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Author SHA1 Message Date
Jim Mock
40274f387b Change "manpage" and "man page" to "manual pages". 2001-08-11 21:34:53 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
094cb68b40 Fix markup.
PR:		29610
Submitted by:	Martin Heinen <mheinen0@wiesbaden-online.de>
2001-08-11 21:25:52 +00:00
Jim Mock
72027ff066 acd0 -> acd0c
Submitted by:	Dominic Marks <dominic_marks@btinternet.com>
2001-08-11 19:45:57 +00:00
Chern Lee
205cf1b49a Standardize capitalization of titles:
* First and last word uppercase
* Prepositions, articles, and short conjunctions lowercase
* The word 'to' lowercase
* Preserved capitalization for program/command names

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-10 22:58:17 +00:00
Murray Stokely
91bb5c5671 Add missing words to make complete sentences.
Clarify the descriptions of the different mount options.
Clean up a couple of man page references.
2001-08-10 01:18:34 +00:00
Chern Lee
2b61014302 Properly markup contributions in <chapterinfo>/<sect1info>/<sect2info> tags
according to recent changes for entire Handbook.

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-09 23:42:35 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
11b5e6ee37 with in -> within
PR:		29508
Submitted by:	Gary W. Swearingen <swear@aa.net>
2001-08-08 17:27:03 +00:00
Dirk Froemberg
c6814089c7 The port sysutils/cdrecord was renamed to sysutils/cdrtools. 2001-08-05 21:26:50 +00:00
Murray Stokely
2fdac55c46 * Combine singular/plural index terms.
* Add a few section id's so that the printed index can find the page
  number.

Submitted by:	Valentino Vaschetto <valentino.vaschetto@windriver.com>
2001-07-30 17:18:54 +00:00
Chern Lee
2de880b5f1 <command>man fstab</command> -> &man.fstab.5;
Minor grammar/markup changes.
Placed two groups of paragraphs into <procedure> and <varlist>
Make use of <port> tag

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-07-28 01:44:52 +00:00
Chern Lee
b3f6bc9a5f ... do this by using <command>C</command> -> by typing <userinput>C</userinput>
Wrap sysinstall in <application>
Small grammar changes.

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-07-28 01:37:12 +00:00
Chern Lee
a5c8708c40 Markup Fixes:
Placed sh, bash, csh, tcsh in <command>
  Placed commands in <command>
  Placed options in <option>
  Placed several commands in man entities
  Placed several applications in <application>
  Placed make vars/targets into <makevar>/<maketarget>
  Placed filenames in <filename>
  <literal>chmod()</literal> -> <function>chmod()</function>

Standardize:
  ATT -> AT&amp;T
  endeavour -> endeavor
  tcl -> Tcl

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-07-19 23:18:09 +00:00
Chern Lee
4df284c246 Made <indexterm>'s more specific by adding <filename>, <command>,
and <application> entities.

Submitted by:	Valentino Vaschetto <valentino.vaschetto@windriver.com>
Reviewed by:	murray
2001-07-19 01:11:52 +00:00
Nik Clayton
7d44b5e448 + xref closes with '/>'. This causes a trailing '>'
at the end of the reference.  Removed the '/'.

+ Marked up 'log' and 'spool' as filenames
  in the discussion of the 'var' directory.

+ Changed fdisk to show up as command.

+ Marked up vn as device.

+ Marked up "sysinstall" using a man.systinstall.8; entity.

PR:		docs/28989
Submitted by:	Martin Heinen <mheinen0@wiesbaden-online.de>
2001-07-16 15:02:50 +00:00
Murray Stokely
99c9a56f15 Consistently use an uppercase replaceable 'X' :
4.x-STABLE    -> 4.X-STABLE
   FreeBSD 2.2.x -> FreeBSD 2.2.X
2001-07-14 23:40:29 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
4a5e851cb2 DocBook police: open and close tags for <screen> should cuddle up to
the contents within.
2001-07-06 13:03:06 +00:00
Nik Clayton
643c60f60c The pass number specifies the order in which disks are checked, not the
order in which they are mounted.

