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Author SHA1 Message Date
Peter Pentchev
1f359cbbab /tmp/msg 2003-01-12 18:20:55 +00:00
Martin Heinen
4111b2ea15 Remove excerpt from /etc/rc.i386, the code moved to /etc/rc.
In this context it is sufficient to say that setting
"linux_enable" enables the Linux-ABI.

PR:		46778
Submitted by:	Denis N. Peplin <info@volginfo.ru>
2003-01-06 16:28:03 +00:00
Martin Heinen
54003e89cd Complete a sentence and fix two typos. 2002-12-23 22:28:23 +00:00
Martin Heinen
18714ee672 Punctuation fix.
Approved by:	alex (mentor)
2002-11-27 13:24:04 +00:00
Martin Heinen
cf9e6d8cf7 Fix typos:
- remove a word
- s!pam!PAM!
- s!rpm!RPM!
- s!R3s!R3S!

Approved by:	alex (mentor)
2002-11-27 13:00:25 +00:00
Martin Heinen
7ed11f84f3 - s!&lt;ret&gt;!<keycap>Enter</keycap>!
- use <replaceable> instead of <>
- fix </step> and </para> tags
- move hyphen out of <application> elements
- put error messages in <errorname> or <errorcode>
- add missing tags

There are still many misued <emphasis> tags.

Approved by:	alex (mentor)
2002-11-27 12:52:16 +00:00
Murray Stokely
da6ef2fb7c Use non-breaking spaces.
PR:		docs/41546
Submitted by:	Martin Heinen <martin@sumuk.de>
2002-09-30 15:42:53 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
74ebe1f273 Use real quotes inside programlisting tags.
PR:		docs/42158
Submitted by:	Martin Heinen <martin@sumuk.de>
2002-08-29 10:35:52 +00:00
Ceri Davies
bb4c4c0d75 Make consistent use of <userinput> throughout the handbook. 2002-08-18 16:47:22 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
31bc5a9c8d Remove deprecated -w option for sysctl.
PR:		docs/41666
Submitted by:	Mark Stosberg <mark@summersault.com>
2002-08-15 21:05:21 +00:00
Tom Rhodes
f7e4314f90 Structure changes to the linuxemu chapter. Whitespace. No content. 2002-05-16 17:14:49 +00:00
Tom Rhodes
3867e5a95a Whitespace and structure changes to bring this chapter closer to FDP
conformance.  No content changes, translaters may ignore this.
2002-05-15 17:30:46 +00:00
Tom Rhodes
16455935dd Remove a period at the end of a few title's.
PR:		37854
Submitted by:	Martin Heinen <martin@sumuk.de>
2002-05-09 19:54:25 +00:00
Tom Rhodes
8cab15f40b Add a good bit of information about SAP R/3. This chapter also needs beat
with a structure hammer as it seems very out of sync with the primer.

PR:		37263
Submitted by:	Holger Kipp <kipp@alogis.com>
2002-05-06 16:04:19 +00:00
Ceri Davies
5693e26a0d Whitespace cleanup from last commit.
No content changes.

Approved by:	murray
2002-04-29 12:22:30 +00:00
Ceri Davies
35716bf6ec Wrap root in <username>.
PR:		docs/37532
Submitted by:	Martin Heinen <martin@sumuk.de>
Approved by:	murray
2002-04-29 12:14:08 +00:00
Ceri Davies
7b01e6dc1b Move a <screen> element outside a <para>, where it belongs.
Approved by:	murray
2002-04-28 20:51:15 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
6ddd2cc0dc Fix &entities; that lacked an ending ';' character,
as reported by the following:

	% cd doc/en_US.ISO8859-1
	% find . -type f -name '*.sgml' |\
	  xargs grep '&[^[:space:];&][^[:space:];]*$' | grep -v '&$'
	% find . -type f -name '*.sgml' |\
	  xargs grep '&[^[:space:];&][^[:space:];]*[[:space:]<]' |\
	  grep -v '&[[: space:]]' | grep -v '[[:space:]]&&[[:space:]]'
2002-03-27 01:16:55 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
cc006c5ed9 Correct a few places where ';' was used instead of ':' above samples.
Inspired by: a patch by Priit Piipuu <priit@bsd.ee>
2002-02-28 03:47:08 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
e7655d4598 Whitespace fixes.
Punctuation chars should not be preceded by spaces.
2002-02-14 22:31:00 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
0efd38263b Expand most of the contractions found in the Handbook. 2001-12-08 12:08:44 +00:00
Murray Stokely
e0432ef7e9 * Correct links
* s/freebsd.org/FreeBSD.org
* Use relative links wherever possible

PR:		docs/31447
Submitted by:	Cyrille Lefevre <clefevre@citeweb.net>
Found by:	linbot
2001-10-23 22:12:46 +00:00
Murray Stokely
229c740a31 Enclose author attribution inside <sect1info> / <authorgroup>. 2001-10-18 19:50:39 +00:00
Chern Lee
2647211536 Wrap screen output such that it does not flow off page in print version. 2001-10-17 20:19:16 +00:00
Murray Stokely
20319a28d7 * Correct a typo
* Breakup a long line in an example into three separate lines.
2001-10-16 19:06:26 +00:00
Chern Lee
585a371d33 consuption -> consumption 2001-10-14 02:03:05 +00:00
Chern Lee
37e9d47ed9 Change ulink to .html to appropriate link to section id. 2001-10-10 22:02:43 +00:00
Chern Lee
dd01434120 Fix prepositional phrases in Sypnosis:
* After reading this chapter you will know:
   -> After reading this chapter, you will know:
 * Before reading this chapter you should:
   -> Before reading this chapter, you should:
2001-10-08 20:30:51 +00:00
Murray Stokely
991b483518 Add a section about installing the Maple mathematics package.
PR:		docs/30918
2001-10-08 01:54:11 +00:00
Chern Lee
c80ad0e918 * Add content to SAP/R3 section.
* Fix author's name

