- MFH

svn path=/projects/xml-tools/; revision=41643

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml

@@ -1732,8 +1732,7 @@
 	  </question>
 
 	  <answer>
-	    <para>&os; supports SCSI and QIC-36 (with a QIC-02
+	    <para>&os; supports all standard SCSI tape interfaces.</para>
-	      interface).</para>
 	  </answer>
 	</qandaentry>
 

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml

@@ -478,6 +478,10 @@ GB.  Hardware compression &hellip;</literallayout>
 	<para>null-modem</para>
       </listitem>
 
+      <listitem>
+	<para>read-only</para>
+      </listitem>
+
       <listitem>
 	<para>web server</para>
       </listitem>

en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-01-2013-03.xml

@@ -620,7 +620,7 @@
     </body>
 
     <help>
-      <task>Evaluating if it is worth to migrate any of the other
+      <task>Evaluating if it is worthwhile to migrate any of the other
 	callout(9) consumers to the new interface.</task>
       <task>Move callout consumers still using the legacy
 	timeout()/untimeout() interface to callout_*() in order to get
@@ -1096,7 +1096,7 @@
       <p>The project progressed well since February:</p>
 
       <ul>
-	<li>Konstantin committed is TTM port to 10-CURRENT.</li>
+	<li>Konstantin committed his TTM port to 10-CURRENT.</li>
 
 	<li>With the help of John Baldwin (jhb) and Andriy Gapon (avg),
 	  the Video BIOS situation greatly improved: the
@@ -1121,17 +1121,17 @@
 	 the VM folks.</li>
       </ul>
 
-      <p><a href="http://www.yakaz.com/">Yakaz</a> lended
+      <p><a href="http://www.yakaz.com/">Yakaz</a> loaned
 	Jean-S&eacute;bastien a computer which allows him to test a
 	RV630-based discrete card and, in the future, other PCIe cards.
 	Several users already kindly tested the driver.  Big thanks to
 	all those contributors!</p>
 
-      <p>In its current state, the driver allows to have a simple X
+      <p>In its current state, the driver allows a simple X
 	session (no OpenGL), run common applications, watch movies,
 	change the resolution and enable additional monitors with
 	<tt>xrandr(1)</tt>.  The most blocking issue now is the OpenGL
-	deadlock which prevents to run modern compositors/desktop
+	deadlock which prevents running modern compositors/desktop
 	environment, games and WebGL demos.  We are not ready for a
 	"Call For Testers" yet.</p>
     </body>

share/xml/header.ent

@@ -105,6 +105,7 @@
 	  <li><a href="http://forums.freebsd.org">Forums</a></li>
 	  <li><a href="&base;/usergroups.html">User Groups</a></li>
 	  <li><a href="&base;/events/events.html">Events</a></li>
+	  <li><a href="http://serverfault.com/questions/tagged/freebsd">Q&amp;A (external)</a></li>
 	</ul>
       </li>
     </ul>

share/xml/navibar.ent

@@ -38,6 +38,7 @@
     <li><a href="&base;/events/events.html">Events</a></li>
     <li><a href="&base;/community/webresources.html">Web Resources</a></li>
     <li><a href="&base;/community/social.html">Social Networks</a></li>
+    <li><a href="http://serverfault.com/questions/tagged/freebsd">Q&amp;A (external)</a></li>
   </ul>
 </div> <!-- SIDENAV -->'>