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Author SHA1 Message Date
Marc Fonvieille
c36bd1832c Punctuation fixes, manual pages entities and tags addition 2002-08-02 13:27:53 +00:00
Ceri Davies
30656d7362 Remove duplicate words. 2002-05-28 17:38:52 +00:00
Tom Rhodes
9ba764ae23 Consistancy checks: s/file system/filesystem/g 2002-05-16 01:42:28 +00:00
Ceri Davies
5693e26a0d Whitespace cleanup from last commit.
No content changes.

Approved by:	murray
2002-04-29 12:22:30 +00:00
Ceri Davies
35716bf6ec Wrap root in <username>.
PR:		docs/37532
Submitted by:	Martin Heinen <martin@sumuk.de>
Approved by:	murray
2002-04-29 12:14:08 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
ece5259841 Revive the non-comment line I accidentaly removed in last commit. 2002-02-28 10:09:52 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
780d8e4786 Update /etc/ttys snippet with a copy of a more recent etc.i386/ttys.
This fixes a few minor grammar things within that <example>.

Submitted by:	Ceri <setantae@submonkey.net>
2002-02-28 09:56:34 +00:00
Jim Mock
823f09c4cf Add some additional info about dual-booting FreeBSD and Linux.
PR:		34391
Submitted by:	Tom Rhodes <darklogik@pittgoth.com>
2002-01-29 02:09:11 +00:00
Chern Lee
dd01434120 Fix prepositional phrases in Sypnosis:
* After reading this chapter you will know:
   -> After reading this chapter, you will know:
 * Before reading this chapter you should:
   -> Before reading this chapter, you should:
2001-10-08 20:30:51 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
55171931af ad2 is the first disk on the second IDE controller.
PR:		30435
Submitted by:	bob@Talarian.Com
2001-09-10 11:52:02 +00:00
Murray Stokely
9d82707723 Reword a few sentences for clarity and consistency. 2001-09-04 10:07:31 +00:00
Murray Stokely
c18118e040 Note that we list only the most common loader commands, and refer the
user to the man page for a complete list.

PR:		docs/29511
Submitted by:	Gary W. Swearingen <swear@aa.net>
		Michael Lucas <mwlucas@blackhelicopters.org>
2001-09-02 09:35:45 +00:00
Valentino Vaschetto
4623c525db CTRL -> <keycap>Ctrl</keycap>
SPACE -> <keycap>Space</keycap>
ALT -> <keycap>Alt</keycap>
ENTER -> <keycap>Enter</keycap>
and so on...

Reviewed by:	chern
2001-08-30 22:44:37 +00:00
Chern Lee
6c21f4c1e9 Change all contractions to proper form.
don't -> do not
isn't -> is not
let's -> let us
... and so on
2001-08-16 18:35:08 +00:00
Jim Mock
d9f0091f5a For some reason my last patch didn't apply cleanly to this file. Change
manpage -> manual page.
2001-08-11 21:49:11 +00:00
Jim Mock
434bab99b4 timespan -> time span
manpage -> man page
2001-08-11 21:06:48 +00:00
Chern Lee
205cf1b49a Standardize capitalization of titles:
* First and last word uppercase
* Prepositions, articles, and short conjunctions lowercase
* The word 'to' lowercase
* Preserved capitalization for program/command names

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-10 22:58:17 +00:00
Chern Lee
c20dd61362 Spelling Changes:
* OSs -> Operating Systems
* commmunications -> communications
* realise -> realize
* customising -> customizing
* customise -> customize
* realise -> realize
* behaviour -> behavior

British to American spelling for some of the above words only in the
Handbook as discussed on -doc.

