Language fixes and correct a filename in an example.
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&prompt.root; <userinput>rm /var/db/pkg/pkgdb.db /usr/ports/INDEX-*.db</userinput>
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&prompt.root; <userinput>portupgrade -af</userinput></screen>
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<para>This has completed, finish the upgrade process with a
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<para>Once this has completed, finish the upgrade process with a
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final call to <command>freebsd-update</command>. Issue the
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following command to tie up all loose ends in the upgrade
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process:</para>
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<varname>kern.securelevel</varname> setting and storing the
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<command>freebsd-update</command> data on a read only file
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system when not in use, a better solution would be to
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compare the system against a secure disk. Such as a
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compare the system against a secure disk, such as a
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<acronym>DVD</acronym> or securely stored external
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<acronym>USB</acronym> disk device.</para>
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</warning>
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<para>The system will now be inspected, and a list of files
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along with their &man.sha256.1; hash values, both known values
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in the release and the current installed value. This is why
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along with their &man.sha256.1; hash values, both the known value
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in the release and the current installed value, will be printed. This is why
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the output has been sent to the
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<filename>outfile.ids</filename> file. It scrolls by too
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quickly for eye comparisons, and soon it fills up the console
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all files different from those in the release, issue the
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following command:</para>
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<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cat update.ids | awk '{ print $1 }' | more</userinput>
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<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cat outfile.ids | awk '{ print $1 }' | more</userinput>
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/etc/master.passwd
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/etc/motd
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/etc/passwd
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<para>The base system of &os; includes a utility for updating
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the Ports Collection too: the &man.portsnap.8; utility. Upon
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execution, it will connect to a remote site, verify the secure
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key, and download a new copy of the ports collection. The key
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key, and download a new copy of the Ports Collection. The key
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is used to verify the integrity of all downloaded files, ensuring
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they have not been modified in-flight. To download the latest
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Ports Collection files, issue the following command:</para>
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