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Ceri Davies
4b9577b446 Minor language/grammatical fixups. 2004-06-06 00:37:34 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
e0d4ac1f87 s/command/command line/ where needed. 2004-05-13 15:31:22 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
828dc5de75 In DVD burning section: 
- Add a line on how to enable DMA access needed for the ATAPI burner
- Various rewordings and additions to improve the text
- Enhance the multisessions part
- Add credits to Andy Polyakov (growisofs author) who helped me a lot,
  thanks to you Andy!
 2004-05-06 18:48:04 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
f6b271d799 The line device atapicd is not needed by ATAPI/CAM. 
Submitted by:	thomas@
 2004-04-29 07:04:19 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
de77c40644 In the Creating and Using Optical Media (CDs) section: 
- s/acd0c/acd0/ and mention in various places 4.X needs the
  trailing c [1]
- The ATAPI/CAM section is just a cut&paste from an article I wrote for
  bsdnews.org, so let's mention the author.

PR:		docs/62097 [1]
Submitted by:	Marc Blanchet <marc.blanchet@viagenie.qc.ca>
 2004-04-14 13:11:14 +00:00
Martin Heinen
6f9b32a646 Replace consecutive screen elements with one screen element. 
The screens shown belong to the same session.
 2004-04-11 17:36:17 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
32edfa9144 Fix a bogus growisofs(1) example. 2004-03-08 20:45:56 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
bd0f6365da Typo 
Submitted by:	pav@
 2004-02-29 12:18:40 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
29101dcb74 Capitalize a title, I forgot it in my previous commit. 2004-02-26 20:33:06 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
fd37f33107 Add a DVD burning section. This section covers DVD+R, DVD+RW, DVD-R and 
DVD-RW (data, DVD-Video, multisession and how to grow an existing ISO
file system).
 2004-02-23 10:48:00 +00:00
Josef El-Rayes
ebcb93faac Fix bogus doubled line and add example tags for consistency. 
Approved by:    simon(mentor)
Submitted by:   Marian Cerny <jojo@matfyz.cz>
PR:             docs/61630
 2004-01-20 23:56:32 +00:00
Josef El-Rayes
f1840d3466 Add text describing the mksnap_ffs command as an 
alternative for creating snapshots.

  Approved by:  trhodes(maintainer)
  Approved by:  simon(mentor)
  Submitted by: Lukas Ertl <lertl@univie.ac.at>
  PR:           docs/53501
 2004-01-16 21:48:15 +00:00
Alexander Langer
5fff2f6237 Add another example on how to use dump over ssh, setting RSH=ssh. 2004-01-15 12:06:19 +00:00
Ceri Davies
f589c4e5a5 Grammar police: "setup" is not a verb. 2003-11-05 10:36:56 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
819a08a54a Add missing items in Synopsis and remove some other one. 
PR:		docs/56929 & docs/56930
Submitted by:	Marco Trentini <mark@remotelab.org>
 2003-09-17 07:40:06 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
fe4878a69d Add missing closing tags not found by nsgmls, and fix the case of some 
tags.

PR:		docs/56231
Submitted by:	Denis Peplin <den@freebsd-doc.org.ru>
 2003-08-31 16:41:36 +00:00
Simon L. B. Nielsen
4cfd05d16f *.sgml: 
- Use trademark entities.
 - Add trademark attributions.
 - Always use correct case for trademarks.
 - Don't join trademarks with other words, e.g. using hyphens.
 - Use 'UNIX like systems' instead of 'UNIX systems'.

trademark.ent:
 - Add entities for more trademarks / companies.
 2003-08-23 23:26:44 +00:00
Simon L. B. Nielsen
aed2b1d2da Note that gbde(4) and vinum(4) does not work together at this point. 
Submitted by:	Stefan Walter <sw@gegenunendlich.de>
PR:		docs/55122
Discussed on:	-doc
Approved by:	ceri (mentor)
 2003-08-15 21:50:10 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
ac3dece5ba More bsdlabel(8) updates. 2003-07-17 17:03:24 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
5ed14dfcde Update the note about matcd(4) driver, this later is back in 5.X branch 
since June 16th, 2003.
 2003-07-17 08:06:48 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
3c2bbd6ddc Start to update the chapter about bsdlabel(8). 2003-07-16 21:23:53 +00:00
Ceri Davies
22a4a9b4ec Capitalise titles as per the Chicago Manual of Style. 2003-07-13 18:18:34 +00:00
Tom Rhodes
139fc5e004 Sentence fragment. 
Pointed out by:	Craig Reyenga <craig@craig.afraid.org> via -doc
 2003-06-30 15:18:42 +00:00
Murray Stokely
b2408c9597 Use lower-case indexterms and remove an inordinate entry. 2003-06-15 09:53:45 +00:00
Martin Heinen
bee687eaf7 Use <filename role="package"> to mark up mtools. 2003-06-10 23:17:04 +00:00
Martin Heinen
ff3bb0a12d Fix closing tags. 2003-06-10 23:13:48 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
38656c8856 s/GBDE/gbde/ in one title to be consistent with the rest of the chapter. 
While I'm there one SGML tag fix.
 2003-06-08 17:33:13 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
65ce835490 - Add a missing period. 
- While I'm there some s/disklabel/disk label/ in the floppy section.
 2003-06-08 16:33:40 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
bbdb2f6675 Add missing username tags. 2003-06-08 14:03:42 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
af8f572396 Add missing username tags. 2003-06-07 18:16:37 +00:00
Chern Lee
d7e984062c British English -> American English: 
recognise -> recognize

