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Murray Stokely
ea5883b1d9 Add brief synopses of the new Mandatory Access Control and Network Servers
chapters of the Handbook.
2004-07-13 07:02:34 +00:00
Murray Stokely
c380a4da16 Improvements to the NTP section:
* Remove redundant sentence from introduction.
* Web server -> web server
* Add another example about why it's important to have an accurate clock
  (consistent timestamps on a shared fileserver)
2004-07-13 06:37:41 +00:00
Denis Peplin
e6c052b9c3 Fix crontab example for checkout every twelve hours 2004-07-13 06:21:04 +00:00
Murray Stokely
53d23b97e7 Clarify a sentence about configuring inetd. 2004-07-13 06:18:53 +00:00
Murray Stokely
bdd1483cee Use &nis; entity so that NIS is properly enclosed in <acronym> tags. 2004-07-13 05:55:02 +00:00
Murray Stokely
08cc311722 Properly close acronym tag. 2004-07-13 05:48:14 +00:00
Murray Stokely
0b77e3db95 The acronym 'NIS' is used over 150 times in the network-servers
chapter alone of the Handbook.  Add an entity here, used with &nis;,
so that we can mark up each of those with <acronym>NIS</acronym>
without bloating the source SGML files too much.  We shouldn't add
every such acronym here, but in the case of NIS it really helps the
readability.
2004-07-13 05:45:52 +00:00
Murray Stokely
2427cd68b8 1. Move the section about inetd to the beginning of this chapter, rather
than the end.

2. Also, avoid acronyms in sect1 title's where possible.  Prefer Network
File System (NFS), Network Information System (NIS/YP), etc.. to just
the acronyms alone.

(2) Suggested by:	tom@
2004-07-13 05:32:42 +00:00
Murray Stokely
6f04b3910f Add prerequisites to the chapter synopsis. Users should know how to
build and install a custom kernel before reading these chapters.
2004-07-13 05:19:27 +00:00
Murray Stokely
1ffd2e8bc6 The advanced networking chapter had grown to almost 100 pages.
Split out the sections about network servers into a new chapter.

Reviewed by:	doc@
2004-07-13 03:48:29 +00:00
Simon L. B. Nielsen
bb5a806683 Actually include the glossary again... it is not included automatically
since since the generic make variable only add real chapters that are
called "chapter.sgml".

Pointy hat to:	simon
Noticed by:	ceri
2004-07-12 22:49:18 +00:00
Simon L. B. Nielsen
e111749acf Add an id attributes to the sect1 tags that does not have one already.
This fixes filenames like x31.html, which is generated in html-split
mode, that somebody will end up linking to at some point.
2004-07-12 22:25:11 +00:00
Simon L. B. Nielsen
3cdb8b5b09 - Make decencies work for the Glossary, so the Handbook is rebuild
when the Glossary is updated.
- While I'm here; sort a SRCS entry missed in revision 1.86.

Prodded by:	ceri [1]
2004-07-12 21:58:13 +00:00
Simon L. B. Nielsen
8b2c84f627 Retire the WITH_GLOSSARY option and enable the Glossary by default.
No objections:	-doc
2004-07-12 20:24:41 +00:00
Ceri Davies
169eed0d21 Whitespace cleanup from previous revision. 2004-07-12 20:01:06 +00:00
Ceri Davies
30feffd84b o Remove the requirement that this file contain FreeBSD specific
terminology.

o Be more specific in the comment about sorting within this file.
2004-07-12 19:59:54 +00:00
Hiroki Sato
c77902a017 Back out the previous change. The center justification is
intended for the abstract, not the title and the authorgroup.
2004-07-12 15:45:21 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
fe5a5bb798 Add a new translated article.
Submitted by:	Laust S. Jespersen <Laust@doc.freebsd.dk>
2004-07-12 13:09:30 +00:00
Denis Peplin
490c7741a0 Forced commit: previous update was 1.9 -> 1.42 2004-07-12 11:50:39 +00:00
Denis Peplin
69259ba006 Merge the following from the English version:
(new) -> 1.42 articles/Makefile
   1.25 -> 1.26 books/handbook/vinum/chapter.sgml

Submitted by:	Dmitry Morozovsky <marck@rinet.ru>
Obtained from:	The FreeBSD Russian Documentation Project
2004-07-12 11:33:45 +00:00
Denis Peplin
9c36dbe8e6 Add newly translated portbuild article.
Original revisions:

	1.1	Makefile
	1.3	article.sgml

Submitted by:	Dmitry Morozovsky <marck@rinet.ru>
Obtained from:	The FreeBSD Russian Documentation Project
2004-07-12 11:26:05 +00:00
Denis Peplin
b25e777ec2 Slightly improve fixed rules description for Biba 2004-07-12 09:45:11 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
7ef9c72e02 In IPv6 section:
- Add missing devicename tags
- Some punctuation and upper/lowercase fixes
2004-07-12 09:43:06 +00:00
Murray Stokely
2d783cc50f Sort SRCS. 2004-07-12 09:26:16 +00:00
Murray Stokely
71eb6d77a4 Add additional callout images. This allows us to use up to 15
callouts with consistent number icons.  Callouts above number 15 would
still be displayed in bracketed text.

