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- Reword the sentence about what is X11 to make it closer to "a

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consensus of opinion" and to the reality [1]
- Various style, grammar and punctuation fixes [1]
- Update the name of the FreeBSD KDE team to "KDE on FreeBSD team"
  (based on http://freebsd.kde.org/)

PR:		doc/114337 [1]
Submitted by:	Ben Kaduk <minimarmot@gmail.com>
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@ -26,9 +26,10 @@
<para>FreeBSD uses X11 to provide users with
a powerful graphical user interface. X11
is an open-source implementation of the X Window System that
includes both <application>&xorg;</application> and
<application>&xfree86;</application>. &os; versions up to and
is a freely available version of the X Window System that
is implemented in both <application>&xorg;</application> and
<application>&xfree86;</application> (and other software
packages not discussed here). &os; versions up to and
including &os;&nbsp;5.2.1-RELEASE
will find the default installation to be
<application>&xfree86;</application>, the X11 server released by
@ -1144,7 +1145,7 @@ EndSection</programlisting>
<title>Xaccess</title>
<para>The protocol for connecting to
<application>XDM</application> controlled displays is called
<application>XDM</application>-controlled displays is called
the X Display Manager Connection Protocol (XDMCP). This file
is a ruleset for controlling XDMCP connections from remote
machines. It is ignored unless the <filename>xdm-config</filename>
@ -1155,7 +1156,7 @@ EndSection</programlisting>
<sect3>
<title>Xresources</title>
<para>This is an application-defaults file for the display
chooser and the login screens. This is where the appearance
chooser and login screens. In it, the appearance
of the login program can be modified. The format is identical
to the app-defaults file described in the
X11 documentation.</para>
@ -1210,7 +1211,7 @@ EndSection</programlisting>
<title>Running a Network Display Server</title>
<para>In order for other clients to connect to the display
server, edit the access control rules, and enable the connection
server, you must edit the access control rules and enable the connection
listener. By default these are set to conservative values.
To make <application>XDM</application> listen for connections,
first comment out a line in the <filename>xdm-config</filename>
@ -1223,9 +1224,9 @@ DisplayManager.requestPort: 0</screen>
<para>and then restart <application>XDM</application>. Remember that
comments in app-defaults files begin with a <quote>!</quote>
character, not the usual <quote>#</quote>. More strict
access controls may be desired. Look at the example
access controls may be desired &mdash; look at the example
entries in <filename>Xaccess</filename>, and refer to the
&man.xdm.1; manual page.</para>
&man.xdm.1; manual page for further information.</para>
</sect2>
<sect2>
@ -1428,7 +1429,7 @@ DisplayManager.requestPort: 0</screen>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Centralized consisted dialog driven desktop
<para>Centralized, consistent, dialog-driven desktop
configuration</para>
</listitem>
@ -1439,13 +1440,13 @@ DisplayManager.requestPort: 0</screen>
</itemizedlist>
<para><application>KDE</application> comes with a web browser called
<application>Konqueror</application>, which represents
<application>Konqueror</application>, which is
a solid competitor to other existing web browsers on &unix;
systems. More information on <application>KDE</application>
can be found on the <ulink url="http://www.kde.org/">KDE
website</ulink>. For FreeBSD specific information and
resources on <application>KDE</application>, consult
the <ulink url="http://freebsd.kde.org/">FreeBSD-KDE
the <ulink url="http://freebsd.kde.org/">KDE on FreeBSD
team</ulink>'s website.</para>
</sect3>
@ -1554,7 +1555,7 @@ DisplayManager.requestPort: 0</screen>
<listitem>
<para>Fully configurable via mouse, with drag and
drop, etc </para>
drop, etc. </para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@ -1564,8 +1565,7 @@ DisplayManager.requestPort: 0</screen>
<listitem>
<para>Integrated window manager, file manager, sound manager,
<application>GNOME</application> compliance module, and other
things</para>
<application>GNOME</application> compliance module, and more</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>