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Bruce A. Mah
3f72e590f4 Grammar nit: s/try and/try to/
While I'm here, convert two <email></email>-style references to mailing lists
to use SGML entities.
2001-08-16 22:01:13 +00:00
Chern Lee
f3be431385 Spelling Fixes:
* signalling -> signaling
 * keypresses -> key presses
2001-08-16 18:42:51 +00:00
Chern Lee
6c21f4c1e9 Change all contractions to proper form.
don't -> do not
isn't -> is not
let's -> let us
... and so on
2001-08-16 18:35:08 +00:00
Nik Clayton
39348b56a9 Rewrite the intro material. Explain what partitions are. Nuke the
copy that talks about view.exe, makeflp.bat, install.bat, and others,
because they don't exist any more.

Move the copy about installing from MSDOS partitions, tapes, and so on,
to the end of this chapter.  It needs a lot more work first.
2001-08-16 16:09:16 +00:00
OKAZAKI Tetsurou
f1a1bd5ffc Add Shell Hung <shell@shellhung.org> to the list
of additional contributors for his port - devel/py-unit.
2001-08-16 11:25:40 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
b72265ea42 An increasing amount of documents use the -V flag to Jade via
JADEFLAGS to set variables such as %generate-article-toc%.  However,
JADEFLAGS is also passed to nsgmls, which doesn't, and shouldn't,
understand -V.  The Makefiles which do this are correct, because the
name--JADEFLAGS--implies that it will only be passed to Jade, not to
nsgmls, too.  Furthermore, simply not passing JADEFLAGS to nsgmls is
not okay, since nsgmls *does* need the -i flags used to
include/exclude certain parts of the document.

Remedy this by breaking up JADEFLAGS into itself and SGMLFLAGS.  The
latter will be passed to all SGML processors such as nsgmls and Jade.
The former will only be passed to Jade.  The -V flags should stay in
JADEFLAGS, and the -i flags should be moved to SGMLFLAGS.

This fixes `make lint` for documents which use -V via JADEFLAGS.

Reviewed by:	bmah
2001-08-16 05:19:51 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
c2eac56e0a Reference %authors by its PUBLIC rather than SYSTEM identifier. This
fixes the cases where the Developer's Handbook is separated from the
Handbook (i.e., different parent directories), and where authors.ent
is somewhere other than "../handbook".
2001-08-16 03:34:59 +00:00
Chern Lee
217d7f7563 Place LPD in <application> tag
Place some terms in <literal>
2001-08-16 00:43:32 +00:00
Valentino Vaschetto
bed164ab7f - Added missing close tags.
- Changed <contrib> information

Reviewed by:	chern
2001-08-15 20:14:42 +00:00
Chern Lee
e43bc3a4a6 Place usernames in <username> tags. 2001-08-15 20:08:25 +00:00
Valentino Vaschetto
a7678bbbb3 - Added <sect1info> for Christopher Shumway's x11 config section.
- Added a <contrib> inside of <sect1info> for Chris Shumway's sendmail
  config section.

Reviewed by:	chern
2001-08-15 19:40:17 +00:00
Valentino Vaschetto
354b853191 Changed printer name tagging from <hostid> to <literal>
Added <hostid> tags for hosts rose and orchid
Changed (where necessary) job's --> job is
                          queue's --> queue is
                          printer's --> printer is
                          bamboo's --> bamboo is
                          She's --> She is

PR:		29729
Submitted by:	John Murphy <jfm@blueyonder.co.uk>
Approved by:	murray
2001-08-15 18:41:10 +00:00
Valentino Vaschetto
127f34c7ea Changed "gnome-wm" to "gnome-session". Also wrapped them in <application>
tags.

PR:		29724
Approved by:	murray
2001-08-15 18:06:40 +00:00
Chern Lee
eb79cbbccf Spelling:
* approperate -> appropriate
 * incompatable -> incompatible

British -> English:
 * customise -> customize
2001-08-15 18:00:54 +00:00
Chern Lee
2fbbb3c1ef Update ISDN Cards section of Advanced Networking.
Submitted by: Hellmuth
Docs bullied out of Hellmuth by: murray
2001-08-15 17:55:32 +00:00
Jun Kuriyama
2bd00f53bc Add <para> element inside of <note> element to unbreak building. 2001-08-15 14:09:06 +00:00
Brian Somers
a0f1fadf90 Bring the first part of the ppp documentation up to date, more to come.
Bullied by: murray
2001-08-15 12:57:45 +00:00
Kazuo Horikawa
5fe4ee580d Revise Japanese wording. 2001-08-15 03:30:59 +00:00
Kazuo Horikawa
ecb3045452 Catch up with 4.3-20010813-STABLE. 2001-08-15 03:17:01 +00:00
Murray Stokely
6239ae1664 Add a section on basic sendmail configuration.
While I'm here, add <application> arround a couple of instances of
sendmail and remove a "This section taken from the FAQ" line since
that describes much of the Handbook.

