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Chern Lee
38bc8ad6d7 Modifications from author: 
* Change a few device names
 * Make use of > instead of >

Submitted by:	Christopher Shumway <cshumway@FreeBSD.org>
 2001-09-05 00:57:22 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
bcf62d4c42 Describe slices and partitions a little better. 
An an aside, most of this part of the chapter is marked up
incorrectly--e.g., <quote> is used where something like <devicename>
is much more appropriate.  This delta doesn't help, but keeps things
relatively consistent.

PR:		30062
Submitted by:	Mike Meyer <mwm@mired.org>
 2001-08-28 12:36:43 +00:00
Chern Lee
d4f93834b9 * Placed ccd in <application> tags 
* shoud -> should
* exsist -> exist
* specificy -> specify
 2001-08-24 20:44:08 +00:00
Valentino Vaschetto
f260262e67 Added sect1 on ccd 
Reviewed by:	chern
 2001-08-24 01:05:20 +00:00
Murray Stokely
45a6f3aa67 Standardize the synopsis. 2001-08-22 06:32:24 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
714709b545 Assorted mechanical fixes. 
PR:		29806
Submitted by:	John Murphy <jfm@blueyonder.co.uk>
 2001-08-19 23:58:56 +00:00
Chern Lee
6c21f4c1e9 Change all contractions to proper form. 
don't -> do not
isn't -> is not
let's -> let us
... and so on
 2001-08-16 18:35:08 +00:00
Chern Lee
d9b1288ac8 Markup Changes, place terms in: 
* <application>
 * <username>
 * <command>
 * <literal>
 * <devicename>

Reviewed by:	murray
 2001-08-14 22:06:11 +00:00
Jim Mock
40274f387b Change "manpage" and "man page" to "manual pages". 2001-08-11 21:34:53 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
094cb68b40 Fix markup. 
PR:		29610
Submitted by:	Martin Heinen <mheinen0@wiesbaden-online.de>
 2001-08-11 21:25:52 +00:00
Jim Mock
72027ff066 acd0 -> acd0c 
Submitted by:	Dominic Marks <dominic_marks@btinternet.com>
 2001-08-11 19:45:57 +00:00
Chern Lee
205cf1b49a Standardize capitalization of titles: 
* First and last word uppercase
* Prepositions, articles, and short conjunctions lowercase
* The word 'to' lowercase
* Preserved capitalization for program/command names

Reviewed by:	murray
 2001-08-10 22:58:17 +00:00
Murray Stokely
91bb5c5671 Add missing words to make complete sentences. 
Clarify the descriptions of the different mount options.
Clean up a couple of man page references.
 2001-08-10 01:18:34 +00:00
Chern Lee
2b61014302 Properly markup contributions in <chapterinfo>/<sect1info>/<sect2info> tags 
according to recent changes for entire Handbook.

Reviewed by:	murray
 2001-08-09 23:42:35 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
11b5e6ee37 with in -> within 
PR:		29508
Submitted by:	Gary W. Swearingen <swear@aa.net>
 2001-08-08 17:27:03 +00:00
Dirk Froemberg
c6814089c7 The port sysutils/cdrecord was renamed to sysutils/cdrtools. 2001-08-05 21:26:50 +00:00
Murray Stokely
2fdac55c46 * Combine singular/plural index terms. 
* Add a few section id's so that the printed index can find the page
  number.

Submitted by:	Valentino Vaschetto <valentino.vaschetto@windriver.com>
 2001-07-30 17:18:54 +00:00
Chern Lee
2de880b5f1 <command>man fstab</command> -> &man.fstab.5; 
Minor grammar/markup changes.
Placed two groups of paragraphs into <procedure> and <varlist>
Make use of <port> tag

Reviewed by:	murray
 2001-07-28 01:44:52 +00:00
Chern Lee
b3f6bc9a5f ... do this by using <command>C</command> -> by typing <userinput>C</userinput> 
Wrap sysinstall in <application>
Small grammar changes.

Reviewed by:	murray
 2001-07-28 01:37:12 +00:00
Chern Lee
a5c8708c40 Markup Fixes: 
Placed sh, bash, csh, tcsh in <command>
  Placed commands in <command>
  Placed options in <option>
  Placed several commands in man entities
  Placed several applications in <application>
  Placed make vars/targets into <makevar>/<maketarget>
  Placed filenames in <filename>
  <literal>chmod()</literal> -> <function>chmod()</function>

Standardize:
  ATT -> AT&amp;T
  endeavour -> endeavor
  tcl -> Tcl

Reviewed by:	murray
 2001-07-19 23:18:09 +00:00
Chern Lee
4df284c246 Made <indexterm>'s more specific by adding <filename>, <command>, 
and <application> entities.

Submitted by:	Valentino Vaschetto <valentino.vaschetto@windriver.com>
Reviewed by:	murray
 2001-07-19 01:11:52 +00:00
Nik Clayton
7d44b5e448 + xref closes with '/>'. This causes a trailing '>' 
at the end of the reference.  Removed the '/'.

+ Marked up 'log' and 'spool' as filenames
  in the discussion of the 'var' directory.

+ Changed fdisk to show up as command.

+ Marked up vn as device.

+ Marked up "sysinstall" using a man.systinstall.8; entity.

PR:		docs/28989
Submitted by:	Martin Heinen <mheinen0@wiesbaden-online.de>
 2001-07-16 15:02:50 +00:00
Murray Stokely
99c9a56f15 Consistently use an uppercase replaceable 'X' : 
4.x-STABLE    -> 4.X-STABLE
   FreeBSD 2.2.x -> FreeBSD 2.2.X
 2001-07-14 23:40:29 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
4a5e851cb2 DocBook police: open and close tags for <screen> should cuddle up to 
the contents within.
 2001-07-06 13:03:06 +00:00
Nik Clayton
643c60f60c The pass number specifies the order in which disks are checked, not the 
order in which they are mounted.

