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Randy Pratt
c92fcdc0fa Fix typo for marking slice as bootable. A-->S
Submitted by:	milan_mlynarcik@hotmail.com
Approved by:	murray
2001-08-24 13:39:00 +00:00
Joseph Koshy
e45f6837b0 Add `Johannes 5 Joemann' for his extensive patches to the SML-NJ port. 2001-08-24 09:27:36 +00:00
Murray Stokely
f0042b1654 Reword a couple of sentences that I found very confusing. Often this
was due to missing words or sentences that made it very difficult to
understand the text.
2001-08-24 07:27:05 +00:00
Murray Stokely
9adf756449 pop -> POP 2001-08-24 06:59:07 +00:00
Murray Stokely
39da75d5ba lan -> LAN
Reword an informal question while I'm here.
2001-08-24 06:56:10 +00:00
Kazuo Horikawa
fa94710967 Catch up with 4.4-RC-20010824-JPSNAP 2001-08-24 04:22:29 +00:00
Valentino Vaschetto
f260262e67 Added sect1 on ccd
Reviewed by:	chern
2001-08-24 01:05:20 +00:00
Chern Lee
bfe5032a69 * Add information about NMBCLUSTERS/mbufs
* Add another item to the standard sypnosis
2001-08-23 23:11:29 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
fded897c40 Periods generally go outside of <ulink>.
PR:		29912
Submitted by:	Felix-Antoine Paradis <reel@freebsd-fr.org>
2001-08-23 22:06:11 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
1ec47d9140 Nuke a paragraph that doesn't make sene. 2001-08-23 21:23:03 +00:00
Murray Stokely
59f04914ee Point users to the automatically generated keyring for easy download.
Also fix the markup for two keys that I missed in a previous edit.
2001-08-23 08:24:07 +00:00
Murray Stokely
e90bee4e01 Add a new target to the Handbook makefile: 'pgpkeyring'.
This target finds all <programlisting role="pgpkey"> elements in the
Handbook and writes out a flat text file suitable for importing into
PGP or GPG.

This can be used in the web build to automatically update the public
keyring of FreeBSD developers.
2001-08-23 07:59:07 +00:00
Dirk Meyer
32d1e01323 addded: Thomas E. Zander <rriggs@f113.hadiko.de>
for port/grahics/mplayer*
2001-08-23 06:08:58 +00:00
Mike Barcroft
5c3cd78ad4 Correct the Committer Guide:
newsflash.sgml is now news.xml

Discussed with:	nik
2001-08-22 23:16:09 +00:00
Nik Clayton
8a0bc3bfb8 Discover the -s parameter to pkg_create, and remove the dependency on
installing the files before packaging them up.
2001-08-22 22:30:26 +00:00
Randy Pratt
36d29585cb Update security options image for release (4.4)
Approved by:	murray
2001-08-22 21:43:46 +00:00
Chern Lee
a14cad024a Change standard chapter sypnosis to form complete sentences:
Before reading this chapter you should:
 "understand"...
 "be familiar with"...
2001-08-22 21:40:11 +00:00
Chern Lee
ec971dcb65 Place a host -> gateway list into an informaltable. 2001-08-22 21:36:25 +00:00
Randy Pratt
9228cffe4f Add new section for configuring internet services (inetd).
Update security section to reflect options in 4.4

Approved by:	murray
2001-08-22 20:38:03 +00:00
Pete Fritchman
ec8da550a0 - add an entity for myself
- remove myself from the additional contributors section and add myself
  to the developers section

Reviewed by:	ade
2001-08-22 19:07:58 +00:00
Chern Lee
b3359c0e63 British English -> American English:
* organisation -> organization
* organise -> organize
* optimisation -> optimization
* optimises -> optimizes
* artefacts -> artifacts

Spelling:
* asociated -> associated
2001-08-22 18:12:57 +00:00
Murray Stokely
a75ba4dd47 Add a missing word. 2001-08-22 07:20:20 +00:00
Murray Stokely
3719fb1927 Add a standard synopsis. 2001-08-22 07:16:36 +00:00
Murray Stokely
38d20a3b6a Add standard synopsis. 2001-08-22 06:53:19 +00:00
Murray Stokely
45a6f3aa67 Standardize the synopsis. 2001-08-22 06:32:24 +00:00
Murray Stokely
bad8c085ff Standardize the synopsis. 2001-08-22 06:08:03 +00:00
Murray Stokely
c42ea2c2ae Terminate synopsis listitems with a period.
Also give more information about prerequisites :

