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Jeroen Ruigrok van der Werven
905b48ecf8 Put the information about the versions and availability in their own
paragraph.
2001-07-22 14:00:50 +00:00
Mark Pulford
56d8cd3eb5 Add Jason DiCioccio for contributing the odsclient port 2001-07-22 10:58:09 +00:00
Kazuo Horikawa
b7a914a384 Revise Japanese wording.
Submitted by:Norihiro Kumagai <kuma@jp.FreeBSD.org>
2001-07-22 00:32:25 +00:00
Jesper Skriver
c18d0f6fc9 Remove ftp.FreeBSD.org from the USA section, as it's not located in the USA.
It's still listed as the first, and official ftp site.
2001-07-21 20:22:58 +00:00
John Polstra
045dc46272 Remove references to the cvsup-bin and cvsupd-bin ports, which don't
exist any more.
2001-07-21 19:26:13 +00:00
Murray Stokely
3741b3edfb Add ID attributes to <indexterms>
Add <see> tags to cross-reference similar indexed topics
2001-07-21 09:13:55 +00:00
Murray Stokely
bd3a3ce150 Last commit prevented <ulinks> in the index from showing up properly for
printed output.  This fixes indexterms so that page numbers are
displayed following the indexed word/phrase.
2001-07-21 09:09:59 +00:00
Murray Stokely
abaf57a792 Allow NICE_HEADERS to be used in the GEN_INDEX case.
NICE_HEADERS is a set of print-only enhancements, however the HTML
backend is invoked whenever an index is generated, so we should not
touch JADEOPTS directly and should instead modify the .tex-ps target
directly.
2001-07-21 03:44:27 +00:00
Murray Stokely
383c86289e Wrap author attributions in <sect1info> and <sect2info> as
appropriate.

I've specifically left JKH's attribution for the "FreeBSD History"
section in tact, since this is a first person account of the history
of FreeBSD and as such the author needs to be identified in place.
This could probably be marked up differently, but its clear that this
section is different from all of the other "contributed by XXX" in the
Handbook.

Also add support for <sect1info> and <sect2info> to the stylsheet so
that these attributions get displayed as they have been.
2001-07-21 02:29:59 +00:00
Murray Stokely
89f085bc5d * Remove call for contributions from the synopsis of this chapter. A
call for help is listed on the third page of the printed Handbook or
  on the top level index for the HTML version and it need not be
  repeated here.
* End all list items with a period, not just some of them.
* Reword a couple of sentences so that they don't start with command
  names.
* Reword a couple of confusing run-on sentences into more succinct
  sentences with a separate <note> with additional information.
* Add a couple of missing words and remove some extra words to
  construct sentences that make sense.
* Reworded paragraph with awkward "Either .. alternatively"
  construction.
* Correct a reference to the Amanda port so that it looks good in
  printed form.  Dima's <port> tag would be helpful here.
* Fix a couple of other minor typos.
2001-07-21 00:12:00 +00:00
Chern Lee
eaa53a21e1 Modified <indexterm>'s to be more specific with <filename>, <command>,
<application> and <username>.

Submitted by:	Valentino Vaschetto <valentino.vaschetto@windriver.com>
Reviewed by:	murray
2001-07-20 23:25:05 +00:00
Murray Stokely
7a328b6a9a SoftUpdates -> Soft Updates
Submitted by:	wollman
Verified by:    http://www.mckusick.com/softdep/index.html
2001-07-20 22:27:48 +00:00
Murray Stokely
9712416eae * Move attribution information into <chapterinfo>
* Remove myself from list of chapter authors, since I didn't really add
  very much.

* Add more <filename> and <varname> tags

* Use <varname> instead of <literal> around sysctl names

* Reword references to look better without the benefit of a hyperlink
  - <para>Please see &man.ata.4;.</para>
  + <para>For more information, please see &man.ata.4;.</para>

* Use 'SoftUpdates' consistently.

* Saying that an "error message shows up in dmesg" is a bit cryptic for
  new users, so explain that messages get sent to a system buffer that
  is viewed with the dmesg command.
2001-07-20 22:19:11 +00:00
Jesper Skriver
fa5c60bf9b Add ftp2.dk.FreeBSD.org and ftp3.dk.FreeBSD.org 2001-07-20 21:52:04 +00:00
Chern Lee
919197254e Make <indexterm> entries more specific by using <command> and
<filename> tags.

Submitted by:	Valentino Vaschetto <valentino.vaschetto@windriver.com>
Reviewed by:	murray
2001-07-20 21:44:45 +00:00
Chern Lee
1e99114452 Markup:
Placed applications in <application>
  Placed commands in <command>
  Placed hostnames in <hostid>
  Placed usernames in <username>
  Placed some terms in <literal>/<quote>
  Places some commands in man entities
  Changed some <filename> to <command> tags
  Placed files in <filename>

Spelling:
  linux -> Linux
  pc -> PC
  reckognized -> recognized
  initialise -> initialize
  behaviour -> behavior
  mountpath -> mount path (to spell check nicely although mountpoint would
  probably be more correct)

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-07-20 21:09:39 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
cb09e625c8 Don't mention TCP_RESTRICT_RST (it no longer exists), and add an Q&A
about limited logging.

