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Author SHA1 Message Date
Randy Pratt
36d29585cb Update security options image for release (4.4)
Approved by:	murray
2001-08-22 21:43:46 +00:00
Chern Lee
a14cad024a Change standard chapter sypnosis to form complete sentences:
Before reading this chapter you should:
 "understand"...
 "be familiar with"...
2001-08-22 21:40:11 +00:00
Chern Lee
ec971dcb65 Place a host -> gateway list into an informaltable. 2001-08-22 21:36:25 +00:00
Randy Pratt
9228cffe4f Add new section for configuring internet services (inetd).
Update security section to reflect options in 4.4

Approved by:	murray
2001-08-22 20:38:03 +00:00
Pete Fritchman
ec8da550a0 - add an entity for myself
- remove myself from the additional contributors section and add myself
  to the developers section

Reviewed by:	ade
2001-08-22 19:07:58 +00:00
Chern Lee
b3359c0e63 British English -> American English:
* organisation -> organization
* organise -> organize
* optimisation -> optimization
* optimises -> optimizes
* artefacts -> artifacts

Spelling:
* asociated -> associated
2001-08-22 18:12:57 +00:00
Murray Stokely
a75ba4dd47 Add a missing word. 2001-08-22 07:20:20 +00:00
Murray Stokely
3719fb1927 Add a standard synopsis. 2001-08-22 07:16:36 +00:00
Murray Stokely
38d20a3b6a Add standard synopsis. 2001-08-22 06:53:19 +00:00
Murray Stokely
45a6f3aa67 Standardize the synopsis. 2001-08-22 06:32:24 +00:00
Murray Stokely
bad8c085ff Standardize the synopsis. 2001-08-22 06:08:03 +00:00
Murray Stokely
c42ea2c2ae Terminate synopsis listitems with a period.
Also give more information about prerequisites :

 "* Understand Unix permissions and processes (Chapter 3)."

instead of :

 "* Read chapter 3"
2001-08-22 05:37:50 +00:00
Murray Stokely
a35f10b668 Standardize the synopsis. (List of what the reader will learn by
reading this chapter, and another list of what the reader is expected
to already know.)
2001-08-22 05:07:12 +00:00
Murray Stokely
2fa6b7ef3f Reword part of the synopsis in a slightly more formal way. Remove a
"Should you have any questions or suggestions, please email the
author" line that doesn't belong in an individual chapter.
2001-08-21 23:44:13 +00:00
Murray Stokely
141a46306d Fix typo to form a complete sentence. 2001-08-21 23:42:50 +00:00
Nik Clayton
09772d9161 Add in a reference to disk-layout.eps, replacing the ASCII art for non-text
users.

Add much more information about the process of labelling a slice to create
partitions.
2001-08-21 23:42:44 +00:00
Nik Clayton
cd53ebd94e Change the size of the root filesystem shown to 64MB. 2001-08-21 23:39:26 +00:00
Nik Clayton
5dac2ba06c List disk-layout.eps in IMAGES. 2001-08-21 23:38:28 +00:00
Nik Clayton
9b3c17ae99 EPS file (and it's Kontour original) that diagrams the relationship between
a disk, its slices, and its partitions.
2001-08-21 23:35:53 +00:00
Valentino Vaschetto
6f8e9237fc Close para and sect1 tags in regard to the "4.4-RC: errors in doc build"
thread in freebsd-doc.

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-21 20:16:45 +00:00
Kazuo Horikawa
384a778268 Revise Japanese wording 2001-08-21 06:14:26 +00:00
Kazuo Horikawa
a942ceccc1 Fix typo in macro:
o remove remaining .TP from mdoc manpage sasc.1
o replace .Qt (non-existent macro) with .Pq in make.conf.5
2001-08-21 03:41:38 +00:00
Chern Lee
34fbc5dd5e Cosmetic changes. Placed a couple lists into <informaltable>s. 2001-08-20 22:13:36 +00:00
Nik Clayton
1d69567324 Continue building on Randy's work, and document the installation process
some more.  Got as far as describing FreeBSD's Disk / Slice /
Partition / Filesystem model, and touring around FDisk.
2001-08-20 21:46:50 +00:00
Chern Lee
d9b35c6b35 Nitpick English changes to make the chapter more understandable. 2001-08-20 18:48:45 +00:00
Bruce A. Mah
3752f1a2de Add manpage entity for digictl(8). 2001-08-20 17:34:10 +00:00
Kazuo Horikawa
fa1120db43 Add missing .El. 2001-08-20 02:51:16 +00:00
Kazuo Horikawa
f336e6b58b Removal of arg for .Os.
Update of origianl reivsion number in comment.
2001-08-20 01:01:32 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
714709b545 Assorted mechanical fixes.
PR:		29806
Submitted by:	John Murphy <jfm@blueyonder.co.uk>
2001-08-19 23:58:56 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
fc6f13aedb Correct a typo.
PR:		29852
Submitted by:	Vladimir Tchoukharev <chu@h33.erkki.ton.tut.fi>
2001-08-19 23:54:35 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
a5259a5dfe Remove a duplicate word, and don't claim to be crazy enough to run
wu-ftpd.