PR:		docs/28488
Submitted by:	Martin Heinen <mheinen0@wiesbaden-online.de>
2001-06-28 16:42:01 +00:00
Murray Stokely
e6917a777e Properly wrap indexterm entries that exceed 80 characters. Also move
<indexterm> tags outside of <para>s since this can add extra
whitespace characters to the output (for print stylesheets).

Pointed out by: Chris Costello
2001-06-26 20:10:25 +00:00
Nik Clayton
7214271be9 Note that the wcd -> acd transition was from 4.0 to 4.1, not 3.1 to 4.1.
Submitted by:   Loren Thiel <thiel@genevaonline.com>
2001-06-25 14:05:37 +00:00
Murray Stokely
109c529fc7 Add ~105 new index entries. 2001-06-25 12:41:15 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
b0c3cb4fcc Remove duplicate words where appropriate.
Inspired by:    PRs 28356, 28359; tyler spivey <tspivey8@home.com>
2001-06-23 06:57:06 +00:00
Murray Stokely
88f3235bb0 Spelling corrections :
transalates    -> translates
  indictes       -> indicates
  ficticious     -> fictitious
  sandox         -> sandbox
  priveleged     -> privileged
  unix           -> Unix
  versatily      -> (sentence reworded)
  inerface       -> interface
  internet       -> Internet
  appriate       -> appropriate
  Logictech      -> Logitech
  extetions      -> extensions
  occuring       -> ocurring
  keypair        -> key pair
  tunnelled      -> tunneled
  inializes      -> initializes
  ommitted       -> omitted
  seperate       -> separate
  unintelligable -> unintelligible
  signalling     -> signaling
  appearence     -> appearance
  descision      -> decision

Pointed out by: ispell(1)
2001-06-21 17:21:01 +00:00
Daniel Harris
74a066fbfc Assorted spelling and grammar cleanups. 2001-06-16 16:17:28 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
15801a26bb Add a section on creating and burning CDs. Documents mkisofs(8),
burncd(8), and cdrecord(1).

PR:		25890
Submitted by:	Mike Meyer <mwm@mired.org>
2001-04-21 23:14:53 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
caa6994914 DocBook police: open and close tags for <programlisting> should cuddle
up to the contents within.

Approved by:	nik
2001-04-09 00:33:58 +00:00
Jim Mock
6b86823ee6 Fix some spelling errors and some other minor nits. 2000-12-15 21:52:35 +00:00
Jim Mock
87102df05e Add a section on using slices.
PR:		22996
Submitted by:	Szilveszter Adam <sziszi@petra.hos.u-szeged.hu>
2000-12-05 12:54:46 +00:00
Hiroyuki Hanai
7be1e236ad rollback my previous commit. 2000-07-19 02:07:46 +00:00
Hiroyuki Hanai
4a96d7eb41 acd is from 4.0-RELEASE. 2000-07-17 07:16:57 +00:00
Jim Mock
baf34fae9f Rewrite a sentence in the ``Adding Disks'' section to mention wd is from
pre-4.0 and ad is for 4.X+.

PR:		19334
Submitted by:	Bob Johnson <bobj@atlantic.net>
2000-06-16 18:17:47 +00:00
Jim Mock
aca13e8771 Attack of the spelling police. The grammar police were also occasionally
called onto the scene.
2000-06-13 18:05:39 +00:00
Jim Mock
3302fdee27 Change &ldquo;...&rdquo; to <quote>...</quote> as per a discussion on
-doc.

Suggested by:	nik
2000-06-08 01:56:23 +00:00
Nik Clayton
e8e0d365eb Add information about BIOS renumbering of disk drives, and why it might
be a bad idea from a FreeBSD perspective.

Submitted by:   bill@2ez.com
2000-04-30 22:10:06 +00:00
Chris Costello
9d66d5d223 Properly capitalize section titles. Remove capitalization on `is'', `and'',
etc.  Capitalize all other words in titles.

