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Michael Lucas
2e897de412 Correct documentation on kernel option for SCSI_DELAY for CDROM
timeouts.  Quotes around kernel options with numbers went out in the
Stone Age, and using whole seconds went out when CAM arrived.

Also add a very brief description of what this option does.
2002-01-22 17:16:44 +00:00
Michael Lucas
035bb583df Teach the Handbook how to image data CDs, so we can pull the tutorial
from the FAQ.
2002-01-22 15:38:11 +00:00
Michael Lucas
beea8c1505 Move CDROM "device not configured" error information from FAQ to
Handbook.

I believe that the answer given in the FAQ is incorrect, but am not
enough of a SCSI stud to confirm it.  I'll be forwarding the info to
the -scsi list and asking for confirmation or denial before I make any
content changes.
2002-01-22 15:08:24 +00:00
Michael Lucas
70e9532bb5 The "Using CDs" section also didn't mention the annoyances of mounting
& reading Joliet disks.  Fixed, with text & info taken from FAQ.
2002-01-22 12:03:48 +00:00
Michael Lucas
e95d410b49 The "Creating and Using Optical Media" section does not say how to
mount a CDROM?  You have *got* to be kidding...

Fixed, with content pulled from FAQ.

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2002-01-22 11:06:19 +00:00
Michael Lucas
f73fed85d4 How to burn data to a raw CD, and problems therewith.
Information taken from FAQ.

Step 1 of several million in moving "tutorials" from FAQ to Handbook.
2002-01-22 10:10:36 +00:00
Murray Stokely
4f16b85ce8 Correct a typo.
PR:		docs/33140
Submitted by:	Julio Merino <juli@merino.net>
2001-12-31 09:42:11 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
0efd38263b Expand most of the contractions found in the Handbook. 2001-12-08 12:08:44 +00:00
Murray Stokely
e0432ef7e9 * Correct links
* s/freebsd.org/FreeBSD.org
* Use relative links wherever possible

PR:		docs/31447
Submitted by:	Cyrille Lefevre <clefevre@citeweb.net>
Found by:	linbot
2001-10-23 22:12:46 +00:00
Murray Stokely
14e1717272 Add a small paragraph about our support for hardware RAID controllers.
If nothing else, we can at least list this in the Index now and can
point readers to the release notes and other sources of information.
2001-10-13 00:21:23 +00:00
Sheldon Hearn
309e20e7da Don't drive people to the FAQ <question id="inappropriate-ccd"> by
giving a broken disklabel example.  ccd(4) can't use paritions with
fstype "unused"!

Correct tense in affected paragraph.
2001-10-10 16:37:48 +00:00
Chern Lee
612c88c794 * Place the list of disk devices back into Storage chapter without
the legacy version stuff--it is more appropriate here than the
  install chapter
2001-10-08 22:36:01 +00:00
Chern Lee
dd01434120 Fix prepositional phrases in Sypnosis:
* After reading this chapter you will know:
   -> After reading this chapter, you will know:
 * Before reading this chapter you should:
   -> Before reading this chapter, you should:
2001-10-08 20:30:51 +00:00
Chern Lee
f93099595b * Properly tab ccd section (it is now two levels deeper)
* Let emacs wrap lines to appropriate width

Whitespace only change.
2001-09-13 19:25:38 +00:00
Chern Lee
dfbf4382d0 * Rename Disks chapter to "Storage"
* Move BIOS Drive Numbering and Mounting/Mounting and Unmounting
   Filesystems to Basics chapter
 * Update sypnosis to reflect changes
 * Change title of "Disk Quotas" to "File System Quotas"
 * Create new RAID section w/ sub-sections Soft & Hard
 * Move ccd section into Soft RAID
 * Create to-be completed vinum sub-section of Soft RAID
 * Move Backup Programs, Backup Media, and Floppy Backup sections
   from Backups chapter into Storage

