Note that an <link linkend="portsnap">...</link> is temporarily
commemted out due to a not-translated-yet part in
cutting-edge/chapter.sgml.
1.287 -> 1.289 handbook/ports/chapter.sgml
Submitted by: Ryusuke Suzuki <ryusuke _at_ jp dot FreeBSD dot org>
Reference: [doc-jp-work 1935-1937]
- fill the gap from 800083 to 800085.
- correct the (now) 800086 entry.
- add the missing 800088.
- document that with 800089 we added UDP control blocks.
doc/de_DE.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml 1.1082 -> 1.1115
doc/de_DE.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/eresources/chapter.sgml 1.185 -> 1.195
Obtained from: The FreeBSD German Documentation Project
Contributed by: Benedict Reuschling
Note:
Now the German translation of the FAQ is up-to-date again thanks to the great job Benedict has done! :)
1. s/Internet Software Consortium/Internet Systems Consortium/
2. Tighten up a few sections, improve wording, modernize terminology
3. Remove references to the make-localhost program which is long gone [1]
4. Update the included named.conf file to match current reality
5. Change all references to default TTL in the example zone files to refer
to the TTL for a negative response
6. Simplify the CNAME example
7. Update URLs
PR: docs/122604 [1]
Submitted by: keramida [1]
is commemted out due to a not-translated-yet part in mirrors/chapter.sgml.
1.263 -> 1.274 handbook/ports/chapter.sgml
Submitted by: Ryusuke Suzuki <ryusuke _at_ jp dot FreeBSD dot org>
Reference: [doc-jp-work 1910, 1928, 1929]
and give an example. In practice, including GENERIC and then simply
providing a few additional options or devices is the preferred way to
configure kernels now, rather than writing them from scratch (except
in embedded environments). This text could probably use some
refinement.
Suggested by: Richard Clayton <richard.clayton at cl.cam.ac.uk>
users; only advanced users now compile kernels. Expand rationale for
building a custom kernel: unused features still take up memory that
could be used by applications.
This is a rather lengthy patch, that attempts to fix several problems:
- Reduce repetition. There are several paragraphs in the original text that are repeated throughout the sections
- Markup fixes. Replace single quotes with <literal> tags, add <acronym>s and several other changes to improve markup consistency
- Convert to passive voice where possible, eliminate few first person references
- Several grammar and language fixes
- The original text implied that the same TCP packet would go back and forth between source and destination. Rephrase relevant paragraphs to clarify these are different packets
- Includes many fixes submitted in a PR [1] and a link fix submitted on -doc [2]
- Numerous other smaller changes, too many to mention here
PR: docs/131568 [1]
Submitted by: Chris Pepper <pepper@cbio.mskcc.org> [1]
Submitted by: Phillip Nordwall <Phillip.Nordwall@wwu.edu> [2]
Reviewed by: trhodes, keramida