Typos/Spelling Mistakes:
occured -> occurred
utilites -> utilities
enscrambled -> scrambled

Misc:
timezone -> time zone
linux -> Linux
interconvert -> convert
swapspace -> swap space
 2003-06-03 22:09:46 +00:00
Christian Brueffer
d7ae14ee63 Replace a broken link 
PR:             52500
Submitted by:   Julien Gabel <jg@thilelli.net>
 2003-05-25 20:18:53 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
01f0956493 Add a section about ATAPI/CAM. 2003-05-24 07:51:10 +00:00
Ceri Davies
b0f91074a0 Minor grammatical improvement. 2003-05-22 15:04:47 +00:00
Ceri Davies
8a78d205d6 Spelling and grammar fixups. 2003-05-22 00:00:19 +00:00
Martin Heinen
a0293ec921 Clean up some index entries: 
- capitalize IP and FORTRAN,
- move entries in singular to the corresponding plural entries,
- fix AT&T index entry,
- move composite entries into the primary index entry and
  add a secondary entry when necessary,
- move indexterm elements in the proper section.
 2003-05-21 21:25:35 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
6b82935c26 Grammar fix. 2003-05-21 20:10:27 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
1d0d461a53 In indexterms s/ISO-9660/ISO 9660/ to be consistent with the text and 
real ISO name (see http://www.iso.org/)
 2003-05-21 19:52:28 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
faca532dd0 Reword "syslog/dmesg" to something more user-friendly. 2003-05-20 19:37:36 +00:00
Tom Rhodes
b28e47038e Start producing output in the form of <chapter name><section id>.html. 
Not objected to by:	-doc
Reviewed by:		ceri, hrs, brueffer
 2003-05-20 14:45:34 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
b55c832494 - Use manual page entities for ccd(4). 
- Some little "rewordings" and tags fixes.
 2003-05-11 17:24:30 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
6e06ed35ef On 5.X systems device ccd must be used instead of pseudo-device ccd for 
4.X.  While I'm there some little sgml fixes.
 2003-05-10 11:15:57 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
0ea1c1562b Typo s/ulitmately/ultimately/ 2003-05-08 21:27:16 +00:00
Hiten Pandya
476187f0a9 Use 'irrelevant' instead of 'moot'. 
Approved by: des (mentor)
 2003-05-05 19:36:10 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
57df57c420 Move 's out from application tags and some punctuation fixes. 2003-05-04 21:14:45 +00:00
Murray Stokely
0d2e08017f Normalize indexterms. 
Sponsored by:	FreeBSD Mall, Inc.
 2003-05-04 12:18:24 +00:00
Murray Stokely
03c7c73250 Add indexterms relating to software RAID. 
Trim authorgroup.

Sponsored by:	FreeBSD Mall, Inc.
 2003-05-04 11:31:51 +00:00
Murray Stokely
771e009df1 * Clarify / Remove first person exposition and personal anecdotes. 
PR:		docs/50664
 2003-05-04 11:00:06 +00:00
Murray Stokely
90ff2cb926 More work on the new GBDE section: 
* Remove a comment encouraging someone to convert an xref to a ulink.
* Simplify run-on sentence in introduction.
* Use more descriptive DocBook tags.
* Refer to our two versions of UFS as UFS1 and UFS2 rather than UFS
  and UFS2. (1)
* Move an ephemeral URL from the main text to a footnote.
* Note that newfs -O2 is the default for FreeBSD 5.1 and later (1).
* Wordsmith (1, partially)

PR:		docs/51598
(1) Submitted by:	bmah
 2003-05-04 09:58:52 +00:00
Murray Stokely
d0033cfa5d Improve recently committed GDBE section. 
* Capitalize section titles.
* Use more descriptive DocBook tags.
* Improve a few references.
* Improve a few sentences.

PR:		docs/51598
Submitted by:	bmah (mostly)
 2003-05-04 09:10:25 +00:00