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Author SHA1 Message Date
Marc Fonvieille
05a4f6ddd4 - Use of manual page entity
- Use of various tags
- Some rewordings to avoid contractions and to start a sentence with an
  application name etc.
2002-12-31 15:29:03 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
5d15680d9e Add wepmode on in ifconfig(8) command lines to enable WEP on wireless
cards.  Without this option it just creates a key nothing more.

Submitted by:	Chris Stuart <firewolf@lightningfire.net>
2002-12-31 12:31:01 +00:00
Ceri Davies
cd110df402 - natd address translation -> Network Address Translation
- IPSec -> IPsec
	- mozilla+ipv6 was removed from the ports tree some time ago,
	  so reference mozilla instead
	- Remove a contradiction
	- punctuation fixes

PR:		docs/46093
Submitted by:	Christian Brueffer <chris@unixpages.org>
2002-12-08 20:55:18 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
6b53067695 Add infos about devfs(5) where needed. 2002-12-01 23:00:42 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
e1ac948ad2 Various fixes in Parallel Line IP section:
- remove contractions
- punctuation fixes
- use of manual page entities and hostid tags
2002-11-30 22:49:07 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
883c5e4b09 Fix quote problems in using correct tags. 2002-11-27 20:38:02 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
53002c3619 Punctuation fix. 2002-11-27 19:46:00 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
742b3832bd Mark up hostnames with <hostid>. 2002-11-26 22:59:05 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
fe710655da Remove a bunch of contractions. 2002-11-25 22:31:15 +00:00
Ceri Davies
9225253f6e Add a section on Wireless Networking.
PR:		docs/44143
Submitted by:	Eric Anderson <anderson@centtech.com>
2002-10-23 18:32:49 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
dba97efd9e Fix IP address in local net example.
PR:		www/41306
Submitted by:	Clive <clive@beyondredemption.net>
2002-10-23 18:11:02 +00:00
Ceri Davies
47dd481064 Correct ifconfig syntax.
PR:		docs/44047
Submitted by:	Lukas Ertl <l.ertl@univie.ac.at>
2002-10-14 19:17:13 +00:00
Martin Heinen
be9730c884 Break long lines introduced by adding hostid tags.
While I'm here insert two spaces at the end of sentences.

This is a whitespace change only, translators can ignore this commit.

Approved by:	alex (mentor)
2002-10-14 08:13:47 +00:00
Martin Heinen
e06a5c36e5 Add hostid tags for IP addresses and netmasks.
Approved by:	alex (mentor)
2002-10-13 18:17:34 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
86f5f15711 Fix a broken link.
PR:		docs/43983
Submitted by:	Byron Schlemmer <freebsd@byron.me.uk>
2002-10-12 19:46:48 +00:00
Martin Heinen
e917389fe1 Add <hostid> tags for hostnames and domainnames
Approved by:	alex (mentor)
2002-10-08 07:41:22 +00:00
Ceri Davies
efe92b3f28 The handbook has had a section on configuring a DHCP server for months now.
Stop claiming otherwise.

PR:		docs/43279
Submitted by:	<adam@vectors.cx>
2002-09-30 18:00:22 +00:00
Murray Stokely
da6ef2fb7c Use non-breaking spaces.
PR:		docs/41546
Submitted by:	Martin Heinen <martin@sumuk.de>
2002-09-30 15:42:53 +00:00
Ceri Davies
bdcc3a6f26 Whitespace cleanup. 2002-09-16 18:24:05 +00:00
Ceri Davies
382ec76d02 Be more specific regarding why people may want to create a symlink to
/etc/namedb/var/run/ndc on each boot.

