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<p>GNOME 2.10.0 has been released, and merged into the
FreeBSD ports tree. We even beat the 5.4-RELEASE ports
freeze! This new release is jammed packed with
freeze! This new release is jam-packed with
<a
href="http://www.gnome.org/start/2.10/notes/rnwhatsnew.html">
changes</a>
changes</a>,
including some
including some brand new
<a href="$base/gnome/docs/faq210.html#q1">goodies</a>
now availalbe on FreeBSD. Be sure to checkout our
now available on FreeBSD. Be sure to check out our
<a href="$base/gnome/docs/faq210.html">upgrade FAQ</a>
prior to jumping in. For those that do not want to spend time
compiling, packages for i386 are almost done building on our
<a href="$base/gnome/docs/faq2.html#q21">Tinderbox</a>
<a href="$base/gnome/docs/faq2.html#q21">Tinderbox</a>.
.</p>
</p>
</event>
</day>
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over. Thanks to all the artists that submitted
<a
href="http://people.FreeBSD.org/~adamw/images/gnome_splashes/">
entries</a>
entries</a>.
. Our
Our
<a
href="http://people.FreeBSD.org/~adamw/images/gnome_splashes/franz_klammer-2.png">
winner</a>
winning entry</a>
was designed by Franz Klammer, and is the default GNOME 2.10
splashscreen for FreeBSD. However, unlike previous release,