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Murray Stokely
0d2e08017f Normalize indexterms.
Sponsored by:	FreeBSD Mall, Inc.
2003-05-04 12:18:24 +00:00
Murray Stokely
03c7c73250 Add indexterms relating to software RAID.
Trim authorgroup.

Sponsored by:	FreeBSD Mall, Inc.
2003-05-04 11:31:51 +00:00
Murray Stokely
771e009df1 * Clarify / Remove first person exposition and personal anecdotes.
PR:		docs/50664
2003-05-04 11:00:06 +00:00
Murray Stokely
90ff2cb926 More work on the new GBDE section:
* Remove a comment encouraging someone to convert an xref to a ulink.
* Simplify run-on sentence in introduction.
* Use more descriptive DocBook tags.
* Refer to our two versions of UFS as UFS1 and UFS2 rather than UFS
  and UFS2. (1)
* Move an ephemeral URL from the main text to a footnote.
* Note that newfs -O2 is the default for FreeBSD 5.1 and later (1).
* Wordsmith (1, partially)

PR:		docs/51598
(1) Submitted by:	bmah
2003-05-04 09:58:52 +00:00
Murray Stokely
d0033cfa5d Improve recently committed GDBE section.
* Capitalize section titles.
* Use more descriptive DocBook tags.
* Improve a few references.
* Improve a few sentences.

PR:		docs/51598
Submitted by:	bmah (mostly)
2003-05-04 09:10:25 +00:00
Murray Stokely
13a1a04980 The floppy disk section was previously 4.x-centric, written in a very
informal style, and full of grammatical errors.  Improve this
situation somewhat.

Submitted by:	Martin Karlsson <mk-freebsd@bredband.net> (mostly)
PR:		docs/50761
2003-05-04 07:23:00 +00:00
Ceri Davies
ab1f23b8b8 The drives supported by burncd(8) is now at http://www.freebsd.dk/ata/;
update the link.

Submitted by:		Ed Watts <hwatts@earthlink.net>
Patch submitted by:	Simon L. Nielsen <simon@nitro.dk>
2003-05-03 13:46:03 +00:00
Christian Brueffer
563857d969 Correct grammar 2003-05-01 08:15:47 +00:00
Robert Watson
96d1510553 Big Momma Whitespace Cleanup for the Disks chapter:
(1) Trim trailing whitespace (existing text, gbde text)
(2) Line-breaks at 72 characters or so (gbde text)
(3) Clean up whitespace around <screen></screen (gbde text)

No content changes for translators.

Pointed at by:	bmah
2003-04-30 18:30:50 +00:00
Robert Watson
e98c63375f Commit FreeBSD Handbook chapter on using gbde in FreeBSD 5.0 or
higher (higher recommended).  This excellent chapter was contributed
by Lucky Green.  There appears to be a formatting problem involving
obfuscating the $FreeBSD$ in the template sample that should be
resolved by someone with a bit more SGML clue than me.

Submitted by:   Lucky Green <shamrock@cypherpunks.to>
Reviewed by:    phk
2003-04-30 15:19:41 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
fb73b104ec The track number in audio cdroms has two digits and is filled with
zeros if it's less than 10.  Make sure we get the device names right
in the audio CD-ROM copying instructions.

PR:		48545
Submitted by:	Grzegorz Czaplinski <G.Czaplinski@prioris.mini.pw.edu.pl>
2003-03-26 02:11:55 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
8e74dc9c6c Punctuation fix. 2003-03-10 22:34:57 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
b314f5854e Add some application tags. 2003-03-05 22:21:20 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
d53c45fb90 Fix a typo: s/and/an 2003-03-05 21:57:16 +00:00
Martin Heinen
4ce0adae40 Use <errorname> for error messages. 2003-02-03 23:34:56 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
3ea53e44e2 Use of some manual pages entities. 2003-01-26 21:13:32 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
7b1775b35a Indentation/whitespaces fix (can be ignored). 2003-01-26 18:50:35 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
7331f8a7b4 Put a sentence at the right place (I forgot it in my previous commit). 2003-01-26 18:45:24 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
306a463607 Use an "itemizedlist" where needed. 2003-01-26 18:17:54 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
adda0b7b36 Use application tags for SAMS:Alexandria. 2003-01-26 17:54:35 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
0d2004d397 - Use of username tags for root.
- Remove "e.g." from a command line.
2003-01-26 13:04:43 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
151cdfe2c1 Use quote tags where needed. While I'm there: addition of some
non-breaking spaces.
2003-01-26 12:51:14 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
fde93a40e1 In quota section:
- Use of manual page entities
- Some tags fixing.
2003-01-19 15:17:33 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
c6178000e6 Various typos fixing (can be safely ignored by translating teams for
the moment).