Suggested by:	A discussion with Stacey Roberts <stacey@Demon.vickiandstacey.com>
2002-09-15 21:05:19 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
9824c1b592 Grammar fixes. 2002-08-31 16:37:41 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
4d54e88881 - Convert net/etherboot to a package/port link.
- Fix minor grammar: s/enable NFS service/enable NFS/
- Expand a bit 'workstation' and remove excessive punctuation.
- Tag rc.conf and README as <filename>'s.
- Remove reference to PRs conf/31200 and conf/29870, since
  they have been fixed.
2002-08-31 05:38:25 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
f3cb2d253e Avoid using rc.conf twice in the same sentence. 2002-08-31 05:04:58 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
f82237865d Add short decription of showmount(8) before an example of its use. 2002-08-31 05:01:14 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
fdd33a19f7 - Tag an /etc/exports extract as <literal>.
- Change signal name s/hangup/HUP/.
- Remove duplicate /cdrom description from common NFS uses.
2002-08-31 04:56:09 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
b25fed09b4 Tag a couple of <replaceable>'s 2002-08-31 04:44:04 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
4becf1ccee Kill EOL spaces. 2002-08-31 04:09:33 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
10f5a39989 <quote> properly. 2002-08-31 03:57:33 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
ab7bc2c634 Add missing </para> 2002-08-31 03:38:16 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
795b8a1bb3 Reword description of routing table "Flags"
and remove redundant sentence.
2002-08-31 03:30:08 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
96dad4fd2d Don't use strange capitalisation for "multicasting". 2002-08-31 03:24:01 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
1c548b44c3 Avoid using 'it' where it might be ambiguous. 2002-08-31 02:41:59 +00:00
Ceri Davies
1f915fa21a Update the handbook in line with recent changes to bridge(4).
PR:		docs/41826
Submitted by:	Steve Peterson <steve@zpfe.com>
2002-08-27 19:19:20 +00:00
Tom Rhodes
ccb57dc1af Add a section on IPv6 as required.
PR:		41109
2002-08-26 22:13:22 +00:00
Ceri Davies
bb4c4c0d75 Make consistent use of <userinput> throughout the handbook. 2002-08-18 16:47:22 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
31bc5a9c8d Remove deprecated -w option for sysctl.
PR:		docs/41666
Submitted by:	Mark Stosberg <mark@summersault.com>
2002-08-15 21:05:21 +00:00
Tom Rhodes
d4b003e30a FreeBSD documentation project prefers to use manual pages over man pages,
hence some documents should reflect this.

Tossed around on: -doc -developers
2002-07-11 19:08:31 +00:00
Ceri Davies
8aa3f55def Spell "synopsis" correctly. 2002-06-15 18:56:56 +00:00
Tom Rhodes
9ba764ae23 Consistancy checks: s/file system/filesystem/g 2002-05-16 01:42:28 +00:00
Ceri Davies
7a2585094e Fix a broken link I introduced the other day. 2002-05-07 10:43:06 +00:00
Ceri Davies
384fe01e69 Bridges don't route, routers do. 2002-05-07 10:36:51 +00:00
Ceri Davies
d5734f8a6d Kill use of domain.com in favour of example.com. 2002-05-05 14:18:51 +00:00
Ceri Davies
b98110ec33 Be consistent with use of <literal> surrounding sysctl values. 2002-05-05 14:13:25 +00:00
Ceri Davies
e5221761ac Typo/grammar fixes.
This commit can be safely ignored by translators.
2002-05-05 14:09:55 +00:00
Ceri Davies
0e6ea0f2cb Punctuation fixes. 2002-05-05 14:02:09 +00:00
Ceri Davies
d09b6d943d Change one instance of "man pages" to "manual pages". 2002-05-05 13:50:30 +00:00
Ceri Davies
b6350afd2f Mark up some ports with <filename role="package">. 2002-05-05 13:45:28 +00:00
Ceri Davies
e8872481c8 Add a period for consistency. 2002-05-05 11:59:44 +00:00
Ceri Davies
5ae67b1827 Where appropriate, s/in to/into/. 2002-05-04 14:22:35 +00:00
Ceri Davies
5693e26a0d Whitespace cleanup from last commit.
No content changes.

Approved by:	murray
2002-04-29 12:22:30 +00:00
Ceri Davies
35716bf6ec Wrap root in <username>.
PR:		docs/37532
Submitted by:	Martin Heinen <martin@sumuk.de>
Approved by:	murray
2002-04-29 12:14:08 +00:00
Ceri Davies
4b70a8662d Correct a typo.
Approved by:	murray
Pointed out by:	Benny <FierceOne@web.de>
2002-04-07 11:32:07 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
6ddd2cc0dc Fix &entities; that lacked an ending ';' character,
as reported by the following:

	% cd doc/en_US.ISO8859-1
	% find . -type f -name '*.sgml' |\
	  xargs grep '&[^[:space:];&][^[:space:];]*$' | grep -v '&$'
	% find . -type f -name '*.sgml' |\
	  xargs grep '&[^[:space:];&][^[:space:];]*[[:space:]<]' |\
	  grep -v '&[[: space:]]' | grep -v '[[:space:]]&&[[:space:]]'
2002-03-27 01:16:55 +00:00
Ceri Davies
0f7e5b5a85 Whitespace-only commit.
No content changes.

Approved by:	murray
2002-03-26 09:57:01 +00:00
Ceri Davies
6fa6b2326c Various cleanups in the DHCP server section.
Requested by:	dd
Approved by:	dd, murray
2002-03-24 18:59:48 +00:00
Ceri Davies
65179058be Fix the build after my last commit.
Approved by:	murray
Pointy hat to:	ceri
2002-03-24 00:13:53 +00:00
Ceri Davies
6353f131fc Add a section on installing and configuring a DHCP server.
Reviewed by:	murray
Approved by:	murray
PR:		docs/32229
2002-03-23 23:50:23 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
afaee863ed Reword a few parts of the amd section.
Remove extraneous 'the' from /etc/fstab reference.

