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Add periods to the ends of the sentences in the list in the

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introduction.  While I'm at it, change "dipped in to" to "read" in the
system administration intro.  Also reword the first sentence to read a
little better.
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<!--
The FreeBSD Documentation Project
$FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml,v 1.108 2001/08/02 02:25:34 murray Exp $
$FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml,v 1.109 2001/08/04 04:25:22 jim Exp $
-->
<!DOCTYPE BOOK PUBLIC "-//FreeBSD//DTD DocBook V4.1-Based Extension//EN" [
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<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
<para>Introduce you to FreeBSD</para>
<para>Introduce you to FreeBSD.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Guide you through the installation process</para>
<para>Guide you through the installation process.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Teach you some Unix basics</para>
<para>Teach you some Unix basics.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Show you how to install the wealth of third party
applications available for FreeBSD</para>
applications available for FreeBSD.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Introduce you to X, the Unix windowing system, and
detail how to configure a desktop environment that makes you
more productive</para>
more productive.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
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<partintro>
<para>The remaining chapters of the FreeBSD Handbook cover all
aspects of system administration with FreeBSD. Each chapter
aspects of FreeBSD system administration. Each chapter
starts by describing what you will learn as a result of reading
the chapter, and also details what you are expected to know
before tackling the material.</para>
<para>These chapters are designed to be dipped in to as and when
<para>These chapters are designed to be read when
you need the information. You do not have to read them in any
particular order, nor do you need to read all of them before you
can begin using FreeBSD.</para>