Submitted by:	Chris Shumway <christopher.shumway@windriver.com>
2001-08-15 02:00:15 +00:00
Valentino Vaschetto
0f839c1480 Put ids into sect2 tags so that they can be xref'd
Approved by:	murray
2001-08-15 00:51:25 +00:00
Valentino Vaschetto
44f037c359 Added an id tag to a sect2 so we can link to it.
Approved by:	murray
2001-08-14 23:02:37 +00:00
Chern Lee
e6fa9f8fd0 Typos/Standardize Terminology:
* familar -> familiar
 * unix -> Unix
 * asterik -> asterisk
 * ethernet -> Ethernet
 * internet -> Internet
 * Installallation -> Installation

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-14 22:32:25 +00:00
Chern Lee
d9b1288ac8 Markup Changes, place terms in:
* <application>
 * <username>
 * <command>
 * <literal>
 * <devicename>

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-14 22:06:11 +00:00
Murray Stokely
388ddee70e Add scr -> png -> eps support, so that we can build Randy's new
Installation chapter with spiffy color screenshots of sysinstall.
2001-08-14 21:51:25 +00:00
Valentino Vaschetto
cff40462a9 Added a close para tag which was missing.
Reviewed by:	obrien
Approved by:	murray
2001-08-14 21:29:28 +00:00
Eric Melville
cc03e6b968 Use updated address entity. 2001-08-14 19:07:27 +00:00
Eric Melville
0ac25c56f4 Update to list correct address. 2001-08-14 19:04:10 +00:00
Murray Stokely
4ded04a8b1 Revert previous commit. You can't remove someone from this file if
the entity is still in use.

Pointed out by: wosch
2001-08-14 16:55:23 +00:00
Randy Pratt
83ad15c9e0 Import my install guide with screenshots to replace the old install chapter.
Approved by:	Murray
2001-08-14 07:37:05 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
193ea39de1 Mark up sysctl variables in <varname>. 2001-08-14 06:48:46 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
eda6e9701d sysctl variables should be marked up in <varname>, not <literal>. 2001-08-14 06:43:35 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
5d5655b8c2 Assorted punctuation, grammar, and typo fixes.
PR:		29566
Submitted by:	John Murphy <jfm@blueyonder.co.uk>
2001-08-14 06:30:58 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
daccd2d939 NFS is not unique or unusual, so don't all it so. It's different from
some of the more conventional filesystems, but pseudo-filesystems are
more unusual (at least NFS stores data), and all filesystems are
"unique" by definition.

PR:		29503
Approved by:	jim
2001-08-14 05:28:12 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
e5faa9239e Add a missing character, remove an extraneous parenthesis, and move a
period out of <literal>.

PR:		29866
Submitted by:	Saeki Takashi <saeki@jp.FreeBSD.org>
2001-08-14 05:24:23 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
4cc873c196 Match beginning and ending tag names.
PR:		29655
Submitted by:	Peter Johnson <freebsd@bilogic.org>
2001-08-14 05:22:57 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
5b273a9676 Move the sgmltag comment to where it belongs (i.e., above the sgmltag
code, not in the middle of no man's land).

PR:		29655
Submitted by:	Peter Johnson <freebsd@bilogic.org>
2001-08-14 05:18:06 +00:00
Chern Lee
57e42b9704 Add a standard sypnosis to the Configuration and Tuning chapter.
Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-14 00:37:13 +00:00
Eric Melville
88aeb3d23b Add Wylie Stilwell for his handbook contributions. 2001-08-13 21:33:33 +00:00
Eric Melville
40bf750ecf Remove defunct address entity. 2001-08-13 21:23:53 +00:00
Jim Mock
74dca37255 Add periods to the ends of the sentences in the synopsis. While I'm
here, wrap inetd in <command></command> tags and /etc/rc in
<filename></filename> tags.
2001-08-13 19:05:55 +00:00
Jim Mock
80761b83da Whitespace changes only, translators can ignore this commit.
* Two spaces after a period.

   * Fix up the spacing in the listitems.

     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para></para>
       </listitem>

       <listitem>
         <para></para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>

     This is covered in the fdp-primer.  Please read it.
2001-08-13 19:03:39 +00:00
Valentino Vaschetto
becdab0f46 Added a standardized chapter synopsis. 2001-08-13 18:46:37 +00:00
Chern Lee
34153285f8 Rewrite NFS/amd section. Better English, more concise and informative.
Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-13 18:38:28 +00:00
Jim Mock
9868f98abe Fix a few nits...
* We don't use wu-ftpd.  Nuke the text that says we do.

  * ###MB -> ### MB

  * ###MHz -> ### MHz

  * kernel config file -> kernel configuration file
2001-08-13 06:49:29 +00:00
Jim Mock
20a3ac82d8 Fix the explanation of src/share.
PR:		29666
Submitted by:	Alexey V. Neyman <alex.neyman@auriga.ru>
2001-08-13 06:38:59 +00:00
Nik Clayton
e7d581ed3b Fix a typo in a URL. 2001-08-12 23:31:08 +00:00
Murray Stokely
f2c87859c5 /ports/ -> /usr/ports/ 2001-08-12 20:17:49 +00:00
Murray Stokely
8f9f5235dd Move indexterm outside of <qandaentry><question>. This is another
place where an indexterm will have a subtle effect on the printed
output (extra newline).
2001-08-12 20:16:11 +00:00
Murray Stokely
7928e44f14 * Add Rich Murphey's name back into the attributions for this chapter.
His name was apparently accidently removed when we moved to the
  <chapterinfo> scheme.
* Add a standard synopsis to this chapter.
* Remove gratuitous "For information about <title of next section>,
  see <number of next section>".
* Use <xref> instead of a <link> to Ports chapter.
* Clean up the section about KLDs and enabling Linux compatibility.
2001-08-12 20:13:54 +00:00