Gabor Kovesdan
7ba98a21ad
MFH
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Approved by: doceng (implicit)
2012-08-19 23:05:52 +00:00
Gabor Kovesdan
42b18717e8
- Add proper XML declarations with encoding specification to files that
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didn't yet have it
Approved by: doceng (implicit)
2012-08-11 10:37:42 +00:00
Gabor Kovesdan
74586f38c6
- Remove PSGML comments since they are not very useful after the XML
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migration
Approved by: doceng (implicit)
No objection from: doc@, www@
2012-08-07 23:31:39 +00:00
Warren Block
bc25c829de
List the freebsd-zfs GPT partition type.
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PR: 164800
Submitted by: Twoje Radio
2012-06-24 01:10:11 +00:00
Gabor Kovesdan
3cdf4e4922
- XMLify English books
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Approved by: doceng (implicit)
2012-06-21 16:04:40 +00:00
Warren Block
e73bde442a
Updates: note that the first UFS partition found is expected to be /, and
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remove the incorrect note that a freebsd-boot partition must be first on
the disk.
Submitted by: donallen in http://forums.freebsd.org/showthread.php?p=181004#post181004
2012-06-17 18:49:15 +00:00
Glen Barber
e9f1e1a61d
Remove references to dual-booot troubleshooting that does not exist.
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Submitted by: ryusuke
2012-04-03 13:27:00 +00:00
Warren Block
9c17dd697d
Fix miscapitalized word.
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Noticed by: ryusuke
2012-02-13 15:12:50 +00:00
Warren Block
8242d7ba9b
Change references to 8.2-RELEASE to 8.X, hopefully future-proofing them.
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Submitted by: ryusuke
2012-02-06 22:37:15 +00:00
Warren Block
8a8003f8ab
Add a tip to the memory stick section pointing out that 8.2 uses a
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different FTP path and has a separate installation chapter.
2012-02-05 23:22:35 +00:00
Warren Block
cda28bd439
Remove border from partition schemes table.
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Add example of setting up a split-filesystem partition layout.
2012-01-31 17:55:59 +00:00
Warren Block
2eeb8a5f3a
Fix title capitalizations, include /tmp in list of filesystems for
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split-filesystem partitioning.
2012-01-29 00:16:47 +00:00
Warren Block
3e0a636ca1
Whitespace-only changes. Wrap long lines, fix indentation.
2012-01-28 19:21:29 +00:00
Benedict Reuschling
ca6d2c9402
A few updates found while translating:
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- add between number and unit
- move a sentence stop out of an ulink description
- use &windows; in titles to be consistent (although the "tm" won't show up)
- Use author entity in Kris Moore's case
- Replace FreeBSD with &os; in a few places
- Add an extra space between a ) and the next word and
- de-capitalize daemon to be consistent [1]
[1] reported by: lme
2012-01-04 13:42:27 +00:00
Ryusuke SUZUKI
ca204278cf
o &rel.current; -> <replaceable>version</replaceable>
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doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml
o 9.0 -> <replaceable>version</replaceable>
doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.sgml
2011-12-19 12:41:12 +00:00
Glen Barber
71484c537f
bsdinstall chapter updates from -RC3:
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- Add the 'Enabling Crash Dumps' screen [1]
- Add the 'Manual Configuration' screen
- Replace the 'Final Configuration' screen; the 'Shell' option was removed
and replaced with the 'Manual Configuration' prompt
Reminded by: ryusuke [1]
2011-12-11 18:21:55 +00:00
Ryusuke SUZUKI
a1cb742fd9
A link to the installation media is changed to a more appropriate page.
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(&url.base;/releases/index.html -> &url.base;/where.html)
Reviewed by: gjb
2011-12-09 12:41:09 +00:00
Glen Barber
36df0fc698
9.0-RC1 updates to the bsdinstall chapter:
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- Document that bsdinstall will prompt a user if they would like
to set a non-default keymap
- Add the image the displays the prompt for a user to select
an non-default keymap
- Update the final configuration image, where 'Exit' is now the
first option
Submitted/noticed by: dru
2011-10-22 16:57:21 +00:00
Warren Block
429c195c91
Move PPC boot command outside of preceding paragraph for consistent
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formatting.