PR:		docs/35683
Submitted by:	Tom Rhodes <darklogik@pittgoth.com>
2002-03-22 06:30:31 +00:00
Peter Pentchev
bcfe650cbc Fix a typo.
Submitted by:	"Lukasz" <lukaszr@takeoverinc.com>
2002-03-20 16:16:57 +00:00
Peter Pentchev
eed41e97e6 Convert the names, descriptions and e-mail addresses of FreeBSD
committers and mailing lists to &a.xxx; entities.

Reviewed by:	keramida
Approved by:	keramida, silence on -doc
2002-03-15 07:46:22 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
5eb43a8183 Fix some errors in the chrooting named section of the Handbook.
PR:		docs/35420
Submitted by:	Ceri <setantae@submonkey.net>
2002-03-07 23:55:11 +00:00
Michael Lucas
e4e67f3452 Massive update to the NFS chapter.
This update has been bounced around, revised, rewritten, and audited
by darn near every member of the -doc team.

Submitted by: Tom Rhodes
PR: docs/35098
2002-03-07 21:19:11 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
fcfccd4a32 <port>fish</port> -> <filename role="package">fish</filename>
Generated with:	s:<port>(.*?)</port>:<filename role="package">\1</filename>:g
2002-02-27 05:08:13 +00:00
Chern Lee
4d2e3c038e Add a note to chroot named section.
PR:		docs/35278
Submitted by:	Ceri <setantae@submonkey.net>
2002-02-26 09:44:00 +00:00
Chern Lee
170031e812 Suggest freebsd-security-notifications over freebsd-announce for security
issues.

PR:		docs/34578
Submitted by:	Yonatan Bokovza <yonatan@xpert.com> and
		Szilveszter Adam <sziszi@bsd.hu>
2002-02-06 11:04:59 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
11c96d0541 The net/isc-dhcp2 port has been removed in favor of net/isc-dhcp3.
PR:		docs/34496
Submitted by:	Ceri <setantae@submonkey.net>
2002-02-03 02:33:06 +00:00
Michael Lucas
dbe4533ce3 Introducing the new PLIP Handbook chapter.
Content chainsawed from various FAQs.

This is a short chapter, and I'm not certain just how "advanced" it
is, but it doesn't fit in any other section of the FAQ.
2002-01-28 11:46:50 +00:00
Michael Lucas
c3571e83c7 whitespace cleanup from last commit 2002-01-28 09:47:49 +00:00
Michael Lucas
470e6b9719 migrate NFS instructions from FAQ to Handbook 2002-01-28 09:43:27 +00:00
Michael Lucas
82a03d6616 Teach the Handbook how to build a router.
Text taken from FAQ and slightly edited to mesh w/Handbook.
2002-01-23 08:51:24 +00:00
Murray Stokely
9070813ac1 Typo.
PR:		docs/33252
Submitted by:	Ceri <setantae@submonkey.net>
2002-01-01 09:53:57 +00:00
Chern Lee
adfc20c931 Completely revise section on running named in a sandbox.
Submitted by:	Ceri <setantae@submonkey.net>
PR:		docs/32381
2001-12-22 01:41:16 +00:00
Murray Stokely
b3df6b4c8a Correct the path for the 'clone_root' example script.
Submitted by:	Ronald Klop <ronald@klop.yi.org>
2001-12-15 05:29:18 +00:00
Murray Stokely
a15f897fee Correct an innaccuracy. (We do in fact include ISC DHCP with FreeBSD
4.4, just not the newest v3.X).
2001-11-14 15:59:15 +00:00
Murray Stokely
5006154fd6 Improve the grammar of several sentences.
PR:		31951
Submitted by:	Jean-Francois Dockes <jean-francois.dockes@wanadoo.fr>
2001-11-14 15:56:09 +00:00
Murray Stokely
e0432ef7e9 * Correct links
* s/freebsd.org/FreeBSD.org
* Use relative links wherever possible

PR:		docs/31447
Submitted by:	Cyrille Lefevre <clefevre@citeweb.net>
Found by:	linbot
2001-10-23 22:12:46 +00:00
Chern Lee
cea250d5cb Split some paragraphs/strings into two so the print output does not
flow off page.
2001-10-17 20:16:03 +00:00
Murray Stokely
597ccea2b5 Use example.com or example.org for domain names in examples instead of
variations of "foobar" and the like.