 "* Understand Unix permissions and processes (Chapter 3)."

instead of :

 "* Read chapter 3"
2001-08-22 05:37:50 +00:00
Murray Stokely
a35f10b668 Standardize the synopsis. (List of what the reader will learn by
reading this chapter, and another list of what the reader is expected
to already know.)
2001-08-22 05:07:12 +00:00
Murray Stokely
2fa6b7ef3f Reword part of the synopsis in a slightly more formal way. Remove a
"Should you have any questions or suggestions, please email the
author" line that doesn't belong in an individual chapter.
2001-08-21 23:44:13 +00:00
Murray Stokely
141a46306d Fix typo to form a complete sentence. 2001-08-21 23:42:50 +00:00
Nik Clayton
09772d9161 Add in a reference to disk-layout.eps, replacing the ASCII art for non-text
users.

Add much more information about the process of labelling a slice to create
partitions.
2001-08-21 23:42:44 +00:00
Nik Clayton
cd53ebd94e Change the size of the root filesystem shown to 64MB. 2001-08-21 23:39:26 +00:00
Nik Clayton
5dac2ba06c List disk-layout.eps in IMAGES. 2001-08-21 23:38:28 +00:00
Nik Clayton
9b3c17ae99 EPS file (and it's Kontour original) that diagrams the relationship between
a disk, its slices, and its partitions.
2001-08-21 23:35:53 +00:00
Valentino Vaschetto
6f8e9237fc Close para and sect1 tags in regard to the "4.4-RC: errors in doc build"
thread in freebsd-doc.

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-21 20:16:45 +00:00
Kazuo Horikawa
384a778268 Revise Japanese wording 2001-08-21 06:14:26 +00:00
Kazuo Horikawa
a942ceccc1 Fix typo in macro:
o remove remaining .TP from mdoc manpage sasc.1
o replace .Qt (non-existent macro) with .Pq in make.conf.5
2001-08-21 03:41:38 +00:00
Chern Lee
34fbc5dd5e Cosmetic changes. Placed a couple lists into <informaltable>s. 2001-08-20 22:13:36 +00:00
Nik Clayton
1d69567324 Continue building on Randy's work, and document the installation process
some more.  Got as far as describing FreeBSD's Disk / Slice /
Partition / Filesystem model, and touring around FDisk.
2001-08-20 21:46:50 +00:00
Chern Lee
d9b35c6b35 Nitpick English changes to make the chapter more understandable. 2001-08-20 18:48:45 +00:00
Bruce A. Mah
3752f1a2de Add manpage entity for digictl(8). 2001-08-20 17:34:10 +00:00
Kazuo Horikawa
fa1120db43 Add missing .El. 2001-08-20 02:51:16 +00:00
Kazuo Horikawa
f336e6b58b Removal of arg for .Os.
Update of origianl reivsion number in comment.
2001-08-20 01:01:32 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
714709b545 Assorted mechanical fixes.
PR:		29806
Submitted by:	John Murphy <jfm@blueyonder.co.uk>
2001-08-19 23:58:56 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
fc6f13aedb Correct a typo.
PR:		29852
Submitted by:	Vladimir Tchoukharev <chu@h33.erkki.ton.tut.fi>
2001-08-19 23:54:35 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
a5259a5dfe Remove a duplicate word, and don't claim to be crazy enough to run
wu-ftpd.

PR:		29869
Submitted by:	Alex Kapranoff <alex@kapran.bitmcnit.bryansk.su>
2001-08-19 23:46:43 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
0e9f501c62 Add a missing period. 2001-08-19 23:43:57 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
900520b222 Note that the resolv.conf directive is "nameserver", not "name
server", add a missing word, and note that newsyslog starts counting
from 0.

PR:		29874
Submitted by:	Martin Heinen <mheinen0@wiesbaden-online.de>
2001-08-19 23:43:26 +00:00
Jim Mock
60858d58a9 pseudo-device bpfilter -> pseudo-device bpf
PR:		29872
Submitted by:	Dominic Marks <dominic_marks@btinternet.com>
2001-08-19 18:51:53 +00:00
Kazuo Horikawa
abe7e2aebf Add missing .El
Remove empty lines
Fix typo in macros

Reported by: groff -t -ww -z -mandoc -Tnippon -dlang=ja_JP.eucJP -mtty-char
2001-08-19 10:25:07 +00:00