Approved by: gjb (mentor)
2011-10-20 03:08:42 +00:00
Warren Block
468d63f52b
Add details about the origin of bsdinstall and point out that bsdinstall
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is not pc-sysinstall.
Noticed by: bcr (mentor), dru
Discussed with: kmoore, dru, gjb (mentor)
Approved by: gjb (mentor)
2011-10-20 02:30:32 +00:00
Warren Block
08e387fd50
Clarify that interface selection screen may show more than one interface.
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Approved by: gjb (mentor)
2011-10-17 04:04:50 +00:00
Manolis Kiagias
8f95dd3880
Add missing </step> and </tgroup> tags
2011-10-13 23:43:52 +00:00
Manolis Kiagias
2df0bfd36d
Fix two nits found during translation
2011-10-13 18:29:12 +00:00
Warren Block
dbf0eb3279
Improve clarity and detail in bsdinstall wireless section.
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Approved by: gjb (mentor)
2011-10-12 16:50:48 +00:00
Warren Block
3f66fb4e23
Add description of wireless config to bsdinstall chapter.
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Approved by: gjb
2011-10-12 04:00:20 +00:00
Glen Barber
4751e2ba6d
Prefer to use ' ' in guibutton tags where spaces are necessary.
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(A few I missed earlier today.)
2011-10-11 01:03:39 +00:00
Glen Barber
18b21bc718
Add a closing bracket to a guibutton tag.
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Submitted by: danger (via irc)
2011-10-11 00:53:15 +00:00
Glen Barber
402232b713
Unwrap a long line (whitespace only):
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- Though literal FTP links in the documentation look ugly, the long
lines are necessary because linebreaks tend to leave spaces in the
intended URL.
2011-10-11 00:51:55 +00:00
Glen Barber
a921e87738
Use two spaces between end of sentence and beginning of sentence.
2011-10-10 17:29:26 +00:00
Glen Barber
555ebb7118
Use ' ' in place of spaces in guibutton tags.
2011-10-10 17:27:47 +00:00
Glen Barber
b2ecbfde5e
Whitespace fixes:
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- Don't separate an opening parenthesis with a line break (it causes the
output to contain a space between the parenthesis and content)
- Remove a few cases of trailing whitespace
2011-10-10 14:55:47 +00:00
Manolis Kiagias
9f4c0eeacf
- Add a few missing semicolons in &windows; entities
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- Capitalize Project (as in &os; Project)
2011-10-09 17:30:12 +00:00
Warren Block
2876b4e207
Simplify and clarify the bsdinstall final confirmation step.
2011-10-09 17:03:10 +00:00
Manolis Kiagias
cc634ff1a7
- Add two more missing </para> tags
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- Move two </para>s one line up to prevent blank lines in the output
2011-10-09 10:57:19 +00:00
Manolis Kiagias
49a5762490
Add missing </para> tag
2011-10-09 08:19:24 +00:00
Warren Block
3f60edd370
Various fixes:
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"effective at improving performance" is correct in English.
"issues with the installation" is vague, reworded.
Expand/clarify BIOS boot menu information.
Spelling/grammar.
Simplify Introducing bsdinstall.
Expand/clarify mirror site description choice.
Attempt to remove unnecessary instances of "the" and "you".
"Booting" is used in this doc more than "restarting".
Add link to network information.
2011-10-09 01:21:53 +00:00
Glen Barber
42dfdd0b1d
Add the bsdinstall Handbook chapter.
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Thanks to everyone who worked on this. Special thanks to gavin@ and
wblock@ who worked especially hard to get this in shape and ready for
9.0-RELEASE.
Commit to link this to the build to follow soon.
2011-10-08 15:05:27 +00:00