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Fix a grammar nit: s/test/testing/

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Glen Barber 2012-02-21 03:59:33 +00:00
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</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Run in single user mode. E.g. &man.cron.8;, and
<para>Run in single user mode. E.g., &man.cron.8;, and
other daemons only add noise. The &man.sshd.8; daemon can
also cause problems. If ssh access is required during test
also cause problems. If ssh access is required during testing
either disable the SSHv1 key regeneration, or kill the
parent <command>sshd</command> daemon during the tests.</para>
</listitem>
@ -139,7 +139,7 @@
<para>Try to keep the temperature as stable as possible around
the machine. This affects both quartz crystals and disk
drive algorithms. To get real stable clock, consider
stabilized clock injection. E.g. get a OCXO + PLL, inject
stabilized clock injection. E.g., get a OCXO + PLL, inject
output into clock circuits instead of motherboard xtal.
Contact &a.phk; for more information about this.</para>
</listitem>