PR:		29869
Submitted by:	Alex Kapranoff <alex@kapran.bitmcnit.bryansk.su>
2001-08-19 23:46:43 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
0e9f501c62 Add a missing period. 2001-08-19 23:43:57 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
900520b222 Note that the resolv.conf directive is "nameserver", not "name
server", add a missing word, and note that newsyslog starts counting
from 0.

PR:		29874
Submitted by:	Martin Heinen <mheinen0@wiesbaden-online.de>
2001-08-19 23:43:26 +00:00
Jim Mock
60858d58a9 pseudo-device bpfilter -> pseudo-device bpf
PR:		29872
Submitted by:	Dominic Marks <dominic_marks@btinternet.com>
2001-08-19 18:51:53 +00:00
Kazuo Horikawa
abe7e2aebf Add missing .El
Remove empty lines
Fix typo in macros

Reported by: groff -t -ww -z -mandoc -Tnippon -dlang=ja_JP.eucJP -mtty-char
2001-08-19 10:25:07 +00:00
Kazuo Horikawa
b986084534 Catch up with 4.4-RC-20010819-JPSNAP.
These files contain only markup changes.
2001-08-19 07:14:31 +00:00
Kazuo Horikawa
33c3de3a79 Catch up with 4.4-20010819-JPSNAP.
These files contain contents changes (non markup changes).
2001-08-19 06:53:25 +00:00
Kazuo Horikawa
632fcd2e85 4.3-RELEASE based section 3 manual pages.
(Yes, they are 4.3-RELEASE based translations).

Submitted by:jpman project <man-jp@jp.FreeBSD.org>
Reviewed by:Yuko Sasaki <yuko@veltec.co.jp>
2001-08-19 04:06:11 +00:00
Kazuo Horikawa
a8bd2ab848 Fix mis-translations for the word "angle bracket". 2001-08-19 01:14:21 +00:00
Kazuo Horikawa
c228f00baa Forced commit.
Previous commit contains following change:
o telnetd.8 is now src/crypto/telnet/telnetd/telnetd.8 based,
  instead of src/libexec/telnetd/telnetd.8 based.
2001-08-19 00:07:19 +00:00
Kazuo Horikawa
06846f438a Catch up with 4.4-RC-20010818-JPSNAP.
These files contains markup only changes.
2001-08-18 23:50:59 +00:00
Kazuo Horikawa
379c12b1b3 Catch up with 4.4-RC-20010818-JPSNAP.
These files contain contents changes (non markup changes).
2001-08-18 23:48:10 +00:00
Nik Clayton
865bdc5f3f Stand on Randy Pratt's shoulders, and add to the copy describing the process
of preparing to install FreeBSD, and the actions up to and including the
kernel device configuration section.
2001-08-17 23:21:42 +00:00
Bruce A. Mah
095f51ac9f Add entry for ispppcontrol(8). 2001-08-17 15:47:07 +00:00
Kazuo Horikawa
d4a3bc9872 Fix a typo 2001-08-17 06:26:56 +00:00
Kazuo Horikawa
1535e1443f Mostly mdoc(7) related changes like:
o .Os args removal
o .Bx, .Nx, and .Bsx use
o .Pq, Po, Pc to ( and ) replacement

.Ex related changes are not reflected, since ja-groff-1.17.2 does not
support it yet.  After it .Ex is supported, remaining changes can be
incorporated.
2001-08-17 06:18:17 +00:00
Kazuo Horikawa
cd6ea5e22e Cath up with 4.4-RC-20010817-JPSNAP 2001-08-17 06:07:23 +00:00
Max Khon
384b4ba74a - add entity for myself
- remove myself from 'Additional Contributors', add myself to
'FreeBSD Developers'

Reviewed by:	jdp
2001-08-17 06:01:34 +00:00
Kazuo Horikawa
fae04e128a Catch up with 4.4-RC-20010817-JPSNAP 2001-08-17 05:42:09 +00:00
Randy Pratt
ef1865c3ad added tags to separate two authors </authorgroup><authorgroup>
Approved by:	murray
2001-08-16 22:27:18 +00:00