Reviewed by:	jim
2000-04-03 02:15:43 +00:00
Neil Blakey-Milner
2c7bde250c Information on mounting and unmounting filesystems.
Add a disk type to the vnconfig disklabel.
2000-03-25 20:05:40 +00:00
Neil Blakey-Milner
fc0d59aaec Move the prompt out of userinput. Stupid fingers. 2000-03-25 14:39:58 +00:00
Neil Blakey-Milner
a64ff19866 Initial take at documenting vnconfig and the new md. 2000-03-25 14:12:56 +00:00
Jim Mock
f3ed71088e Fix typos in the quotas section.
PR:		17277
Submitted by:	Bob Johnson <bobj@atlantic.net>
2000-03-20 22:21:32 +00:00
Jim Mock
f1bb87de1d Move the quotas chapter into the disks chapter. 2000-03-20 20:59:51 +00:00
Jim Mock
2ccbd656fa Contributed by -> Originally contributed by 2000-03-20 20:06:25 +00:00
Neil Blakey-Milner
b13ac31516 Add synopsis and naming convention sections to the disks chapter 2000-03-20 12:38:39 +00:00
Neil Blakey-Milner
934e57c16c Whitespace/tag-only commit - move the entire disk adding procedure a
further step in, to allow for more topics in this chapter.  Enwrap
it with <sect1 id="disks-adding"> and <title>Adding disks</title>.

Translators need just add the above, and indent, and then add the
closing tag where I did.
2000-03-20 12:33:41 +00:00
Peter Wemm
5ff728b8ca $Id$ -> $FreeBSD$ 1999-09-06 06:53:43 +00:00
Nik Clayton
122d319794 "../handbook.sgml" -> "../book.sgml" in Emacs local variables section. 1999-08-23 21:24:10 +00:00
Nik Clayton
083e477937 Refer to "da" instead of "sd". "Jazz" -> "Jaz"
PR:		docs/11215
Submitted by:	Chris Costello <chris@holly.dyndns.org>
1999-05-16 13:40:15 +00:00
Nik Clayton
10b0b0a21e Add SGML comments at the top of the files with the $Id$ string. Remove
most of the other spurious comments.

Two comments relating to copyright have *not* been merged in from the
LinuxDoc version yet -- I've contacted the original authors to ask if
they would be willing to assign the copyright to the project. When I
get their response the copyright comments will either be merged in, or
left out, as necessary.
1999-03-08 22:04:49 +00:00
Nik Clayton
1e28ab5a96 Huge whitespace changes. Translators can ignore this commit completely.
Rationale: All the changes to the DocBook handbook so far have been
careful to keep whitespace changes to a minimum. This is so the
translators have as easy a job as possible in identifying exactly what's
changed.

This has meant the English version has become more and more 'ugly'. Lines
indented by the wrong amount, some lines longer than 130 characters,
others shorter than 20, gaps of 3 or 4 lines between paragraphs (and
sometimes within paragraphs). This makes it difficult to follow the
structure of the document, and needlessly complicates fixing SGML
problems.

It also makes the source practically useless as a teaching aid; the
more baroque the source looks, the less likely people are to dive in and
contribute.

This commit fixes all that -- and boy was it tedious. The snag is, it's
touched almost every line in every file in the Handbook.

Technically, the changes were made by running (in Emacs)
sgml-indent-or-tab (bound to the TAB key) on almost each line (except
those in <programlisting>, <screen>, <literallayout>, and other
verbatim sections), and then running sgml-fill-element (bound to
C-c C-q) on most paragraphs.