PR:		29086
Submitted by:	marcs@draenor.org
2001-07-20 07:42:09 +00:00
Murray Stokely
a6695a0034 Correctly display local file links in the print stylesheet.
Local-file URLs are encoded as file://localhost/path/file which is
fine for HTML but this looks ugly when printed.

Add a function to chop off the "file://localhost" so that the above
URL would be printed as "/path/file" but still link to
"file://localhost/path/file" for HTML output.
2001-07-20 04:59:28 +00:00
Murray Stokely
14b35ee415 Modifications for the NICE_HEADERS case :
* Increase font size for chapter title.
  * Add a .5pt rule underneath the chapter title, before the content.
2001-07-20 02:53:08 +00:00
Chern Lee
a5c8708c40 Markup Fixes:
Placed sh, bash, csh, tcsh in <command>
  Placed commands in <command>
  Placed options in <option>
  Placed several commands in man entities
  Placed several applications in <application>
  Placed make vars/targets into <makevar>/<maketarget>
  Placed filenames in <filename>
  <literal>chmod()</literal> -> <function>chmod()</function>

Standardize:
  ATT -> AT&amp;T
  endeavour -> endeavor
  tcl -> Tcl

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-07-19 23:18:09 +00:00
Murray Stokely
d78ef2bfe3 Reorganize the Developer's Handbook.
* Add chapter on kernel debugging (repo-copied from the Handbook)
  * Change "Introduction" part with 4 empty chapters to a
    "Introduction" chapter with 4 mostly empty <sect1>s.
  * Combine many of the different <part>s that contain only one empty
    <chapter> into larger <part>s.
  * Add * in front of unfinished chapter names so its very clear what
    needs to be worked on.
  * Added some <filename> tags where appropriate.
2001-07-19 22:06:06 +00:00
Chern Lee
474756bf03 Markup Fixes:
Place some terms in <varname>
Change <emphasis> -> <varname> in some intstances
Place commands in <command> or man entitiy
Place applications in <application>
Place filenames in <filename>
Place hostnames in <hostid>
One instance of <quote> -> <errorname>

Spelling/Terminology Fixes:
ip -> IP address
IPs/ips -> IP addresses
cfg -> config
Unice -> Unix systems

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-07-19 18:38:43 +00:00
Hiroki Sato
d0343abca1 Fix typo. 2001-07-19 17:55:55 +00:00
Hiroki Sato
8ca695247e - Merge Makefiles to build individual chapters in handbook
and the following from the English version:

	(new) -> 1.1    advanced-networking/isdn-bus.eps
	(new) -> 1.1    advanced-networking/isdn-twisted-pair.eps
	(new) -> 1.1    advanced-networking/natd.eps
	1.34  -> 1.35 	backups/chapter.sgml
	1.29  -> 1.30 	basics/chapter.sgml
	1.14  -> 1.15 	boot/chapter.sgml
	1.453 -> 1.456	contrib/chapter.sgml
	1.58  -> 1.60 	eresources/chapter.sgml
	1.31  -> 1.33 	kerneldebug/chapter.sgml
	1.17  -> 1.18 	kernelopts/chapter.sgml
	1.50  -> 1.58 	l10n/chapter.sgml
	1.19  -> 1.21 	policies/chapter.sgml
	1.5   -> 1.7  	sound/chapter.sgml
	1.216 -> 1.225	staff/chapter.sgml
2001-07-19 16:25:29 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
fb12aad004 Remove ``cannot'' from the word list. We aren't building a
dictionary, so it doesn't make sense to list common, every-day words
with well-known spellings.  Besides, "can not" is a proper, albeit
confusing, construct.  For example:

	The quick brown fox can not jump over the lazy dog.

The above isn't saying that the fox isn't capable of jumping over the
dog, but rather that the fox is capable of *not* jumping over it
(e.g., it can walk around it).  It is confusing (and should be
avoided), but nonetheless valid, English.
2001-07-19 14:08:57 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
29eb89e99b Fix two spelling errors. 2001-07-19 13:56:12 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
68694fa912 Fix a spelling error. 2001-07-19 13:55:58 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
f34b8ab126 Rewrite a paragraph to make it less confusing. 2001-07-19 13:55:38 +00:00
Mark Pulford
97827e3906 Add Dmitry for a bugfix to net/rinetd 2001-07-19 12:58:52 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
438606e25d Correct a brain-o.
Submitted by:	Vladimir Tchoukharev <chu@mail.ru>
2001-07-19 12:03:00 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
1011e0acaa Assorted spelling, punctuation, and markup fixes.
PR:		28916
Submitted by:	Alex Kapranoff <kapr@acm.org>
2001-07-19 11:55:05 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
f312a3debb The second argument to DECLARE_MODULE is a moduledata_t, not a
modeventhand_t.
2001-07-19 10:37:35 +00:00
Bill Fumerola
90c1dd3801 there is no such list 'freebsd-commit', it's 'cvs-all'.
Submitted by:	Ashley Penney <ashp@unloved.org>
Reviewed by:	hub:{/etc/aliases,/g/majordomo.lists}
2001-07-19 10:31:01 +00:00
Murray Stokely
ac4e5c00e7 All references were removed to this appendix last week. The content
is now available as two tutorials.
2001-07-19 09:37:01 +00:00
Mark Pulford
2b2e65bb37 Add Adam Kranzel for his update to games/xrisk 2001-07-19 06:30:40 +00:00
Chern Lee
4df284c246 Made <indexterm>'s more specific by adding <filename>, <command>,
and <application> entities.

