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Tom Rhodes 2005-09-02 09:17:09 +00:00
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<sect1 id="problem">
<title>The Problem</title>
<para>First, let's assume you have <link linkend="ipsec-install">
<para>First, lets assume you have <link linkend="ipsec-install">
installed <emphasis>IPsec</emphasis></link>. How do you know
it is <link linkend="caveat">working</link>? Sure, your
connection will not work if it is misconfigured, and it will work
@ -55,12 +55,12 @@
<orderedlist>
<listitem>
<para>encrypted data is uniformly distributed, i.e., has maximal
<para>Encrypted data is uniformly distributed, i.e., has maximal
entropy per symbol;</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>raw, uncompressed data is typically redundant, i.e., has
<para>Raw, uncompressed data is typically redundant, i.e., has
sub-maximal entropy.</para>
</listitem>
</orderedlist>
@ -69,7 +69,7 @@
from- your network interface. Then you could see the difference
between unencrypted data and encrypted data. This would be true
even if some of the data in <quote>encrypted mode</quote> was
not encrypted---as the outermost IP header must be, if the
not encrypted---as the outermost IP header must be if the
packet is to be routable.</para>
<sect2 id="MUST">
@ -94,7 +94,7 @@
interface in your <link linkend="kernel">kernel's config
file</link>.</para>
<para>The command</para>
<para>The command:</para>
<screen><userinput><command>tcpdump</command> -c 4000 -s 10000 -w <replaceable>dumpfile.bin</replaceable></userinput></screen>
@ -182,7 +182,7 @@ Expected value for L=8 is 7.1836656
<title>Installing IPsec</title>
<para>Most of the modern versions of FreeBSD have IPsec support
in their base source. So you will probably will need to include
in their base source. So you will need to include the
<option>IPSEC</option> option in your kernel config and, after
kernel rebuild and reinstall, configure IPsec connections using
&man.setkey.8; command.</para>
@ -197,7 +197,7 @@ Expected value for L=8 is 7.1836656
<title>src/sys/i386/conf/KERNELNAME</title>
<para>This needs to be present in the kernel config file in order
to be able to capture network data with &man.tcpdump.1;. Be sure
to capture network data with &man.tcpdump.1;. Be sure
to run &man.config.8; after adding this, and rebuild and
reinstall.</para>