Submitted by:	Hiten Pandya <hiten@unixdaemons.com>
2003-01-12 21:42:05 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
3b56da1a63 Add a note about matcd(4) removal. 2003-01-10 18:33:25 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
74bdfab555 Reword a sentence. 2002-12-26 21:24:09 +00:00
Martin Heinen
a0047a1f71 Add missing </entry> tags. 2002-12-15 16:51:52 +00:00
Tom Rhodes
49f9e04e61 Run a few chapters through aspell. 2002-12-13 20:30:43 +00:00
Tom Rhodes
9bc35c2e21 Update the synopsis to include file system snapshots. 2002-12-10 06:03:09 +00:00
Tom Rhodes
faecbf6717 Add a note about using the -L flag with dump(8) and snapshots
Discussed with:	rwatson
2002-12-10 05:16:14 +00:00
Tom Rhodes
258dab636b All of the known dump(8) issues are fixed, remove the warning about them.
Discussed with:	mckusick
Prodded by:	rwatson
2002-12-10 05:01:27 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
bde558861f s/File-Based/File-Backed/ in the title of a section to be consistent
with the rest of the text.

Submitted by:	Hiten Pandya <hiten@uk.FreeBSD.org>
2002-12-08 18:51:06 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
1aa1e1f53a Finish the section about mdconfig(8); and mdmfs(8);. I also
updated a bit the part about FreeBSD 4.X
2002-12-08 15:59:18 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
4a12cb07fe Update (1st part) of Section 12.10 "Network, Memory, and File-Based
File Systems": covering mdconfig(8) and  mdmfs(8).  It's work in
progress, since I still have problems with mdmfs(8).
2002-12-06 23:01:53 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
edc5a4a4b3 Explain how to mount an iso image with mdconfig(8). 2002-12-05 22:55:35 +00:00
Robert Watson
9241c2dd38 Various updates for the ccd chapter to take into account 5.0: we no
longer accept a "units" argument to the kernel configuration entry.
Devfs now does all the device management, eschew use of MAKEDEV.

Note: I haven't yet tested all the commands here, I suspect some
instances of "ccd0c" may need to become simply "ccd0".
2002-12-05 15:56:53 +00:00
Robert Watson
da9ebe6d82 More /dev/r<foo> no longer preferred. 2002-12-04 22:10:51 +00:00
Robert Watson
13a8def0a0 Use of raw disk devices no longer preferred.
No need to specify "-t ufs" when mounting a UFS file system with
a BSD disk label, mount will do the right thing.
2002-12-04 22:08:29 +00:00
Robert Watson
b3cf5873da Add some more RAID device names that people might run into -- we
apparently support more controller types than when this chapter
was last updated.
2002-12-04 22:02:07 +00:00
Martin Heinen
525fa84c67 Move program output into <screen>.
Reviewed by:	trhodes
2002-11-29 17:22:22 +00:00
Tom Rhodes
ed3fb7afa9 Document a method for rebuilding ATA RAID1. Tested on a HighPoint ATA
controller with hot-swap.

Submitted by:	Roy Hooper <rhooper@cyberus.ca> (Original version)
2002-11-24 21:33:22 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
d88167bfd9 Use man entities where needed, and punctuation fix. 2002-11-11 11:58:40 +00:00
Tom Rhodes
4282e76f80 Add a missing word.
Remove a useless word.
2002-11-06 01:14:07 +00:00
Tom Rhodes
c5818fa136 Grammar: Run sentence. Use semicolon ';' correctly. 2002-10-03 23:30:12 +00:00
Tom Rhodes
937f502a6a Grammer: conciseness. Remove dead words. 2002-10-03 20:56:40 +00:00
Murray Stokely
f8c25d1364 Use non-breaking spaces, as necessary.
PR:		docs/41546
Submitted by:	Martin Heinen <martin@sumuk.de>
2002-09-30 15:46:55 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
7e69c0ee99 s/imagefile/imagefile.iso to be consistent with the command used.
PR:		docs/42764
Submitted by:	Fork <bouloumag@hotmail.com>
2002-09-14 09:02:17 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
3b5ef6601b s/filesystem/file system/ it's in part a revert of a previous commit to
respect our official wordlist.
2002-09-01 20:28:50 +00:00
Ceri Davies
d6598049e1 Multiple tweaks.
PR:		docs/42125
Submitted by:	Martin Heinen <martin@sumuk.de>
2002-08-28 21:18:20 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
924476c487 Add id attribute to "Duplicating Audio CDs" section, it'll
allow linking from other sections.
2002-08-28 17:29:25 +00:00