Submitted by:	Valentino Vaschetto <valentino.vaschetto@windriver.com>
Reviewed by:	murray
2001-07-19 01:11:52 +00:00
Ben Smithurst
9bb625166b Update my PGP key. 2001-07-18 19:57:36 +00:00
Hiroki Sato
f8f6502569 - Merge the following from the English version:
1.30  -> 1.40 	Makefile
	1.163 -> 1.172	authors.ent
	1.97  -> 1.106	book.sgml
	1.9   -> 1.15 	chapters.ent
	1.29  -> 1.34 	backups/chapter.sgml
	1.24  -> 1.29 	basics/chapter.sgml
	1.31  -> 1.33 	bibliography/chapter.sgml
	1.10  -> 1.14 	boot/chapter.sgml
	1.425 -> 1.453	contrib/chapter.sgml
	1.61  -> 1.76 	cutting-edge/chapter.sgml
	1.37  -> 1.41 	hw/chapter.sgml
	1.24  -> 1.33 	serialcomms/chapter.sgml

- a portion merged only needed to avoid breakage of building process:

	advanced-networking/chapter.sgml
2001-07-18 19:29:10 +00:00
Alexander Langer
1ab80fd709 Sync with FreeBSD German Documentation Project:
Bring this file in sync with original rev. 1.33.

Submitted by:	Frank Gruender <elwood@mc5sys.in-berlin.de>
2001-07-18 16:50:47 +00:00
Chern Lee
4593015dcc Modified existing <indexterm>'s to make them more specific using
<filename>, <command>, and <application> tags.

Submitted by:	Valentino Vaschetto <valentino.vaschetto@windriver.com>
Approved by:	murray
2001-07-17 23:33:28 +00:00
Chern Lee
3e8d98b70a Standardize:
TCL -> Tcl
ethernet -> Ethernet
ftp (noun) -> FTP

Approved by:	murray
2001-07-17 22:20:51 +00:00
Murray Stokely
93321474e5 Wrap author attribution in <chapterinfo>.
Reword a couple of run-on sentences to use better subject-verb
agreement.

Terminate all items in a list with a period, not just some of
them.

Add <username> and <application> tags as appropriate.

"pw(8) has the information"

doesn't look well without the benefits of a hyperlink.  Reword this to:

"For more information, please see pw(8)."

Update example to change shells to zsh since tcsh is now in the base
system.
2001-07-17 21:35:41 +00:00
Chern Lee
6dbf07d805 Fix/Standardize:
internet -> Internet
can not -> cannot
CD-ROM -> CDROM
cdrom -> CDROM
UNIX -> Unix

To be standardized with the rest of the doc tree.

Approved by:	murray
2001-07-17 20:51:52 +00:00
Alexey Zelkin
005639d0fb backout rev 1.4, usage of <email> here has made <legalnotice> header just ugly.
Obtained from:	The FreeBSD Russian Documentation Project
2001-07-17 07:54:18 +00:00
Murray Stokely
568e399b34 Enclose contributors in <sect1info> tags.
Remove extra prompts from <screen> examples.

Remove lame text telling the user to "Forget about it" if a port is
broken.

Use absolute links since relative links don't mean much in PostScript
form.
2001-07-17 02:45:19 +00:00
Murray Stokely
20ac95335e Enclose contributor names in <chapterinfo> tags.
Properly markup command names.
2001-07-17 02:31:55 +00:00
Murray Stokely
2a6d5f6c26 Add handlers for <chapterinfo>.
Also add a handler for <contrib> inside of <author> tags.

This should allow us to more formally define contributors to the
Handbook.
2001-07-17 02:22:29 +00:00
Murray Stokely
741499c6ac Remove references to Kernel Debugging and Source Policies chapters.
These will be moving to the Developer's Handbook shortly.
2001-07-17 01:37:39 +00:00
Dave Zarzycki
66f396ae7d Added myself. 2001-07-17 01:27:18 +00:00
Chern Lee
24f820a21d Add Internet, MHz, and Unix to official word list.
Approved by:	murray
2001-07-17 01:24:58 +00:00