PR:		docs/28488
Submitted by:	Martin Heinen <mheinen0@wiesbaden-online.de>
 2001-06-28 16:42:01 +00:00
Murray Stokely
e6917a777e Properly wrap indexterm entries that exceed 80 characters. Also move 
<indexterm> tags outside of <para>s since this can add extra
whitespace characters to the output (for print stylesheets).

Pointed out by: Chris Costello
 2001-06-26 20:10:25 +00:00
Nik Clayton
7214271be9 Note that the wcd -> acd transition was from 4.0 to 4.1, not 3.1 to 4.1. 
Submitted by:   Loren Thiel <thiel@genevaonline.com>
 2001-06-25 14:05:37 +00:00
Murray Stokely
109c529fc7 Add ~105 new index entries. 2001-06-25 12:41:15 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
b0c3cb4fcc Remove duplicate words where appropriate. 
Inspired by:    PRs 28356, 28359; tyler spivey <tspivey8@home.com>
 2001-06-23 06:57:06 +00:00
Murray Stokely
88f3235bb0 Spelling corrections : 
transalates    -> translates
  indictes       -> indicates
  ficticious     -> fictitious
  sandox         -> sandbox
  priveleged     -> privileged
  unix           -> Unix
  versatily      -> (sentence reworded)
  inerface       -> interface
  internet       -> Internet
  appriate       -> appropriate
  Logictech      -> Logitech
  extetions      -> extensions
  occuring       -> ocurring
  keypair        -> key pair
  tunnelled      -> tunneled
  inializes      -> initializes
  ommitted       -> omitted
  seperate       -> separate
  unintelligable -> unintelligible
  signalling     -> signaling
  appearence     -> appearance
  descision      -> decision

Pointed out by: ispell(1)
 2001-06-21 17:21:01 +00:00
Daniel Harris
74a066fbfc Assorted spelling and grammar cleanups. 2001-06-16 16:17:28 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
15801a26bb Add a section on creating and burning CDs. Documents mkisofs(8), 
burncd(8), and cdrecord(1).

PR:		25890
Submitted by:	Mike Meyer <mwm@mired.org>
 2001-04-21 23:14:53 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
caa6994914 DocBook police: open and close tags for <programlisting> should cuddle 
up to the contents within.

Approved by:	nik
 2001-04-09 00:33:58 +00:00
Jim Mock
6b86823ee6 Fix some spelling errors and some other minor nits. 2000-12-15 21:52:35 +00:00
Jim Mock
87102df05e Add a section on using slices. 
PR:		22996
Submitted by:	Szilveszter Adam <sziszi@petra.hos.u-szeged.hu>
 2000-12-05 12:54:46 +00:00
Hiroyuki Hanai
7be1e236ad rollback my previous commit. 2000-07-19 02:07:46 +00:00
Hiroyuki Hanai
4a96d7eb41 acd is from 4.0-RELEASE. 2000-07-17 07:16:57 +00:00
Jim Mock
baf34fae9f Rewrite a sentence in the ``Adding Disks'' section to mention wd is from 
pre-4.0 and ad is for 4.X+.

PR:		19334
Submitted by:	Bob Johnson <bobj@atlantic.net>
 2000-06-16 18:17:47 +00:00
Jim Mock
aca13e8771 Attack of the spelling police. The grammar police were also occasionally 
called onto the scene.
 2000-06-13 18:05:39 +00:00
Jim Mock
3302fdee27 Change &ldquo;...&rdquo; to <quote>...</quote> as per a discussion on 
-doc.

Suggested by:	nik
 2000-06-08 01:56:23 +00:00
Nik Clayton
e8e0d365eb Add information about BIOS renumbering of disk drives, and why it might 
be a bad idea from a FreeBSD perspective.

Submitted by:   bill@2ez.com
 2000-04-30 22:10:06 +00:00
Chris Costello
9d66d5d223 Properly capitalize section titles. Remove capitalization on `is'', `and'', 
etc.  Capitalize all other words in titles.

Reviewed by:	jim
 2000-04-03 02:15:43 +00:00
Neil Blakey-Milner
2c7bde250c Information on mounting and unmounting filesystems. 
Add a disk type to the vnconfig disklabel.
 2000-03-25 20:05:40 +00:00
Neil Blakey-Milner
fc0d59aaec Move the prompt out of userinput. Stupid fingers. 2000-03-25 14:39:58 +00:00
Neil Blakey-Milner
a64ff19866 Initial take at documenting vnconfig and the new md. 2000-03-25 14:12:56 +00:00
Jim Mock
f3ed71088e Fix typos in the quotas section. 
PR:		17277
Submitted by:	Bob Johnson <bobj@atlantic.net>
 2000-03-20 22:21:32 +00:00
Jim Mock
f1bb87de1d Move the quotas chapter into the disks chapter. 2000-03-20 20:59:51 +00:00
Jim Mock
2ccbd656fa Contributed by -> Originally contributed by 2000-03-20 20:06:25 +00:00
Neil Blakey-Milner
b13ac31516 Add synopsis and naming convention sections to the disks chapter 2000-03-20 12:38:39 +00:00
Neil Blakey-Milner
934e57c16c Whitespace/tag-only commit - move the entire disk adding procedure a 
further step in, to allow for more topics in this chapter.  Enwrap
it with <sect1 id="disks-adding"> and <title>Adding disks</title>.

Translators need just add the above, and indent, and then add the
closing tag where I did.
 2000-03-20 12:33:41 +00:00