <option>-g</option> option, which enables debugging
<option>-g</option> option, which enables debugging
information when passed to &man.gcc.1;.</para>
<programlisting>options SCHED_ULE # ULE scheduler</programlisting>
@ -1242,7 +1242,7 @@ device wi # WaveLAN/Intersil/Symbol 802.11 wireless NICs.
device loop # Network loopback</programlisting>
<para>This is the generic loopback device for TCP/IP. If you telnet
or FTP to <hostid>localhost</hostid> (a.k.a. <hostid
or FTP to <hostid>localhost</hostid> (aka <hostid
role="ipaddr">127.0.0.1</hostid>) it will come back at you through
this device. This is <emphasis>mandatory</emphasis>.</para>

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@ -187,7 +187,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Wide or multibyte encodings, e.g. EUC, Big5.</para>
<para>Wide or multibyte encodings, e.g., EUC, Big5.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>