Obtained from:	docbook-xsl distribution
Created by:	Dave Pawson
2004-07-12 08:37:46 +00:00
Alfred Perlstein
a82a9fd72d Document __FreeBSD_version bump for VFS_ROOT, vflush and kinfo_proc
changes.
2004-07-12 08:24:15 +00:00
Murray Stokely
9d58ee9ba0 Capitalize Ethernet. 2004-07-12 08:02:21 +00:00
Murray Stokely
bf58cc3177 Add colspec attributes so that tables are properly rendered in print. 2004-07-12 07:59:56 +00:00
Murray Stokely
e3caf28e18 Add missing frame='none' to two tables. 2004-07-12 07:40:51 +00:00
Murray Stokely
257aa7f2c6 Spelling corrections. 2004-07-12 07:26:10 +00:00
Murray Stokely
d1ec2ee4a0 Remove stub for Mini-cartridge section that has been here for at least
4 years.  No one is going to write this section anytime soon, it's not
really needed anyway, so remove the 'XXX' empty subsection and one
link to this empty section.
2004-07-12 07:15:49 +00:00
Murray Stokely
e72c968fbe Remove extraneous whitespace that misaligns the <programlisting>. 2004-07-12 07:06:47 +00:00
Murray Stokely
e55989777d Wrap long lines in <programlisting> and <screen> sections. These flow
over the page in print output, and make the user scroll in HTML
output.
2004-07-12 07:04:56 +00:00
Murray Stokely
d554acbbc3 Rewrite the synopsis. Merge two paragraphs into one. Start off this
chapter by talking about security features of FreeBSD, rather than the
history of the TrustedBSD project.
2004-07-12 05:29:37 +00:00
Murray Stokely
6ee331fa0a Technical corrections.
Confirmed with:	rwatson
2004-07-12 03:24:13 +00:00
Murray Stokely
f50407f8fc Use &tex; macro so that it can be rendered properly for print output. 2004-07-12 03:12:30 +00:00
Murray Stokely
a7df34cf30 Follow the conventions set out in the FreeBSD Doc Project Primer and
the O'Reilly word list :

'webpages' -> 'web pages'
'webserver' -> 'web server'
2004-07-12 02:59:57 +00:00
Murray Stokely
c3cfdf0dca * Notes in <warning> should not begin with 'Please note that'. The
<warning> tag already expresses this information and so the text will
  be rendered appropriately.
* Improve wording in synopsis.
* Remove redundant sentences and simplify section about what will not
  be covered in this chapter.
* Omit unnecessary words and improve grammar as appropriate
* Remove redundant paragraph.
* Use serial comma in list of elements, as mandated by doc project primer.
2004-07-12 02:55:07 +00:00
Murray Stokely
1643cf6500 * This chapter makes no mention of downloading -CURRENT or -STABLE
sources with CVSup, so remove that pre-requisite from the synopsis.

* Remove trhodes user id in a few examples with 'user1' and add a
  replaceable tag around this user id so that it is rendered in italics.

* Comment out a stub section that says something like "This should be
  written".  The text is quite good without it, and when this planned
  section is added it will be even better.  The Handbook is past
  the point where we should have 'This should be written' stub
  chapters or sections.
2004-07-12 01:45:27 +00:00
SUZUKI Koichi
53fbdcceb4 Fix Typos.
Sync the description of vfs.vmiodirenable in tuning.7 to original version.
2004-07-11 23:14:25 +00:00
Hiroki Sato
4fc606fda7 Use left justification for trademarks and abstract section
in the title page.
2004-07-11 16:49:53 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
2db28883ee Add a graphic version for a remaining ASCII art, in static routes
section.
2004-07-11 13:34:27 +00:00
SUZUKI Koichi
a764b55ba8 Fix typos.
Submitted by:   kano@na.rim.or.jp
2004-07-11 11:15:53 +00:00
SUZUKI Koichi
6c086e9b16 Fix typos.
Submitted by:   kano@na.rim.or.jp
Approved by:    kuriyama (mentor)
2004-07-11 09:46:46 +00:00
Marcel Moolenaar
66ad487878 Document __FreeBSD_version 502122. 2004-07-11 04:42:09 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
4b988db9ca MFen 1.124 --> 1.126 2004-07-10 21:31:55 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
3459f736c3 Fix a package name and add a missing ) 2004-07-10 21:00:13 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
09ad1fbbe3 MFen --> 1.138 2004-07-10 16:40:06 +00:00
Simon L. B. Nielsen
61e9777ed7 The architecture is called FreeBSD/i386, not FreeBSD/x86. 2004-07-10 13:05:40 +00:00
Hye-Shik Chang
5657d9a0f3 Update my UIDs. 2004-07-10 09:25:52 +00:00