Language fixes and correct a filename in an example.

Approved by:	remko (mentor)
Obtained from:	perforce
No objections from: -doc
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Rene Ladan 2008-11-24 16:30:08 +00:00
parent 0eae7babd1
commit 8e36e964dd
Notes: svn2git 2020-12-08 03:00:23 +00:00
svn path=/head/; revision=33284

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@ -408,7 +408,7 @@ Does this look reasonable (y/n)? y</screen>
&prompt.root; <userinput>rm /var/db/pkg/pkgdb.db /usr/ports/INDEX-*.db</userinput>
&prompt.root; <userinput>portupgrade -af</userinput></screen>
<para>This has completed, finish the upgrade process with a
<para>Once this has completed, finish the upgrade process with a
final call to <command>freebsd-update</command>. Issue the
following command to tie up all loose ends in the upgrade
process:</para>
@ -440,14 +440,14 @@ Does this look reasonable (y/n)? y</screen>
<varname>kern.securelevel</varname> setting and storing the
<command>freebsd-update</command> data on a read only file
system when not in use, a better solution would be to
compare the system against a secure disk. Such as a
compare the system against a secure disk, such as a
<acronym>DVD</acronym> or securely stored external
<acronym>USB</acronym> disk device.</para>
</warning>
<para>The system will now be inspected, and a list of files
along with their &man.sha256.1; hash values, both known values
in the release and the current installed value. This is why
along with their &man.sha256.1; hash values, both the known value
in the release and the current installed value, will be printed. This is why
the output has been sent to the
<filename>outfile.ids</filename> file. It scrolls by too
quickly for eye comparisons, and soon it fills up the console
@ -458,7 +458,7 @@ Does this look reasonable (y/n)? y</screen>
all files different from those in the release, issue the
following command:</para>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cat update.ids | awk '{ print $1 }' | more</userinput>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cat outfile.ids | awk '{ print $1 }' | more</userinput>
/etc/master.passwd
/etc/motd
/etc/passwd
@ -485,7 +485,7 @@ Does this look reasonable (y/n)? y</screen>
<para>The base system of &os; includes a utility for updating
the Ports Collection too: the &man.portsnap.8; utility. Upon
execution, it will connect to a remote site, verify the secure
key, and download a new copy of the ports collection. The key
key, and download a new copy of the Ports Collection. The key
is used to verify the integrity of all downloaded files, ensuring
they have not been modified in-flight. To download the latest
Ports Collection files, issue the following command:</para>