FWIW, this is the first, only, and last change of this type contemplated.
1999-03-07 21:26:43 +00:00
Nik Clayton
fe79ecbe4d Revert one of my previous changes. Sentences now have two spaces after
the period. Apologies for the repository bloat. This is entirely a
whitespace change.
1999-03-04 22:42:55 +00:00
Nik Clayton
7321b94099 Suddenly realised none of the
<informalexample>
    <screen>
      ...
    </screen>
  </informalexample>

need the <informalexample> element. So remove it. Simple search and
replace does the trick.
1999-01-30 23:35:05 +00:00
Nik Clayton
276c9344d5 Merged in the following changes. This was done by taking diffs between the
tags LINUXDOC_2_DOCBOOK_START and LINUXDOC_2_DOCBOOK from doc/handbook/.

Note that the LINUXDOC_2_DOCBOOK tag is not necessarily at the HEAD of
the file. So some files won't show changes because changes were applied
after I laid down the LINUXDOC_2_DOCBOOK tag.

Not everything was merged. In some cases, URLs had been shortened;

    http://www.freebsd.org/docproj/

becomes

     ../docproj/

This is a mistake, since users browsing the Handbook on their own machine
can't be expected to have links like this work. Of course, for mirrors,
they'll end up pointing back to the main site. For the mean time, do
nothing -- this will need an entity defined to reference the base URL
of the FreeBSD site, individual mirrors can set this as necessary.

Notice how some files (on the left) are merged to the same file (on
the right). This is because the new Handbook file structure is organised
on DocBook chapter lines.

Files with no revision number in the "From" column didn't exist when I
started the conversion.

File                 From  ->  To      Merged to files...
---------------------------------------------------------------
anoncvs.sgml               ->  1.1     cutting-edge/chapter.sgml
authors.sgml         1.93  ->  1.118   authors.ent
backups.sgml               ->  1.4     backups/chapter.sgml
bibliography.sgml    1.33  ->  1.37    bibliography/chapter.sgml
contrib.sgml         1.274 ->  1.312   staff/chapter.sgml
ctm.sgml             1.22  ->  1.23    cutting-edge/chapter.sgml
cvsup.sgml           1.36  ->  1.40    cutting-edge/chapter.sgml
disks.sgml                 ->  1.3     disks/chapter.sgml
eresources.sgml      1.39  ->  1.50    eresources/chapter.sgml
firewalls.sgml       1.19  ->  1.20    security/chapter.sgml
handbook.sgml        1.83  ->  1.91    handbook.sgml
history.sgml         1.24  ->  1.25    introduction/chapter.sgml
install.sgml         1.65  ->  1.67    install/chapter.sgml
isdn.sgml            1.12  ->  1.15    advanced-networking/chapter.sgml
kerberos.sgml        1.12  ->  1.13    security/chapter.sgml
kernelconfig.sgml    1.31  ->  1.32    kernelconfig/chapter.sgml
kerneldebug.sgml     1.17  ->  1.19    kerneldebug/chapter.sgml
linuxemu.sgml        1.22  ->  1.24    linuxemu/chapter.sgml
memoryuse.sgml       1.11  ->  1.12    internals/chapter.sgml
mirrors.sgml         1.80  ->  1.92    mirrors/chapter.sgml
nutshell.sgml        1.14  ->  1.15    introduction/chapter.sgml
pgpkeys.sgml         1.25  ->  1.28    pgpkeys/chapter.sgml
policies.sgml        1.16  ->  1.18    policies/chapter.sgml
porting.sgml         1.93  ->  1.112   contrib/chapter.sgml
ports.sgml           1.29  ->  1.31    ports/chapter.sgml
printing.sgml        1.21  ->  1.22    printing/chapter.sgml
relnotes.sgml        1.24  ->  1.28    introduction/chapter.sgml  [1]
submitters.sgml      1.161 ->  1.246   contrib/chapter.sgml
synching.sgml        1.12  ->  1.13    cutting-edge/chapter.sgml
userppp.sgml         1.28  ->  1.30    ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml

[1] A chunk of relnotes.sgml is in an IGNORED marked section. Why?

Submitted by:	A bunch (~ 50%) of merging done by Charles A. Wimmer
                (cawimm@FreeBSD.ORG), rest by Nik.
1998-11-12 01:26:39 +00:00