into 5 logical parts. Reorder the brief description of each chapter
to conform to the new layout.
Obtained from: FreeBSD Mall, Inc. Third Edition FreeBSD Handbook
contains the following chapters: serialcomms, ppp-and-slip, mail,
network-servers, and advanced-networking.
This <part> existed up until 3 years ago when it was combined with
another to form the System Administration part. That part is now too
large with over 15 chapters and needs to be split into two again.
Also, add some descriptive text to introduce the chapters in this part.
Obtained From: FreeBSD Mall, Inc. 3rd Edition FreeBSD Handbook (Vol II)
* Desktop
* Multimedia
* Kernel Configuration
* Printing
* Linux Emulation
This part provides more in depth coverage of some frequently used
features of FreeBSD, and assumes that the reader has read the first 5
chapters in the 'Getting Started' part.
This is the first new <part> since Nik and I reorganized in r1.108
almost 3 years ago, and it is long overdue.
Also add some introductory text describing what this part contains,
and how the material will be presented.
Obtained From: FreeBSD Mall, Inc. Handbook 3rd Edition, Vol1: User Guide
* Remove redundant sentence from introduction.
* Web server -> web server
* Add another example about why it's important to have an accurate clock
(consistent timestamps on a shared fileserver)
chapter alone of the Handbook. Add an entity here, used with ⋼,
so that we can mark up each of those with <acronym>NIS</acronym>
without bloating the source SGML files too much. We shouldn't add
every such acronym here, but in the case of NIS it really helps the
readability.
than the end.
2. Also, avoid acronyms in sect1 title's where possible. Prefer Network
File System (NFS), Network Information System (NIS/YP), etc.. to just
the acronyms alone.
(2) Suggested by: tom@
callouts with consistent number icons. Callouts above number 15 would
still be displayed in bracketed text.
Obtained from: docbook-xsl distribution
Created by: Dave Pawson
4 years. No one is going to write this section anytime soon, it's not
really needed anyway, so remove the 'XXX' empty subsection and one
link to this empty section.
<warning> tag already expresses this information and so the text will
be rendered appropriately.
* Improve wording in synopsis.
* Remove redundant sentences and simplify section about what will not
be covered in this chapter.
* Omit unnecessary words and improve grammar as appropriate
* Remove redundant paragraph.
* Use serial comma in list of elements, as mandated by doc project primer.
sources with CVSup, so remove that pre-requisite from the synopsis.
* Remove trhodes user id in a few examples with 'user1' and add a
replaceable tag around this user id so that it is rendered in italics.
* Comment out a stub section that says something like "This should be
written". The text is quite good without it, and when this planned
section is added it will be even better. The Handbook is past
the point where we should have 'This should be written' stub
chapters or sections.