Submitted by:	nik and dougb (per RFC 2606)
2001-10-17 06:49:07 +00:00
Murray Stokely
bb4f2b8bb0 Use 'example.com' or 'example.org' for example domain names.
Submitted by:	nik as per RFC 2606
2001-10-17 04:34:04 +00:00
Murray Stokely
4c5f65dfb8 s/foobardomain/foobar/
Example domain names that are used inline should be kept as short as
possible.  Domain names can not be broken up with hyphenation at
syllable boundaries for obvious reasons, and using 12 unbreakable
characters is bound to cause an hbox overflow when creating justified
output with TeX (the print backend).
2001-10-16 18:49:55 +00:00
Chern Lee
368e669d00 * Add a few indexterms to NTP section
* Properly capitalize titles of NTP/Diskless Operation sections

* Spelling Fixes:
  emphasising -> emphasizing
  overiden -> overidden
  overlayed -> overlaid
  ethernet -> Ethernet

* Minor markup changes
2001-10-13 22:11:15 +00:00
Chern Lee
2b432f7183 Completely update the Diskless Operation section.
Submitted by:	Jean-Francois Dockes <jean-francois.dockes@wanadoo.fr>
2001-10-13 01:39:02 +00:00
Murray Stokely
06cbc5862b Correct capitalization in the chapter synopsis. 2001-10-13 01:04:07 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
4593fd98a7 Sweep through english docs and replace &ldquot; and friends with <quote>.
Approved by:	nik
2001-10-10 11:47:30 +00:00
Chern Lee
dd01434120 Fix prepositional phrases in Sypnosis:
* After reading this chapter you will know:
   -> After reading this chapter, you will know:
 * Before reading this chapter you should:
   -> Before reading this chapter, you should:
2001-10-08 20:30:51 +00:00
Tom Hukins
0332b5bc7d Add subsection describing NTP (Network Time Protocol) 2001-10-02 12:50:00 +00:00
Udo Erdelhoff
d4c848f394 Improvements of the NIS section
PR:		docs/29215
2001-10-02 05:45:00 +00:00
Chern Lee
74c4bf6395 RFCs are no longer on the web at
http://info.internet.isi.edu:80/in-notes/rfc/files/rfcXXXX.txt

Update three instances to correct location.

Partially Submitted by: Kjetil Høie" <kjetil-h@freenix.no>
2001-09-21 22:18:39 +00:00
Murray Stokely
f0042b1654 Reword a couple of sentences that I found very confusing. Often this
was due to missing words or sentences that made it very difficult to
understand the text.
2001-08-24 07:27:05 +00:00
Chern Lee
a14cad024a Change standard chapter sypnosis to form complete sentences:
Before reading this chapter you should:
 "understand"...
 "be familiar with"...
2001-08-22 21:40:11 +00:00
Chern Lee
ec971dcb65 Place a host -> gateway list into an informaltable. 2001-08-22 21:36:25 +00:00
Chern Lee
34fbc5dd5e Cosmetic changes. Placed a couple lists into <informaltable>s. 2001-08-20 22:13:36 +00:00
Chern Lee
d9b35c6b35 Nitpick English changes to make the chapter more understandable. 2001-08-20 18:48:45 +00:00
Chern Lee
f3be431385 Spelling Fixes:
* signalling -> signaling
 * keypresses -> key presses
2001-08-16 18:42:51 +00:00
Chern Lee
6c21f4c1e9 Change all contractions to proper form.
don't -> do not
isn't -> is not
let's -> let us
... and so on
2001-08-16 18:35:08 +00:00
Chern Lee
2fbbb3c1ef Update ISDN Cards section of Advanced Networking.
Submitted by: Hellmuth
Docs bullied out of Hellmuth by: murray
2001-08-15 17:55:32 +00:00
Valentino Vaschetto
0f839c1480 Put ids into sect2 tags so that they can be xref'd
Approved by:	murray
2001-08-15 00:51:25 +00:00
Chern Lee
d9b1288ac8 Markup Changes, place terms in:
* <application>
 * <username>
 * <command>
 * <literal>
 * <devicename>

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-14 22:06:11 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
daccd2d939 NFS is not unique or unusual, so don't all it so. It's different from
some of the more conventional filesystems, but pseudo-filesystems are
more unusual (at least NFS stores data), and all filesystems are
"unique" by definition.

PR:		29503
Approved by:	jim
2001-08-14 05:28:12 +00:00
Jim Mock
74dca37255 Add periods to the ends of the sentences in the synopsis. While I'm
here, wrap inetd in <command></command> tags and /etc/rc in
<filename></filename> tags.
2001-08-13 19:05:55 +00:00