- rewording to remove you/we/please/simply/etc./i.e./as well as
- one &os; replacement
- reword sections that mention ISA
- some rewording for redundancy; some areas weren't touched as they need to be completely rewritten
- some ACPI/APM fixups
Approved by: gjb (mentor)
- rewording to remove you, etc., i.e., and references to PPP
- fixes xref
- general tightening, removal of redundant paragraphs, and many fixes to grammos/typos
- a reference to a non-existing logging section was removed
- several comments were addressed and removed
Approved by gjb (mentor)
igor -RabfswcnotS book.xml now reports no problems.
This is primarily a whitespace and gramma change but translators may
want to double check.
Approved by: bcr (mentor)
Note that this question needs a rewrite, but the goal of this commit is
to make igor less noisy (with -y) until that happens.
Approved by: bcr (mentor)
- fix &os;, <xref>, incorrect directory, varname, and devicename tags
- general rewording/tightening to address "you" and redundancy
- one comment was weirdly tagged and I couldn't figure out how to fix it so it was removed
- a newfs example was modified as UFS2 is now the default
Approved by: bcr (mentor)
- fixes missing &os;, &linux; and incorrect <xref> tags
- general rewording to replace "you" and address redundancy
- removes deprecated apps: abacus, gimp-devel, guppi, konq-plugins and renames koffice to calligra
- incorporates redundant summary into synopsis
- fixes incorrect port/pkg names and adds localization notes where applicable
- moves some <sect2> to <sect3> as they make more sense as subsections
- rm openjdk compile as icedtea Makefile now does this for user
- bumps up some pkg/port versions
- adds some URLs to less known apps
Approved by: bcr (mentor)
- removes etc. and i.e.
- fixes some title capitalization
- fixes incorrect grammar and overuse of ;
- fixes verb tense from future to active
- fixes redundancy
- general rewording to make a densely written dense subject slightly less dense
- link added for trustedbsd website
- spell out of acronyms introduced on first instance in section and used as acronym for all other instances
- remove reference to trustedbsd mailing lists as these have only seen spam posts in past 6 years
- reference to SEBSD was removed as does not exist
- reference to deprecated lomac confusion removed
- fix varname tags
- note added that as of 8.x, MAC is in GENERIC
Approved by: bcr (mentor)