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-06 21:25:28 +00:00
Jim Mock
af97e7902b Grammatical and typo fixes.
Submitted by:	John Murphy <jfm@blueyonder.co.uk> on -doc
2001-08-04 19:00:04 +00:00
Jim Mock
db5070127b in to -> into
a -> are
wd -> ad

Submitted by:	John Murphy <jfm@blueyonder.co.uk> on -doc
2001-08-04 04:07:17 +00:00
Nik Clayton
af855076ad Fix up some markup errors masked by use of "make CHAPTERS=boot" to test this. 2001-08-01 23:15:48 +00:00
Nik Clayton
78a16adcf8 Rewrite the synopsis for conformity. Rewrite large chunks of the
introduction, boot0, boot1, and boot2 text to conform with what the
synopsis tells the reader the rest of the chapter.

Throw in a gratuitous Baron Munchausen reference.
2001-08-01 21:39:52 +00:00
Chern Lee
ecc5d013c3 Various markup/wording/consistency changes found by Murray.
Reviewed by:	murray
2001-07-24 22:37:20 +00:00
Chern Lee
4df284c246 Made <indexterm>'s more specific by adding <filename>, <command>,
and <application> entities.

Submitted by:	Valentino Vaschetto <valentino.vaschetto@windriver.com>
Reviewed by:	murray
2001-07-19 01:11:52 +00:00
Chern Lee
6dbf07d805 Fix/Standardize:
internet -> Internet
can not -> cannot
CD-ROM -> CDROM
cdrom -> CDROM
UNIX -> Unix

To be standardized with the rest of the doc tree.

Approved by:	murray
2001-07-17 20:51:52 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
4a5e851cb2 DocBook police: open and close tags for <screen> should cuddle up to
the contents within.
2001-07-06 13:03:06 +00:00
Nik Clayton
4e521b8bb2 Makefile's to make it easy to build individual handbook chapters. These
are *not* recursed in to by the top level Makefile.
2001-06-30 14:55:40 +00:00
Murray Stokely
48ef9ff6d6 Add 20 indexterms. 2001-06-29 18:31:16 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
b0c3cb4fcc Remove duplicate words where appropriate.
Inspired by:    PRs 28356, 28359; tyler spivey <tspivey8@home.com>
2001-06-23 06:57:06 +00:00
Jim Mock
6b86823ee6 Fix some spelling errors and some other minor nits. 2000-12-15 21:52:35 +00:00
Daniel Harris
b4d759f49f The loader boots the kernel if __not__ interrupted.
Submitted by:	"Scott Vance" <scottvance@sprintmail.com>
2000-11-26 05:16:52 +00:00
Jim Mock
73c0ec61a4 Fix spelling error.. configuaration -> configuration. 2000-06-15 23:13:33 +00:00
Jim Mock
dc328a6b88 Fix up the grammar in a few places.
Submitted by:	Josh Bello <josh@pike.cdrom.com>
2000-04-07 21:26:56 +00:00
Chris Costello
9d66d5d223 Properly capitalize section titles. Remove capitalization on `is'', `and'',
etc.  Capitalize all other words in titles.

Reviewed by:	jim
2000-04-03 02:15:43 +00:00
Neil Blakey-Milner
e627eee3f7 Fix weird inflex of 'q's from somehwere. Spelling fixes.
Submitted by:	Francois Botha <fbotha@itouch.co.za>
2000-03-25 14:18:24 +00:00
Neil Blakey-Milner
d8f4f9e2f2 Move the overview into the boot blocks section, as it makes sense there.
Also document the 'unload' and 'boot-conf' loader commands, and give an
example of how to use these two together.

Submitted by:	dcs (unload/boot-conf)
2000-03-25 14:11:08 +00:00
Jim Mock
cb5a43912a Introduction -> Synopsis 2000-03-20 20:05:09 +00:00
Neil Blakey-Milner
fa3eb115b0 Reworking and nitpicking of the boot description.
Submitted by:	sheldonh
2000-03-17 12:27:23 +00:00
Neil Blakey-Milner
f29eb302a1 Copy of the boot section from "internals". Whitespace and tag changes
only - sect1 -> chapter, sectx -> sect(x-1), and lowering of indent
level.

Change of chapter id to "boot" from "booting".

Approved by:	jim
2000-03-17 10:25:10 +00:00