- Some tagging: OpenSSH is an <application> (set of tools), SSH is the
protocol so no tags and use uppercase, the other cases are <command>
(or use of manual page entities)
- s/Secure shell/OpenSSH/, which is less confusing, and some
s/SSH/OpenSSH/ where needed
- Use application tags for telnet since we talk in a "general way"
- s/Draconian/draconian/ in a sentence.
- Add trademark tags as needed, generally on first use in each
article.
- Add an attribution to the legal section mentioning all trademarks
referenced.
Markup fixes :
* </programlisting> should end without a newline.
* More <filename> markup.
* Add <structname>, <function>, <replaceable>, <acronym>, <quote> tags.
* Move <programlistings> outside of <para>s.
Grammar fixes :
* Add missing words, where needed.
* Remove superfluous words.
* Shorten several redundant sentences of the form
'Also, .... , as well.'
* Also add some <literal> tags.
* Change $FreeBSD$ -> $FreeBSD$ to prevent this from
being unintentionally expanded when used in the text.
share/sgml, since a lot of the entities are language independent, and
it makes work simpler for translators to have them in share/sgml.
The trademark.ent file contain:
- Commonly used trademarks defined as entities for ease of use.
- All trademark attributions defined as entities for ease of use.
Suggested by: hrs
Approved by: ceri (mentor)
available, corresponding to different versions of the various Linux
distributions.
* Add a missing newline in a <screen>.
* Minor grammar improvement.
* Add missing '/' to a pathname.
* Remove anachronistic FreeBSD 3.2 information.
* Add <colspecs> to improve the rendering of a table.
Sponsored by: FreeBSD Mall, Inc.
Both of them have been moved to the Developers Handbook two years ago.
o Delete the leftover files from the policies chapter.
Reviewed by: murray
Approved by: ceri (mentor)
pkgmaker.sh, post, and pre. This fixes broken links in the article to
the mentioned files, when the article is installed to a different
location.
Noticed by: Darren <darren@dazdaz.org>
- FreeBSD Architecture Handbook, which is a book about the FreeBSD
architecture. The SMP article have also been moved into the new
arch handbook as a separate chapter.
- FreeBSD Developers Handbook, which is a book about developing on
FreeBSD; basically what was left when the architecture parts was
moved away.
o Hook up the new FreeBSD Architecture Handbook to the build.
o Remove the SMP article since it is now part of the FreeBSD
Architecture Handbook.
The relevant files from the FreeBSD Developers Handbook have been
repository copied to the new FreeBSD Architecture Handbook.
This is just step one in the split, both books need some work to be
real seperate books. E.g. the FreeBSD Architecture Handbook still
needs an introduction.
Repository copy by: joe
Requested by: rwatson
Approved by: murray, ceri (mentor)
- Add trademark tags as needed, generally on first use in each
article.
- Add an attribution to the legal section mentioning all trademarks
referenced.
- Always use correct case for trademarks.
- Don't join trademarks with other words, e.g. using hyphens.
trademark.ent:
- Commonly used trademarks are defined as entities for ease of use.
- All trademark attributions are defined as entities for ease of use.
Approved by: ceri (mentor)
"remote printer name" is replaced with "name of the machine to which
the remote printer is connected" (in Japanese)
Submitted by: NAKAJI Hiroyuki <nakaji@tutrp.tut.ac.jp>
