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Fix a variety of English style nits and other issues found with igor.

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Eitan Adler 2012-02-18 05:33:57 +00:00
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</sect3> </sect3>
<sect3 id="portupgrade"> <sect3 id="portupgrade">
<title>Upgrading Ports using Portupgrade</title> <title>Upgrading Ports Using Portupgrade</title>
<indexterm> <indexterm>
<primary>portupgrade</primary> <primary>portupgrade</primary>
@ -1237,7 +1237,7 @@ ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/distfiles/ fetch</userinput></screen>
</sect3> </sect3>
<sect3 id="portmanager"> <sect3 id="portmanager">
<title>Upgrading Ports using Portmanager</title> <title>Upgrading Ports Using Portmanager</title>
<indexterm> <indexterm>
<primary>portmanager</primary> <primary>portmanager</primary>
@ -1277,7 +1277,7 @@ ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/distfiles/ fetch</userinput></screen>
</sect3> </sect3>
<sect3 id="portmaster"> <sect3 id="portmaster">
<title>Upgrading Ports using Portmaster</title> <title>Upgrading Ports Using Portmaster</title>
<indexterm> <indexterm>
<primary>portmaster</primary> <primary>portmaster</primary>

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the new user a welcome message.</para> the new user a welcome message.</para>
<example> <example>
<title>Adding a user on &os;</title> <title>Adding a User on &os;</title>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>adduser</userinput> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>adduser</userinput>
Username: <userinput>jru</userinput> Username: <userinput>jru</userinput>

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<procedure> <procedure>
<step> <step>
<title>Set boot loader variables</title> <title>Set Boot Loader Variables</title>
<para>The most important step is to reduce the <para>The most important step is to reduce the
<option>kern.hz</option> tunable to reduce the CPU utilization <option>kern.hz</option> tunable to reduce the CPU utilization
@ -249,7 +249,7 @@
</step> </step>
<step> <step>
<title>Create a new kernel configuration file</title> <title>Create a New Kernel Configuration File</title>
<para>You can remove all of the SCSI, FireWire, and USB <para>You can remove all of the SCSI, FireWire, and USB
device drivers. <application>Parallels</application> device drivers. <application>Parallels</application>
@ -261,7 +261,7 @@
</step> </step>
<step> <step>
<title>Setup networking</title> <title>Configure Networking</title>
<para>The most basic networking setup involves simply <para>The most basic networking setup involves simply
using DHCP to connect your virtual machine to the same using DHCP to connect your virtual machine to the same
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<procedure> <procedure>
<step> <step>
<title>Set boot loader variables</title> <title>Set Boot Loader Variables</title>
<para>The most important step is to reduce the <para>The most important step is to reduce the
<option>kern.hz</option> tunable to reduce the CPU utilization <option>kern.hz</option> tunable to reduce the CPU utilization
@ -749,7 +749,7 @@ xenbr1 8000.feffffffffff no vif0.1
</step> </step>
<step> <step>
<title>Create a new kernel configuration file</title> <title>Create a New Kernel Configuration File</title>
<para>You can remove all of the SCSI, FireWire, and USB <para>You can remove all of the SCSI, FireWire, and USB
device drivers. <application>Virtual PC</application> device drivers. <application>Virtual PC</application>
@ -761,7 +761,7 @@ xenbr1 8000.feffffffffff no vif0.1
</step> </step>
<step> <step>
<title>Setup networking</title> <title>Configure Networking</title>
<para>The most basic networking setup involves simply <para>The most basic networking setup involves simply
using DHCP to connect your virtual machine to the same using DHCP to connect your virtual machine to the same
@ -926,7 +926,7 @@ xenbr1 8000.feffffffffff no vif0.1
<procedure> <procedure>
<step> <step>
<title>Set boot loader variables</title> <title>Set Boot Loader Variables</title>
<para>The most important step is to reduce the <para>The most important step is to reduce the
<option>kern.hz</option> tunable to reduce the CPU utilization <option>kern.hz</option> tunable to reduce the CPU utilization
@ -944,7 +944,7 @@ xenbr1 8000.feffffffffff no vif0.1
</step> </step>
<step> <step>
<title>Create a new kernel configuration file</title> <title>Create a New Kernel Configuration File</title>
<para>You can remove all of the FireWire, and USB device <para>You can remove all of the FireWire, and USB device
drivers. <application>VMware</application> provides a drivers. <application>VMware</application> provides a
@ -954,7 +954,7 @@ xenbr1 8000.feffffffffff no vif0.1
</step> </step>
<step> <step>
<title>Setup networking</title> <title>Configure Networking</title>
<para>The most basic networking setup involves simply <para>The most basic networking setup involves simply
using DHCP to connect your virtual machine to the same using DHCP to connect your virtual machine to the same
@ -1051,7 +1051,7 @@ EndSection</programlisting>
&lt;!-- &lt;!--
# Sun VirtualBox # Sun VirtualBox
# Hal driver description for the vboxmouse driver # Hal driver description for the vboxmouse driver
# $Id: chapter.sgml,v 1.29 2012-02-15 18:37:26 eadler Exp $ # $Id: chapter.sgml,v 1.30 2012-02-18 05:33:57 eadler Exp $
Copyright (C) 2008-2009 Sun Microsystems, Inc. Copyright (C) 2008-2009 Sun Microsystems, Inc.