Suggested by: murray and nik
2001-09-12 23:44:49 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
913404e9fd Correct a typo.
PR:		30454
Submitted by:	Martin Heinen <mheinen0@wiesbaden-online.de>
2001-09-09 14:34:18 +00:00
Chern Lee
c5f66c8cec * Minor sentence revisions for consistency
* Changed some comma usage
 * Made use of the <quota> tag over a literal "word"
2001-09-07 00:13:40 +00:00
Chern Lee
38bc8ad6d7 Modifications from author:
* Change a few device names
 * Make use of &gt; instead of >

Submitted by:	Christopher Shumway <cshumway@FreeBSD.org>
2001-09-05 00:57:22 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
bcf62d4c42 Describe slices and partitions a little better.
An an aside, most of this part of the chapter is marked up
incorrectly--e.g., <quote> is used where something like <devicename>
is much more appropriate.  This delta doesn't help, but keeps things
relatively consistent.

PR:		30062
Submitted by:	Mike Meyer <mwm@mired.org>
2001-08-28 12:36:43 +00:00
Chern Lee
d4f93834b9 * Placed ccd in <application> tags
* shoud -> should
* exsist -> exist
* specificy -> specify
2001-08-24 20:44:08 +00:00
Valentino Vaschetto
f260262e67 Added sect1 on ccd
Reviewed by:	chern
2001-08-24 01:05:20 +00:00
Murray Stokely
45a6f3aa67 Standardize the synopsis. 2001-08-22 06:32:24 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
714709b545 Assorted mechanical fixes.
PR:		29806
Submitted by:	John Murphy <jfm@blueyonder.co.uk>
2001-08-19 23:58:56 +00:00
Chern Lee
6c21f4c1e9 Change all contractions to proper form.
don't -> do not
isn't -> is not
let's -> let us
... and so on
2001-08-16 18:35:08 +00:00
Chern Lee
d9b1288ac8 Markup Changes, place terms in:
* <application>
 * <username>
 * <command>
 * <literal>
 * <devicename>

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-14 22:06:11 +00:00
Jim Mock
40274f387b Change "manpage" and "man page" to "manual pages". 2001-08-11 21:34:53 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
094cb68b40 Fix markup.
PR:		29610
Submitted by:	Martin Heinen <mheinen0@wiesbaden-online.de>
2001-08-11 21:25:52 +00:00
Jim Mock
72027ff066 acd0 -> acd0c
Submitted by:	Dominic Marks <dominic_marks@btinternet.com>
2001-08-11 19:45:57 +00:00
Chern Lee
205cf1b49a Standardize capitalization of titles:
* First and last word uppercase
* Prepositions, articles, and short conjunctions lowercase
* The word 'to' lowercase
* Preserved capitalization for program/command names

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-10 22:58:17 +00:00
Murray Stokely
91bb5c5671 Add missing words to make complete sentences.
Clarify the descriptions of the different mount options.
Clean up a couple of man page references.
2001-08-10 01:18:34 +00:00
Chern Lee
2b61014302 Properly markup contributions in <chapterinfo>/<sect1info>/<sect2info> tags
according to recent changes for entire Handbook.

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-09 23:42:35 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
11b5e6ee37 with in -> within
PR:		29508
Submitted by:	Gary W. Swearingen <swear@aa.net>
2001-08-08 17:27:03 +00:00
Dirk Froemberg
c6814089c7 The port sysutils/cdrecord was renamed to sysutils/cdrtools. 2001-08-05 21:26:50 +00:00
Murray Stokely
2fdac55c46 * Combine singular/plural index terms.
* Add a few section id's so that the printed index can find the page
  number.

Submitted by:	Valentino Vaschetto <valentino.vaschetto@windriver.com>
2001-07-30 17:18:54 +00:00
Chern Lee
2de880b5f1 <command>man fstab</command> -> &man.fstab.5;
Minor grammar/markup changes.
Placed two groups of paragraphs into <procedure> and <varlist>
Make use of <port> tag

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-07-28 01:44:52 +00:00
Chern Lee
b3f6bc9a5f ... do this by using <command>C</command> -> by typing <userinput>C</userinput>
Wrap sysinstall in <application>
Small grammar changes.

