- remove Maintainer email addresses due to poor SPAM to real
email ratio, warned developers@ a while ago
- http://www.freebsdmirrors.org/ -> http://mirrorlist.freebsd.org/
(maintainer losing control of freebsdmirrors.org zone)
- add access methods available to FTP site list (rsync/cvsup/http
available at some sites)
- minor freebsd->FreeBSD in URL
- "Top Level Domain" -> "Primary Mirror Sites" which (now) matches
sysinstall
Approved by: blackend (mentor)
version; fix a path to license.dat [1]
- Add some missing application tags and a missing word.
PR: docs/57624 [1]
Submitted by: Dan Pelleg <daniel+gnats@pelleg.org>
- Revise wording of some sentences
- Use <acronym> and <filename> tags
- Follow FDP on continuous repetition of &man.command.#;
- Write out numbers under 10
- Show an example of complete output of "ls -l" command
- Mention after successfully logging in, you will see the MOTD, and
the command prompt
- Remove misleading comment about how chmod ### can only "set and
assign" permissions, but not remove them.
- "CPU time evenly to each user" -> "CPU time fairly to each user"
- "permissions stored as two octets" -> "permissions stored as three
octets"
Sponsored by: FreeBSD Mall, Inc.
- possessive form it's -> its
- add serial commas
- remove an erroneous "for"
- kstash was renamed to k5stash on pre 5.X systems
- s/Kerberized/kerberized/
- Tell the reader he should ask The Mathworks for a native version
- Add more infos about Java support.
In SAP section:
- Add and remove wrong application & command tags
- more s/I/we and contractions removal
PR: docs/57025 [1]
Submitted by: Dan Pelleg <daniel+handbook@pelleg.org>
chapter. This information is repeated in more basic terms in the
Install chapter, so this more in depth explanation is better suited in
Basics.
Sponsored by: FreeBSD Mall, Inc.
(driver tested on i386 and sparc64 platforms)
- minor formatting fixes (add <example></example>)
- minor spelling/grammar fixes
Approved: blackend (mentor)
- Remove the text about keeping the trademark list in doc/ and the one
in www/ synchronized. The doc/ trademark list is too big, so it's
better just to add the needed trademark attributions in the www/
trademark file.
- Add a missing period in the VMware trademark attribution.
- Sort the entries in this file; somebody pass me an alphabet.
- Add missing username, command, application and filename tags
- Remove useless '-'
- s/export/EXPORT for consitency
- s/I/We, s/my/our
- Some little rewordings (well the content is often disappointing, but
I'm unable to do tests)
