The DNS and HTTP sections still need a good go-through.
Clarify the introductions to these sections.
Fix some acronyms along the way.
To be followed by a white-space fix.
Make it clearer when ppp.linkup is required.
This section still has to make it obvious how to actually use ppp once a basic configuration has been created.
The next few patches will shuffle content to organize it into various advanced configuration sections.
Add more to the intro to help make sense of how everything fits together.
General tightening and clarification in sections 26.2.2 and 26.2.3. White space fix won't occur until after next shuffling is complete.
Update misc items like supported FreeBSD versions. And GNOME development happens in SVN these days.
Replace FreeBSD with &os; [1]
Reviewed by: rene@
Suggested by: rene@ [1]
- replaces FreeBSD with entity
- adds acronym tags for instances of PPP that refer to the protocol, the instances that refer to the app still need to be fixed
- comments out "26.5.1. Using PPPoA with the Alcatel SpeedTouch USB" as the port it relies on has been broken for 4 years
- fixes internal links
This will be followed by a white space fix.
Made sure not to create any orphaned links. Some headings were better suited as tables which were created.
This is to be followed by a much needed white space fix.
- While here remove an old (circa 2009) twitter account.
Further work needs to be done on the community, support, and events pages.
Discussed with: bjk
Reviewed by: Allan Jude <freebsd@allanjude.com>
- moves the bpf warning higher as it applies to both
- reduces some headings
- removes redundancy and does general tightening
- clarifies some sections
- modernizes the server config file and expands on the descriptions
This chapter would benefit from extra callouts describing declarations and multiple subnets.
A subsequent patch will fix the white space.
- fixes acronym tags for DHCP, IP, and UDP
- removes superfluous headings
- shuffles existing content to organize it into a client section and a server section
- replaces deprecated dhcp.org address
Subsequent patches will clean up the white space and then move on to review and clarify the content in this section.
- replaces NISv1 Compatibility section with a note that FreeBSD uses v2
- renames Important Things to Remember to Adding New Users and places it as a subsection of Configuring the NIS Master Server
- removes the reference to auth.log which is now obsolete
- general tightening and clarification
A subsequent white-space patch will follow.