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-07-28 01:37:12 +00:00
Chern Lee
a5c8708c40 Markup Fixes:
Placed sh, bash, csh, tcsh in <command>
  Placed commands in <command>
  Placed options in <option>
  Placed several commands in man entities
  Placed several applications in <application>
  Placed make vars/targets into <makevar>/<maketarget>
  Placed filenames in <filename>
  <literal>chmod()</literal> -> <function>chmod()</function>

Standardize:
  ATT -> AT&amp;T
  endeavour -> endeavor
  tcl -> Tcl

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-07-19 23:18:09 +00:00
Chern Lee
4df284c246 Made <indexterm>'s more specific by adding <filename>, <command>,
and <application> entities.

Submitted by:	Valentino Vaschetto <valentino.vaschetto@windriver.com>
Reviewed by:	murray
2001-07-19 01:11:52 +00:00
Nik Clayton
7d44b5e448 + xref closes with '/>'. This causes a trailing '>'
at the end of the reference.  Removed the '/'.

+ Marked up 'log' and 'spool' as filenames
  in the discussion of the 'var' directory.

+ Changed fdisk to show up as command.

+ Marked up vn as device.

+ Marked up "sysinstall" using a man.systinstall.8; entity.

PR:		docs/28989
Submitted by:	Martin Heinen <mheinen0@wiesbaden-online.de>
2001-07-16 15:02:50 +00:00
Murray Stokely
99c9a56f15 Consistently use an uppercase replaceable 'X' :
4.x-STABLE    -> 4.X-STABLE
   FreeBSD 2.2.x -> FreeBSD 2.2.X
2001-07-14 23:40:29 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
4a5e851cb2 DocBook police: open and close tags for <screen> should cuddle up to
the contents within.
2001-07-06 13:03:06 +00:00
Nik Clayton
4e521b8bb2 Makefile's to make it easy to build individual handbook chapters. These
are *not* recursed in to by the top level Makefile.
2001-06-30 14:55:40 +00:00
Nik Clayton
643c60f60c The pass number specifies the order in which disks are checked, not the
order in which they are mounted.

PR:		docs/28488
Submitted by:	Martin Heinen <mheinen0@wiesbaden-online.de>
2001-06-28 16:42:01 +00:00
Murray Stokely
e6917a777e Properly wrap indexterm entries that exceed 80 characters. Also move
<indexterm> tags outside of <para>s since this can add extra
whitespace characters to the output (for print stylesheets).

Pointed out by: Chris Costello
2001-06-26 20:10:25 +00:00
Nik Clayton
7214271be9 Note that the wcd -> acd transition was from 4.0 to 4.1, not 3.1 to 4.1.
Submitted by:   Loren Thiel <thiel@genevaonline.com>
2001-06-25 14:05:37 +00:00
Murray Stokely
109c529fc7 Add ~105 new index entries. 2001-06-25 12:41:15 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
b0c3cb4fcc Remove duplicate words where appropriate.
Inspired by:    PRs 28356, 28359; tyler spivey <tspivey8@home.com>
2001-06-23 06:57:06 +00:00
Murray Stokely
88f3235bb0 Spelling corrections :
transalates    -> translates
  indictes       -> indicates
  ficticious     -> fictitious
  sandox         -> sandbox
  priveleged     -> privileged
  unix           -> Unix
  versatily      -> (sentence reworded)
  inerface       -> interface
  internet       -> Internet
  appriate       -> appropriate
  Logictech      -> Logitech
  extetions      -> extensions
  occuring       -> ocurring
  keypair        -> key pair
  tunnelled      -> tunneled
  inializes      -> initializes
  ommitted       -> omitted
  seperate       -> separate
  unintelligable -> unintelligible
  signalling     -> signaling
  appearence     -> appearance
  descision      -> decision

Pointed out by: ispell(1)
2001-06-21 17:21:01 +00:00
Daniel Harris
74a066fbfc Assorted spelling and grammar cleanups. 2001-06-16 16:17:28 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
15801a26bb Add a section on creating and burning CDs. Documents mkisofs(8),
burncd(8), and cdrecord(1).

PR:		25890
Submitted by:	Mike Meyer <mwm@mired.org>
2001-04-21 23:14:53 +00:00