Submitted by:	Holger Kipp <Holger.Kipp@alogis.com>
2001-09-26 22:18:19 +00:00
Murray Stokely
c42ea2c2ae Terminate synopsis listitems with a period.
Also give more information about prerequisites :

 "* Understand Unix permissions and processes (Chapter 3)."

instead of :

 "* Read chapter 3"
2001-08-22 05:37:50 +00:00
Chern Lee
6c21f4c1e9 Change all contractions to proper form.
don't -> do not
isn't -> is not
let's -> let us
... and so on
2001-08-16 18:35:08 +00:00
Murray Stokely
f2c87859c5 /ports/ -> /usr/ports/ 2001-08-12 20:17:49 +00:00
Murray Stokely
7928e44f14 * Add Rich Murphey's name back into the attributions for this chapter.
His name was apparently accidently removed when we moved to the
  <chapterinfo> scheme.
* Add a standard synopsis to this chapter.
* Remove gratuitous "For information about <title of next section>,
  see <number of next section>".
* Use <xref> instead of a <link> to Ports chapter.
* Clean up the section about KLDs and enabling Linux compatibility.
2001-08-12 20:13:54 +00:00
Chern Lee
205cf1b49a Standardize capitalization of titles:
* First and last word uppercase
* Prepositions, articles, and short conjunctions lowercase
* The word 'to' lowercase
* Preserved capitalization for program/command names

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-10 22:58:17 +00:00
Chern Lee
2b61014302 Properly markup contributions in <chapterinfo>/<sect1info>/<sect2info> tags
according to recent changes for entire Handbook.

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-09 23:42:35 +00:00
Chern Lee
aa873b5501 Remove smileys/emoticons as discussed in -doc to give the handbook a more
formal look.

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-07-23 22:51:33 +00:00
Chern Lee
1e99114452 Markup:
Placed applications in <application>
  Placed commands in <command>
  Placed hostnames in <hostid>
  Placed usernames in <username>
  Placed some terms in <literal>/<quote>
  Places some commands in man entities
  Changed some <filename> to <command> tags
  Placed files in <filename>

Spelling:
  linux -> Linux
  pc -> PC
  reckognized -> recognized
  initialise -> initialize
  behaviour -> behavior
  mountpath -> mount path (to spell check nicely although mountpoint would
  probably be more correct)

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-07-20 21:09:39 +00:00
Chern Lee
3e8d98b70a Standardize:
TCL -> Tcl
ethernet -> Ethernet
ftp (noun) -> FTP

Approved by:	murray
2001-07-17 22:20:51 +00:00
Chern Lee
7001f29865 Standardize:
UNIX -> Unix
UNIX's -> Unixes (one instance)

Unix is a proper noun, not an acronym.  Also conforms to O'Reilly's word list.

Approved by:	murray
2001-07-17 00:11:24 +00:00
Murray Stokely
99c9a56f15 Consistently use an uppercase replaceable 'X' :
4.x-STABLE    -> 4.X-STABLE
   FreeBSD 2.2.x -> FreeBSD 2.2.X
2001-07-14 23:40:29 +00:00
Murray Stokely
1853b9bcf6 CD-ROM -> CDROM
O'Reilly has standardized on 'CD-ROM' as have several other
publishers, however 'CDROM' outnumbers 'CD-ROM' 2 to 1 in our
documentation and it has always appeared this way on FreeBSD CDs from
Walnut Creek/BSDi/WRS.  I don't have a preference either way as long
as it stays consistent.
2001-07-14 00:57:56 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
4a5e851cb2 DocBook police: open and close tags for <screen> should cuddle up to
the contents within.
2001-07-06 13:03:06 +00:00
Nik Clayton
4e521b8bb2 Makefile's to make it easy to build individual handbook chapters. These
are *not* recursed in to by the top level Makefile.
2001-06-30 14:55:40 +00:00
Murray Stokely
abe2540e21 Add 24 indexterms. 2001-06-29 18:35:30 +00:00
Alexey Zelkin
feee128181 fix pathes to /ports/foo.html for new handbook installation scheme
(i.e. for all cases except http://www.FreeBSD.org/handbook/)
2001-06-26 15:40:27 +00:00
Chris Costello
4e4349aa1b Make the handbook build again, after the *clearly* untested commit in
revision 1.36 of this file.  Specifically:
 o Reduce section ID names to within jade's token size limit.
 o Place missng end tags where necessary.

Please, people, remember to build the handbook before you commit any
modifications to it!
2001-06-06 20:14:38 +00:00
Murray Stokely
da0b4141cf - Use <programlisting> properly
- Remove <emphasis> tags in favor of <username>, <groupname>, etc as appropriate.

Submitted by:	Valentino Vaschetto <valentino.vaschetto@windriver.com>
2001-06-01 07:58:16 +00:00
Murray Stokely
f18c320aaf Add a section describing how to install SAP R/3 with Oracle 8.0.5 onto
a FreeBSD 4.3 machine.

Submitted by:	Holger Kipp <Holger.Kipp@alogis.com> (in TeX)
Converted to SGML by: Valentino Vaschetto <valentino.vaschetto@windriver.com>
2001-05-31 05:40:35 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
caa6994914 DocBook police: open and close tags for <programlisting> should cuddle
up to the contents within.

Approved by:	nik
2001-04-09 00:33:58 +00:00