callouts with consistent number icons. Callouts above number 15 would
still be displayed in bracketed text.
Obtained from: docbook-xsl distribution
Created by: Dave Pawson
4 years. No one is going to write this section anytime soon, it's not
really needed anyway, so remove the 'XXX' empty subsection and one
link to this empty section.
<warning> tag already expresses this information and so the text will
be rendered appropriately.
* Improve wording in synopsis.
* Remove redundant sentences and simplify section about what will not
be covered in this chapter.
* Omit unnecessary words and improve grammar as appropriate
* Remove redundant paragraph.
* Use serial comma in list of elements, as mandated by doc project primer.
sources with CVSup, so remove that pre-requisite from the synopsis.
* Remove trhodes user id in a few examples with 'user1' and add a
replaceable tag around this user id so that it is rendered in italics.
* Comment out a stub section that says something like "This should be
written". The text is quite good without it, and when this planned
section is added it will be even better. The Handbook is past
the point where we should have 'This should be written' stub
chapters or sections.
- CERT is no longer accepting subscriptions to his advisory mailing
list, fix this but keep a link to CERT site
- Use entity for security-notifications list instead of a link to the
mailing-lists section
- Some s/bind/BIND and other uppercase fixes
- Punctuations fixes
- Add missing tags and fix some tags
- DNS records type should not be tagged as varname, remove tags then.
- s/zonefile/zone file/ for consistency
* Remove 'as more features are added, they will be added here'. That
goes without saying for the entire Handbook.
* Break up a list of disagreeing clauses into two separate sentences.
* Replace a colon with a semicolon.
* Remove colorful language describing some users as irrational in
favor of more succinct exposition.
point of the Handbook, we should just say "install the sysutils/cvsup
package or port" and be done with it, rather than giving the user a
tutorial on installing software from ports every other paragraph when
a different port is mentioned.
Also, add 'frame="none"' to <informaltables> in this chapter.
can be scaled appropriately without running off the page when the
programlisting contents contains over 100 characters per line.
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in HTML and much better in print.
Also, add a colwidth attribute that makes the print output look better
and has no effect on the HTML output (browsers size the columns there)
