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These changes look the most appropriate and appear in the handbook
this way.
Reviewed by: murray
new man page entity with the right format into the right place.
Revs. 1.82-1.84 of man-refs.ent are a good, although perhaps extreme,
example of what this is trying to prevent. check-manref.sh makes sure
that the entities in man-refs.ent are in the right order, which is
necessary for add-manref.sh to work properly.
NICE_HEADERS is a set of print-only enhancements, however the HTML
backend is invoked whenever an index is generated, so we should not
touch JADEOPTS directly and should instead modify the .tex-ps target
directly.
appropriate.
I've specifically left JKH's attribution for the "FreeBSD History"
section in tact, since this is a first person account of the history
of FreeBSD and as such the author needs to be identified in place.
This could probably be marked up differently, but its clear that this
section is different from all of the other "contributed by XXX" in the
Handbook.
Also add support for <sect1info> and <sect2info> to the stylsheet so
that these attributions get displayed as they have been.
call for help is listed on the third page of the printed Handbook or
on the top level index for the HTML version and it need not be
repeated here.
* End all list items with a period, not just some of them.
* Reword a couple of sentences so that they don't start with command
names.
* Reword a couple of confusing run-on sentences into more succinct
sentences with a separate <note> with additional information.
* Add a couple of missing words and remove some extra words to
construct sentences that make sense.
* Reworded paragraph with awkward "Either .. alternatively"
construction.
* Correct a reference to the Amanda port so that it looks good in
printed form. Dima's <port> tag would be helpful here.
* Fix a couple of other minor typos.
* Remove myself from list of chapter authors, since I didn't really add
very much.
* Add more <filename> and <varname> tags
* Use <varname> instead of <literal> around sysctl names
* Reword references to look better without the benefit of a hyperlink
- <para>Please see &man.ata.4;.</para>
+ <para>For more information, please see &man.ata.4;.</para>
* Use 'SoftUpdates' consistently.
* Saying that an "error message shows up in dmesg" is a bit cryptic for
new users, so explain that messages get sent to a system buffer that
is viewed with the dmesg command.
Placed applications in <application>
Placed commands in <command>
Placed hostnames in <hostid>
Placed usernames in <username>
Placed some terms in <literal>/<quote>
Places some commands in man entities
Changed some <filename> to <command> tags
Placed files in <filename>
Spelling:
linux -> Linux
pc -> PC
reckognized -> recognized
initialise -> initialize
behaviour -> behavior
mountpath -> mount path (to spell check nicely although mountpoint would
probably be more correct)
Reviewed by: murray
