Grammar/spelling nits.

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Adam Weinberger 2005-03-15 19:03:31 +00:00
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<p>GNOME 2.10.0 has been released, and merged into the <p>GNOME 2.10.0 has been released, and merged into the
FreeBSD ports tree. We even beat the 5.4-RELEASE ports FreeBSD ports tree. We even beat the 5.4-RELEASE ports
freeze! This new release is jammed packed with freeze! This new release is jam-packed with
<a <a
href="http://www.gnome.org/start/2.10/notes/rnwhatsnew.html"> href="http://www.gnome.org/start/2.10/notes/rnwhatsnew.html">
changes</a> changes</a>,
including some including some brand new
<a href="$base/gnome/docs/faq210.html#q1">goodies</a> <a href="$base/gnome/docs/faq210.html#q1">goodies</a>
now availalbe on FreeBSD. Be sure to checkout our now available on FreeBSD. Be sure to check out our
<a href="$base/gnome/docs/faq210.html">upgrade FAQ</a> <a href="$base/gnome/docs/faq210.html">upgrade FAQ</a>
prior to jumping in. For those that do not want to spend time prior to jumping in. For those that do not want to spend time
compiling, packages for i386 are almost done building on our compiling, packages for i386 are almost done building on our
<a href="$base/gnome/docs/faq2.html#q21">Tinderbox</a> <a href="$base/gnome/docs/faq2.html#q21">Tinderbox</a>.
.</p> </p>
</event> </event>
</day> </day>
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over. Thanks to all the artists that submitted over. Thanks to all the artists that submitted
<a <a
href="http://people.FreeBSD.org/~adamw/images/gnome_splashes/"> href="http://people.FreeBSD.org/~adamw/images/gnome_splashes/">
entries</a> entries</a>.
. Our Our
<a <a
href="http://people.FreeBSD.org/~adamw/images/gnome_splashes/franz_klammer-2.png"> href="http://people.FreeBSD.org/~adamw/images/gnome_splashes/franz_klammer-2.png">
winner</a> winning entry</a>
was designed by Franz Klammer, and is the default GNOME 2.10 was designed by Franz Klammer, and is the default GNOME 2.10
splashscreen for FreeBSD. However, unlike previous release, splashscreen for FreeBSD. However, unlike previous release,